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I am pleased that after quite some time I can at last write a story in a list of chapters which can finally come to a close.
(Just in case I confuse readers, the white one on the left is Provisor, the black one on the right is Messor, and they are not simply a bunch of disembodied heads as shown on this post)
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Story
As Provisor attempts to commit his heinous act upon the witch, the dragon and the mastermind, it is the dragon who steps fourth, and speaks out!
Wyrm Lung; "I only see you as the failure, Provisor!"
Provisor doesn't even look at Wyrm Lung as he speaks.
Provisor; "I wasn't talking to an inferior, inhuman, retarded, putrid, decrepit worm, Fiendish! And that particular worm of yours is to be silenced for his insolence, when he suffers alongside you and Vindicta!"
Provisor then splits his right arm in half like a pair of crocodile jaws. From with inside his arm, flail out dozens of horrifically mutilated innocent victims, screaming in excruciating agony and desperately struggling to escape... And all of them directly resemble Vindicta Witchcraft! Each of them are ripped and torn asunder by the firearms that Fiendish, Vindicta, Wyrm and their army tried to use against Provisor! Generally, Fiendish hardly expressed his sadness that much in his life, yet seeing this caused him to fall into a mental breakdown as he backs away in panic, regret and depression while at the same time, he and the equally depressed Vindicta try to comfort each other!
Provisor; "I have to thank you for giving me such a glorious shower of lead, copper and napalm, it helps with the torture upon those who have never escaped from me!"
Master Fiendish; "W-what have we done!? This can't be real!! I HAD NO IDEA, I'M SORRY!!!"
Vindicated Witchcraft; "It's not your fault, I didn't know either!"
Taking full advantage of their vulnerability as the two take pity on the damned, Provisor opens his fanged jaws, extends a giant leech like mass of a tongue, and laps up the tears of both his victims.
Provisor; "Mmm, now that's what I love so much about my favorite hobby, such wonderful tears... Ah, yes, I forgot to mention to you, Vindicta! You are a descendant from a long lineage of Vindicta Witchcrafts, from past Planets of Fairy Tales, which I have created, studied, toyed, tortured, and torn asunder since the time the galaxies have formed within this universe, a universe that is but one within countless multiverses, metaverses, xenoverses, all of them within this hyperverse that is Omniversially marked, as my property! Harnessing the powers of the Angels and Demons that gouvern the stability of worlds, from the Hyperverse to this Universe, I have manipulated your existence countless times over, destroying previous Planets of Fairy Tales and every time a Vindicta Witchcraft gets, quote-on-quote, "Killed" they are replaced by another Vindicta Witchcraft! Because in truth, I cannot help but resurrect my Vindicta Witchcrafts from proper damnation in Hell, and have them suffer even further by my hand! And with each previous Vindicta Witchcraft slain, I further enhance the suffering, though before, only by a faction! Now, I am thinking of doing the next reincarnation of you a Thousand fold of unspeakable atrocities, that will make even the strongest of will squirm in revoltion, due to new and far more...explicit...content within my next stories! And I shall also begin a new lineage, a new lineage to join you in your suffering, a lineage of MASTER FIENDISH!!!"
Having lost their will to speak up due to this trauma, Fiendish and Vindicta can only embrace each other in despair as Provisor is about to strike them down by his hand! However, still seeing the light of hope, and furious over hearing such profanity of this heinous sight and the putrid racist filth being spat out, Wyrn Lung barges in the way between the corrupted creator and the closest people he could ever have to a true family.
Wyrm Lung; "What you just puked out at us, only enforces my understanding to what your sister meant, when she mentioned to me about your crimes against the cosmos!"
Provisor; "Fiendish, Vindicta, what the Hell is this worm saying!?"
Further enraged at such waspish arrogant belittling from Provisor, Wyrm's temptations to try and brutally maul this bastard raises to its peak! Yet logic rules out his potential wrath when he remembered the last time he tried to do so, due to his mistake of underestimation. Instead, he sees something, raises his hand and points up behind Provisor!
Wyrm Lung; "I bet those Universal Angels and Demons have heard exactly what you had just said at us right now, since the moment you started talking about Vindicta's lineage and without the recordings of the Jade Emerald Cane!"
