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MuseofMemory — Better Off Dead
Published: 2007-12-29 05:39:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Nobody cares whats wrong?
So why should I?
Maybe it’s a sign
That it’s time to die.

My tears have been cried
There are none left to shed
I have no more doubt
That I’d be better off dead

There will be no love lost
There was none any way
Just a moment of pain
Seems a small price to pay

I’ve made my decision
I’ve figured out how
My goodbyes are said
It won’t be long now…
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Comments: 4

RockerByBaby [2008-02-22 14:14:53 +0000 UTC]

This is very emotional and deep, gotta love it!



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screaming4reason [2008-02-12 16:51:32 +0000 UTC]

that little bit of pain is a world of torment for the faces you dont see
-G

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Talk3talk4 [2008-02-09 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Many people care....believe me.

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BarTouv [2008-01-20 20:30:03 +0000 UTC]

wow that really deep. that poem is amazing i just hope you wont act upon it. i think the last line should be changed cause it dose not rime, i know you could argue that the last line not riming is symbolic to the act of suicide or what not but i still think it should be changed, but still wow great poem

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