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mutatedpie — Shain - Finished
Published: 2004-08-13 22:14:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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Whoo I actually colored this. Once again, I'm too lazy to put a background in but I might, eventually. If I feel like it. It's a finished copy of Shain. Yay.Took a good three hours too color also and a hour to draw theerfore, took four hours. (:
I guess I like the watercoloring type of details but somehow I'm not satisfied. Never am though. xD
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I like the way the body of the girl is twisted, this work is probably the most natural in your gallery. A bit more perspective and a little less blur and you've nailed it!
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Interesting fabric texture. Her clothes look very fluffy... Her hair looks the same. Her shoulder attaching to the neck is a little high.
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i like the pic but the color composition you chose for her clothing........a little too dull maybe. maybe if you mixed the shirt with black and red or the outfit to match her hair it would have more of a dramatic effect. again you might want to study anatomy of the woman's body shape compared to a guy's, something i need to do deeper study of. other than that i like the picutre.
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the perportions are a little out, the lower body is bigger than the the upper body and head butid gives the impression of us looking up at her which looks good
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nice 
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Very cool coloring and pose and the wrinkles in her skirt are very well made.
Her boobs look weird tough... I can't pinpoint exactly what looks weird tough 0_0
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Thank you.
And maybe I can try figuring it out eventually to fix it. ^^
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The overall proportion look good and the coloring in general is nice. I would suggest either doing sharper outlines or softening the netting. The two styles clash a bit. Still, nice job
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Thanks for the suggestion. ^^
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The water-color coloring looks good on her. The shading is very well done. I like the fishnets too. They look great.
Onto the constructive criticism.
Her breasts seem to be one solid mass across her chest. I think that you should add some lines of indentation in between them, or perhaps a little bit more shading there to add depth.
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I like her build. She's got curves! lol. Her shoulders seem a little big, but everything else is well done.
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Oh of course. xD Yeah the shoulders I actually noticed after I finished coloring but I'm just afriad to change anything to where it will go way off proportion. Although thanks.
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No problem...
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Yeah so do I and then half the time it's too late to fix therefore I grow to hate the picture which doesn't help. xD
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oo oo i really like the fact that she's heavier than those two pound anthros..i love this! ^^
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Buuuut she's not supposed to be. xD She's supposed to be the smallest but actually if I changed it, it would've been way off proportion.
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It looks waaay better when it's printed on paper though.
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well maybe i'll see it on paper...
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Yes, because it looks better. xD
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yeap...I have to agree with that one..
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Pff. That...doesn't matter. xD It's good and that's final. x)
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Does too and no it's not. xD
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Does not. x) And yes it is, damnit. xD
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Does not and yes. And we're going to be doing this until we go to Ireland. xD
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Does too and no. xD Yes we are but hell that's okay. (:
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Does not and yes. xD And yes. Good way to pass the time. (:
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Does too and no. xD Yes it is. (:
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Does not and yes. xD Mhm. (:
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Does too and no. You know what? Shut up. xD I win anyways because I said so so ha. (:
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Does not and yes and no. xD And nope. I win. (:
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Does too, no, and yes. (: Yeees and no you don't.
Damn we're going to have too many yes or no answers going to fight over. Yay. xD
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Does not, yes, and no. Noooo and yes I do. (:
Yep. I'm pretty much just saying the opposite of what you are. xD
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Does too, yes, and no.. yes and no you don't. xD
I'm still getting confused though. Can't remember what in hell goes to what. (:
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Does not, no, and yes...no and yes I do. xD
Yep. Same here. (:
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Does too, yes, no, yes, and no you don't. xD
Whoo it's fun when we can't remember what the hell we're fighting over.
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Does too, yes, no, yes, and no you don't. xD
Does not, no, yes, no, and yes I do. xD
Yep. 'Cuz us r smart. (:
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My brain can't figure it all out. Yes. (:
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