Provisor turns to look above from behind, and his Sadism is quickly replaced by himself flinching back as if he were a wanted criminal, exposed and caught red handed by the law! Emerging from high up from the heavens behind Provisor, stood Messor! Emerging to her left are all of the demons of the major forces of this universe, while to her right, the Angels of the same major forces. And from behind them, emerge the Twin Angel and Demon Possessors of Power, Sentience and Prescience and their subordinate Channelers who charge the lesser Universal angels and demons with the power needed in what is yet to come! Provisor takes notice and his foul attitude turns to fear and dread as Messor holds up high the Jade Emerald Cane of Prescience! The Emerald Sphere projects an enormous hologram in which the entire population of the Planet of Fairy Tales can bare whiteness. And what is shown is all of the heinous violations committed by Provisor as his avatar, against every one of these angels and demons for his petty intentions.
Channelers and Universal Angels and Demons; "Judgement shall now commence upon this failure in complying to the rules and regulations required to access this universe as an avatar!"
Angel Possessor; "You, Avatar of Provisor, have stolen from us the powers we hold responsible for in this Hyperverse!"
Demon Possessor; "And wasting our power over petty reasons is supposed to be our purpose, NOT YOURS!"
Provisor shudders in fear, realizing that this could mean the end for the avatar he has taken form of, as he attempts to trash talk his way out at Messor.
Provisor; "Such a shame, Sister, that you are to rat out on your own brother!"
Messor; "The greatest shame on this universe is you, Avatar of Provisor, the so-called "Creator Deity of the Yang!" and my poor excuse for a brother!
All of the Angels and demons raise their hands and start absorbing back the powers Provisor had stolen from them and squandered on creating his stories of suffering! Provisor realizes that once drained, Messor will try and erase his avatar from existence. Desperate to conclude his sick story, Provisor not only yanks back those powers, but he starts stealing even more power from all of his new assailants! Both angels and demons alike frantically struggle to yank it back until all of them, even the Angel and Demon Possesors, are drained and rendered vulnerable to a dirty little tactic of Provisor's! The deranged avatar opens up wormholes leading to each angel and demon, hurls countless chords from his left hand to hook their flesh and organs with, and he starts violently thrashing them about like marionettes! This causes disruption upon the universe, as the balance of what keeps it stable is hurled into complete violence!
Provisor; "PLAY! PLAY! PLAY YOU SCOURGE OF SCUMMY PUPPETS, FOR I AM YOUR MASTER, PULLING ON THE STRINGS!!!"
As Provisor is distracted in the power struggle, Messor snatches Provisor by his bladed chin and passes through the gap in his forehead a ruby, a sapphire, some Nephrite as well as Jadeite and the nearly shattered Jade Emerald Cane! From out the other side of the gap, are forged a long red staff, a short blue wand and a newly forged green cane! Outraged by Messor literally using his head for such, Provisor attempts to lash out and stop the process with his right arm full of suffering damned, but Messor dodges just in time and throws the three new relics to Fisndish, Vindicta and Wyrm Lung!
Messor; "It took me a lot of effort to uncover the other two, but I give each of you these as a last resort for your existence, take full advantage of them!"
With that, Messor tackles Provisor by trying to literally lock her head into his, like two Irish elks to form the Yin Yang and cause Provisor a handicap in the struggle, while he attempts to hurl his damned merged victims from his right arm like a fishing net at the trio! Yet Fiendish snatches back his Jade Emerald Cane just before the three get smothered and uses it's power to help his friends and himself evade any of Provisor's further attacks! And no longer does the cane need to channel it's energies into the Jade trinkets Fiendish still wears.
Master Fiendish; "Vindicta, the wand!"
Vindicta catches the wand from midair, made of Sapphire and blue Nephrite and Jadeite, as it automatically reveals to her its purpose of the mind, emotion and soul! This gives her the idea of spreading this wand's power to free all of her past lineage from Provisor's arm and liberates them from their pain, while the wand itself channels her knowledge of the magic arts into the minds of her ancestors! Messor dislodges her Yin head from from Provisor's Yang head to give way as Provisor spots his former victims learning to conjure their new magic spells of fire, ice and lightening, before the entire mass of them all turn on their former tormentor, all of them baring a furious grudge! Provisor starts to feel a bit unnerved by this change.
Provisor; "What the Hell are you all looking at me for you bunch of bitches?-"
Vindicta Witchcraft; "OPEN FIRE AT THE ROTTEN BASTARD!!!"
