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MultiTAZker — MLP FIM STARS Chapter-1 Dreams Page-2
Published: 2013-08-15 06:23:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 17058; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 62
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I think I've put my all into this one...I'm a little tired as I'm typing this and I just want you all to know that I'll keep going along with the story and try to make it as interesting as I can. I know it probably won't be as well known as Fallout Equestria, but I'm willing to take a shot and try to overtake it... hopefully. Well it's 2:30 A.M. where I'm at right now so I'll hit the sack and add a better description tomorrow...
Just please give the story a chance... Goodnight.
Edit: Style changed and improved for a slightly better quality.
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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you
only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-
years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She
got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that
best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as
possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in
agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the
person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room
and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten
other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake.
apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have
the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain
u will see a little dead girl in your room
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Cool.
I've been wanting to test out my new holy sword.
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huh... you know looking through this comic again I realize how in the right context you could make a parody thingy of your own comic where nova's flying through space while high af. and nova is spouting random sciency nonsense about the dimensions of a banana while super nova is busy trying to eat an imaginary banana. this needs to happen taz. get on that.
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Yet. for that dream to come true. Super Nova is gonna have to beat or if feeling fairly generous, try to share the title with Rainbow Dash the current high flyer of Equestria!!! 
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Well, don't just leave us hanging. Tell us how the first seven models went! I mean, you're not dead, so the stories must be funny.
So what's wrong with your wings? They look like the right size, so you can't be suffering like pennae vegrandis, and that's the only wing disease I know.
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So NacDonald's has opened a joint in Ponyville?
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Ahh it seems you've noticed. Good eye!
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Shouldn't there be some wing extensions to help with the altitude thing?
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She actually can't really fly due to a disorder that causes her to clasp her wings tightly around her body whenever she decides to open them. Now her wings are only able to indicate emotions like fear, surprise, wingboners, etc...
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Hm, so it's even worse than i first thought. With the setup like this, she's more likely to end up with her muzzle on the ground, or at most going forward very fast (if she put on some skates).
Having 2 turbines one on each side of her body (or just one either in straight in front or straight behind her) would help with the tendency of pitching down while in the air (but not much help with her feet still dragging on the ground); but would still not provide any lift.
In order to succeed, if she can't count on her organic wings, she'll need some artificial ones; and to get to very high altitudes those wings need to be much longer than common pegasus wings.
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Oh, it seems you have a good understanding of her situation!
Great explanation btw! I took into account that the world of Equestria lacks more advanced electrical technology like satellites and computers so I restricted her to creating only 2 by 4 inventions. She isn't very smart actually - she's just a dreamer who wishes to fly as high as outer space.
P.s. - the booster on her back is Mark 8 - the Mark 8 standing for Apollo 8.
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2 by 4? Hm, perhaps a steampunk ornithopter backpack rig that outputs the steam to a hot air balloon? Though i guess considering she isn't supposed to be smart, perhaps we'll be seeing lots of obviously flawed simpler designs before she even takes off... perhaps stuff inspired by those "birdman" competitions?
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Yes, you'll definitely see many flawed inventions from her. Hope you stick with the story. I'll try my best to make it interesting!
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Looking forward to new pages
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Glad to see im not the only night owl posting willy nilly. Unless you arent in my timezone...
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