The entire Vindicta Witchcraft lineage interrupts any more of Provisor's bag of insults at them by opening fire at their cruel abuser in his ugly Yang face with all of their magic attack spells! The blast causes him to flail about in pain, yet unlike before, the avatar this time is not enjoying it one bit! This leaves Provisor wide open as Wyrm Lung recovers the staff that had planted itself to the ground during the throw. The staff fuels Wyrm Lung with an immense surge of strength, durability and reality, immediately explaining its obvious purpose to the dragon, as he pulls off a wickedly toothy grin of excitement at Provisor and starts laughing!
Provisor; "YOU WILL NOT DARE STRIKE YOUR LORD AND DESIGNER WITH THAT THING, YOU DAMN DIRTY DRAGON!-"
Wyrm Lung; "HERE'S A DOSE OF WHAT YOUR OWN RACISM FEELS LIKE!!!"
The dragon launches himself into the air, charges his staff with all it's power, and brutally crashes it into Provisor in the jaws, smashing his teeth and causing an tremendous shockwave that erupts the earth around them! Yet Wyrm certainly isn't satisfied with just one mighty blow, as he proceeds to strike down Provisor in the face again, and again, and again, etc as if he were pummeling a piñata without wearing blindfolds! Next was Fiendish's turn as he realizes he needs to aid Messor, so he pulls out one of his Tommy guns and fires at will upon Provisor's face! As Provisor is distracted, Fiendish uses his cane of speed, space and time on his former arch-nemesis to help match her up against her brother!
Provisor; "ARE YOU ACTUALLY HELPING MY ASSHAT OF A SISTER AGAINST ME!?-"
Master Fiendish; "Rather the devil that is her than the devil that is you!"
Messor strikes Provisor in the back, just like he had done with her, and the corrupted creator avatar slowly starts to phase out, that is until he violently swings his sharp pointy chin into Messor's eye, causing her to scream in pain disrupting the process! However, due to this distraction, Provisor looses his grip of the powers he had stolen, the Angels and demons he had been torturing finally recover back to full strength as they had once had before Provisor's invasion! They all break free from the chords and this time, they directly assault the convict! Unlike before, Provisor is actually affected by these far more powerful assaults and is finally taking real damage!
Provisor; "AAAH! GET OFF ME!! GET THE HELL OFF OF ME!!!"
Attacked from all sides and flailing like a lunatic, Provisor grows desperate and attempts to exterminate the entire past lineage of Vindicta Witchcrafts' ancestors to get them off his back! He snatches each them in his unnatural powers and hurls them all into Messor as she tries to use her destructive barrier against him! All of Vindicta's ancestors phase out of existence within the blink of an eye!
Provisor; "And good riddance, plus their pain needed to end anyway, right sister!?
Messor; "YOU STUPID COWARDLY ASSHOLE! THEY WERE LIBERATED FROM THEIR SUFFERING!! NEVER DARE USE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF MY POWER AS YOUR SELFISH MEANS TO AN END!!!"
Messor joins Wyrm Lung in their direct assault on Provisor, as the avatar of the Destroyer Deity uses her power to levitate all of Wyrm Lung's heavy artillery, tanks, missiles, bombs, warplanes and warships! She aims their weapons true and opens fire at Provisor with all of them! At the same time, Wyrm continues his barrage of strikes at Provisor for the staff enables him invulnerability against the firearms as well, and he even uses its powers to warp reality, distorting and further damaging his arch-nemesis! Wyrm even uses the lessons in stealth that Fiendish taught him and dodges Provisor's retaliations while jabbing at pressure points within his foe's anatomy!
Provisor; "I CANNOT BELEVE I'M GETTING MY ASS HANDED TO SUCH A LOWLY PARASITIC EXCUSE OF A-"
Wyrm Lung; "OH, JUST SHUT THE HELL UP AND CHOKE ON THIS ALREADY!!!"
Wyrm Lung shuts Provisor up by shoving his staff down his gullet! Yet simultaneously, Provisor keeps attempting to snatch Wyrm Lung's staff and tries to warp the dragon's body into slop! Vindicta spots what Provisor is attempting on her friend and fires her wand against him, smothering Provisor's mind with its sentient attributes to manipulate the manipulator's thoughts and emotions with Vindicta's own memories of her suffering!
Provisor; "WHAT IS THIS HORRIBLE FEELING OF GUILT AND REGRET TINGLING THROUGH MY MIND!?!?!? STOP THE PAIN!!! GET IT OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!"
Vindicta Witchcraft; "THIS IS WHAT IT FEELS LIKE TO BE TORTURED BY YOUR HAND, I THOUGHT YOU'D BE LAPING IT UP AS WELL, ABOMINATION!"
Yet at the same time, Provisor attempts to extend a part of his body into tentacles that emit the sickly radiation of Romance that is still highly toxic to Vindicta, so he can proceed to snatch her and drag her into himself to disrupt the mind manipulation! Yet Vindicta's wand shields her from the toxin, and learning the skills in martial arts from Wyrm Lung, she manages to fend off the tentacles! Provisor withdrawals his arm and attempts to try and open a portal so that he can extend a dozen chords to attempt lacerating Vindicta so that he can play her like a marionette, just like he did to the Universal Angels and Demons! Master Fiendish spots this and uses his cane to open his own portal to teleport the hooks away from Vindicta and right into Provisor's face, causing him to let out a scream in pain, before using his cane to then bend space and time to slow Provisor's actions to a mere crawl, causing his entanglement by his own hooks even more excruciating! At the same time he uses the magic spells he learned from Vindicta to enhance his Tommy gun to fire far more powerful shots at the corrupted Deity, further helping Messor, Vindicta and Wyrm in their assault!
Provisor; "I ETERNALLY REGRET CREATING YOU, I SHOULD NEVER HAVE CREATED YOU, YOU DECREPIT CARTOON REGECT!!!"
Master Fiendish; "And you just gave me a reason to thank you for bringing me into existence, you unhinged freak!"
As Provisor hurls himself into a temper tantrum under the immense barrage, Fiendish then opens a portal to his throne room where the wagon of nuclear warheads, as well as his train reside! Messor notices this and lends some advice.
Messor; "Fiendish, let Wyrm Lung's staff absorb the energy of the nukes and the Universal Angels and Demons will further charge it's power! I'll send Vindicta with you as well while I hold off my stupid brother!"
Messor levitates Wyrm and Vindicta and throws them to Fiendish out of Provisor's reach as the Avatar of the Yin once again locks her bladed face into the Avatar of the Yang! Fiendish takes Wyrm's staff and like a magnet, the artifact rips open the warheads without even detonating them and absorbs all of its contents, concealing its radiation from within!
Master Fiendish; "Thanks, and I've got an idea on what to use for extra thrust and force!"
Messor, along with all of the lead Angels and Demons resume their assault on Provisor, bombarding him with projectile attack after projectile attack, as Provisor no longer has the capability to steal anyone's powers, until the sound of a locomotive whistle can be heard! Still thrashing Messor about like wild boar trying to throw off a pit bull, Provisor tries to get a view of where that sound came from. To his horror, he discovers Master Fiendish's train, driving inside is the mastermind himself, who is using his Jade Emerald Cane of Prescience to handicap his arch-nemesis' movements while fiering his Tommy gun and drive his train without the need for a railway, straight towards Provisor! On top of the train is Vindicta Witchcraft, using her Jade Sapphire Wand of Sentience to subdue Provisor's mind to only have humiliating thoughts of being a damsel in distress, while simultaneously firing a mounted, magically enhanced auto-reloading 8.8cm flak 36 at Provisor's face! And finally, at the pilot of the train, Wyrm Lung was clinging on with his talons and readying his Jade Ruby Staff of Power, as the Angels and Demons turn their attention to channeling even more energy into the weapon, and at the same time, Wyrm breaths his most powerful fire breath ever at the target! Until this moment, Wyrm Lung's army hesitated on what to do, but once they saw their Three monarchs working together to deliver the decisive blow, their morale returns and they all open fire once again at their arch nemesis!
Powerless, trapped and completely exposed like a mastodon stuck in the La Brea Tar Pits, Provisor, no longer the arrogant almighty Avatar he was before, freaks out and struggles like vermin to escape from Messor, the Angels and Demons, and his inevitable fate at the hands of his own creations!
Messor; "I HAVE YOUR TARGET PINNED, FORGET ABOUT MY WELL BEING AND STRIKE THIS BASTARD WITH ALL YOUR MIGHT!"
Provisor; "I AM YOUR DEITY OF DEITIES, I AM YOUR LORD OF LORDS, AND I AM YOUR KING OF KINGS UPON ALL OF YOU WORTHLESS SUBJECTS!!!!!!!"
Master Fiendish decides, before the final blow is stuck, to think of a comeback to counter such bullshit. Using his cane, Fiendish freezes space and time around him, right to the point where Messor had stabbed her target over millions of times, Vindicta had just fired one more artillery round while continuing to channel humiliating thoughts from her wand, and Wyrm had ended his fire breath to make way for his finishing move upon Provisor. Taking his "time" in this frozen world of statues, Fiendish trots up to Provisor, walks up his arm like a ramp, and stands on his arch nemesis' shoulder. Mockingly, Fiendish twirls his beard with his cane and puts a hand to Provisor's ear as he answers to this sorry excuse for a creator, in one simple sentence.
Master Fiendish; "You are nothing more than just one very shabby old villain who has absolutely no clue what True Love is!"
Thinking that Provisor would not have noticed what he had just said, Fiendish trots back into his train, and ending the time freeze with his cane, the assault can come to its conclusion. Yet just as time slowly returns to normal, Provisor turns his face directly towards Fiendish, baring a grudge more furious than ever. And to Fiendish's shock, it is as if Provisor was just about to lash out at that insult by saying;
"I HEARED THAT!!!"
Yet it is too late for the pure evil one, as the dragon batters up and lands a direct hit upon Provisor to the face, like Babe Ruth! This causes a tremendous impact of a densely collapsed and highly concentrated explosion the size of a basketball, as the atom is split right into Provisor's head, rotting his body with the radiation! Both Provisor, along with Messor still lodged to his head, blasts off across the entire cosmos, to the very ends of the Universe! The shockwave was so tremendous, that the Angels and Demons had to use their powers to keep it from destroying what is left of the Planet of Fairy Tales and the rest of what's inside the universe and neutralize any lethal radiation from lingering around by temporarily warping the struck Yin Yang avatars into an astral plane! Both avatars of Provisor and Messor rip through the fabrics of the universe, tearing an enormous gap revealing the hyperverse they all live in! Suddenly, just as the primary trio leave their train, a cosmically tremendous hand snatches both avatars and an even more cosmically tremendous Yang shaped head, bares a hideous glare upon the Planet of Fairy Tales! It is the TRUE Provisor, and he is furious at what had happened as he crushes both diminutive avatars to their demise! Everyone in this universe, especially Vindicta, Wyrm and Fiendish, quiver in horror!
Provisor; "Useless, disposable avatars... I will repeat what I had said gain to this vile speck of an excuse for a universe! I am your Deity of Deities, I am your Lord of Lords, and I am your King of Kings upon all of you worthless subjects! AND I WILL NOT BE HUMILIATED BY A SUBHUMAN WITCH, A DRAGON SCUM AND A MOTHER F###-ING HAS-BEEN MELODRAMATIC MUSTACHE-TWIRLING CARTOON VILLAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
As Provisor reaches out his bladed hand into the universe to try and snatch his prey, the trio of minor villains desperately try to fend Provisor off with the combined power of all three of their artifacts, while all of the Angels and Demons frantically struggle to shut the gap ripped open in their universe! Suddenly, just as all hope seemed lost, another gigantic arm wraps around Provisor's neck in a chokehold and violently yanks the evil Deity of the Yang away from the universe! It's Messor in her true form, carrying out one final deus ex machina through divine intervention, for her war against Provisor is far from over!
Messor; "You dare destroy my AVATAR!?!?!?"
The two furiously brawl each other across the hyperverse, laying waste to everything in their wake, until they rampage through the fabrics of the entire Concept World into the Omniverse, where their wrath slowly vanishes into the distance! The Curse of Love, being misused as a Destroyer Weapon of Hatred, is no more as its dark toxic power disperses from the universe! After that, the Angels, Demons and the primary trio of Villains use the powers they wield to close the torn gap in their universe. As the Cosmic Angels and Demons return to their basic duties restoring balance to their hyperverse, certain that the threat has been dealt with, Master Fiendish and the rest of the survivors on the Planet of Fairytales erupt in celebration!
Master Fiendish; "We won! We actually won! Muah-HuHuHu-HoHoHo-HAHAHAHAHA!"
They all roared with joy, and then out of nowhere, to Wyrm Lung's disbelief, Fiendish and Vindicta embraced each other with a kiss!...
Wyrm Lung; "...Vindicta, I thought you said Fiendish is like the brother you never had!"
Just remembering such, both embracers immediately cancel out that kiss and wipe their lips with their sleeves.
Vindicta Witchcraft; "I-I-I have no idea what got over us!"
Master Fiendish; "...Well... I once heard after a great conflict, about a random sailor who grabbed a random nurse and they both smooched, because "Thank God the War is Over!"
All three Villains laugh and continue their celebration for their universe had finally been liberated from the eternal suffering by Provisor's hand. However, it was not without a vow of silence, and using the staff, the wand and the cane, the Three of them forge a cemetery and a memorial to those who have died by Provisor's hand as well as by their hand due to them being under Provisor's manipulation.
In particular, Master Fiendish crafted a statue of Vindicta's mother, her father, her step-sister and her ex-spouse in memory of the loving family she could have had.
Master Fiendish; "I was too harsh on them when I demanded who the fiend behind their pain was, I should have felt for them what they truly wanted for you, Vindicta."
Vindicta holds Fiendish's hand in approval as she cries.
Vindicta Witchcraft; "I felt for them...thank you for giving them your respect."
Wyrm Lung; "It's very honorable that you have suggested we do this in memory..."
Wyrm Lung stands beside the both of them, never really understanding the tragedy of it all in this light before. Yet civilization needs to be rebuilt.
Wyrm Lung; "...Yet we'll need to start construction soon, our old kingdom is now in ruin and we cannot just rule over a desolate plane."
Vindicta Witchcraft; "Wyrm's right, Fiendish, where and when will we start our new reign?"
Upon hearing that, Master Fiendish pulls off a wide grin, tips his hat and twirls his mustache.
Master Fiendish; "There are no more heroes, no damsels in distress, nor any rival villains, and not even the powers of True Love can stand in our way since we all know it's real meaning. So being such Villain Archetypes as the Dragon Conqueror, the Vengeful Sorceress, and the Mustache-Twirling Mastermind... Let's all take over the world together!"
The End
And for the moment, I don't really know any other song to seal the "happily ever after" of this story, other than the MiatriSs remix of DAGames' Gospel of Dismay (Both Lyrics or Instrumental);
Master Fiendish, Wyrm Lung, Vindicta Witchcraft, Messor and Provisor all belong to .
Edit; I have made a few changes with this final chapter due to certain parts to better end the story in full circle, feel free to critique on this series by the way to help me further tie in a few loose ends.
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Comments: 5
AudeS [2017-09-04 09:07:48 +0000 UTC]
This is most certainlya very, very good ending to this story, as the three villainous antiheroes fight against Provisor, and honestly, the imagery is grotesque, as you realize that he did this stuff countless times over to make countless incarnations of Vindicta suffer and with her countless versions of this one world. The good part is, in his villainous speech, Provisor basically confessed everything, and may I say the responses of the Angels and Demons were pretty good, with the demons having a nice spice of cynism and sarcasm to them. And the battle, it was pretty darn epic how Provisor was defeated by tasting his own bitter medicine. And overall the delivery of everyone was pretty entertaining, as they all make Provisor's day the worst he ever had, by inflicting every bit of pain he ever gave.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to AudeS [2017-09-05 20:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, I really wanted this story of Master Fiendish to go out with a bang!
I think I made my worst and biggest failure of a Villain yet with Provisor, as his ultimate weakness is that he obsesses way too much on going out of his way to be as infuriatingly and as passionately despised as possible and boastfully gloating about it to cripple his victims, not taking any second thought that divine judgement might take notice of this and rain down retribution upon his sorry ass.
As for the war in this last chapter, I inspired it from the Infinity Gauntlet when Thanos took on the Cosmic entities, and a lot of these old cartoons from the 20s and 30s where a Big Bad jerk makes a hated wretch out of him/herself so much what everyone unites and rises up against that said big bad. A lot of fantasy stories about The Chosen One would be over a lot more efficiently if all of the enemies of the Dark Lord were to unite and stand against him/her as oppose to one runt defeating him in the stupidest of ways. I'm glad you enjoy how the angels and demons respond as well, since even both sides would rather join forces together against a violator.
Actually, when I wrote the fight against Provisor, I focused so much on how Wyrm Lung, Vindicta Witchcraft and Messor fights him that I nearly obscured Master Fiendish as just a minor combatant on the side lines, which is why I edited it so that although he did not strike Provisor down with the final blow, Master Fiendish was the one who crippled his over-bloated ego.
Plus the only reason I had Master Fiendish and Vindicta Witchcraft kiss after Provisor's defeat was as a parody of the V-J Day in Times Square as the mistakingly romantic kissers in the photo were complete strangers who were simply happy that the entire conflict of WWII had ended.
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Mustache-Twirler In reply to SwordSparks [2017-08-27 14:01:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, I wanted this ending to go on a high note, and I can take a break after completing my story.
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SwordSparks In reply to Mustache-Twirler [2017-08-28 00:58:33 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome.
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