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Thank you so much for the critique. It's my very first one! :]
I'm glad that you find this piece interesting. It was actually taken by accident. Anyway, thanks for the critique
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Doubling the portrait is very effective. I would suggest not as much blur on the neck and between the heads.
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i love everything about this photo the composition the tone the doubling and flipping makes it unique however i think it would be better if the picture was more sharpened and if there was more contrast rather than having the softness but all in all its a great photo well done
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Well thank you. :] I'm happy that you like this photograph. It's one of my favorite actually. :]And I know what you mean about the contrast and sharpness. I just didn't want to over do it.
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no problem at all 
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I really like this pic, it's unusual and I also like soft atmosphere and emotions which com through it
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But actually I wanted to comment this photo myself. ^______^
I love the expression on the face, It makes you look on and on. As someone said before, amazing eyes, such a clear look!
The compositions is very interesting. It's like a mobius band, I don't know why, but i have such an assosiation. ^____^
But actually I would add some more color.
Personally I love black and white and sepia, But I kinda feel that this photo needs
some amber tone... Aw, nevermind, maybe I'm a bit overtalkative. ^_____^
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Haha Well thank you for the comment.
And well I edited this picture twice. Changing some things around. I thought you might want to see it, maybe that's what you mean by the photo needing more colors.
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Oh yeah, thankuy very much form giving a link!
It's just as I've imagined it to be. ^_____^
And different colors of stripes give it i lil bit of wildness~
You have an interesting take on photos and editing. ^__________^
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:] Thank you. I'm glad you like it
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Thanks :]
And I love your avatar! it's so cute
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I think it worked really well, congratulations its beautiful
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I like the idea with doubling and flipping - it makes it cool to look at.. artistic if you like that word 
[This was for #GimmeFeedback ]
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Thank you! And yeah I wish it didn't blur so much, though I don't think that my ear is very importan in the shot. XP
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I just want to you know your general opinion of this piece.
I really like the piece! It's very entrancing, and I enjoy it so much
Do you think that doubling and flipping the image was a good idea?
Yes, it was a very good idea. Doubling and flipping the image increases the amount of interest in the photo. It would be interesting with only one image, but having two of them really made it much better
Do you find the composition interesting?
Yes, the composition of the piece is wonderful! It's balanced and the negative space works very well!
Do you think that the piece could have been stronger in color?
No. Black and white definitely works with this and makes it more dramatic. It's brilliant what you've done
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Well thank you very much!
I'm glad you like it. I really appreciate our feedback
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You're very welcome!
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I think its better this way because of the concept and i have bigger response on the image this way
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-Do you think that doubling and flipping the image was a good idea?
I actually did like this (I guess this goes into composition too) but I found the double flipping very interesting. It's different and creates and effect that makes it stand out from other portraits.
-Do you find the composition interesting?
I found the editing to be a little on the high side beacuse some of the features in the picture started to look a little strange and unreal (ie. the line in the middle of the forehead) but otherwise I liked it. I feel that to make a stronger picture you could lower the glow and perhaps play with the contrast to get a sharper effect that would match the expression. You have a very strong looking model with strong make up so the light glow sort of changes this feeling. If that is what you were attempting though that's okay too.
-Do you think that the piece could have been stronger in color?
No, I like it in b&w for sure.
Overall I really like the concept! It's an awesome picture. ^^
Keep it up~
(Sorry for the massive amount of text and happy holidays~)
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Well thatch you very much! I really appreciate reading your thoughts. :]
I did edit this picture, you can find it here --->[link]
I couldn't find the original image, I guess I deleted it so I wasn't able to revert it back to the original raw photograph. :\ But I did the best I could. I wasn't able to fix the parts that you said looked faked, it changed very little whatever I did to it. And I tried to tone down the glow by reducing the contrast and adding a light tint over the photo.
What do you think??
And Thank you so mcuh for your help!
Merry Christmas!
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ohh I like the new bold tones..... Looks much stronger ^^
hehe but that's okay~ They don't look too fake they just stand out kinda... I think whatever glow you have left right now looks good because it makes the picture blend together nicely.
I'm glad I could help!
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:] Well I'm glad you think it works out nicely.
And thank you very much for all you're help. You're comment was the best and most helpful comment I've ever gotten here in DA
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*blush* aw thanks so much! I'm always worried I don't make any sense when I do feedbacks but I'm super happy it helped ^^
<3
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Hmmm... it's nice composition, structure and image and all, but I don't think one colour just does it. I almost want to see it more alive, like the cards in a set. Like the kings,queens, and jacks.
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Thanks. And well what do you mean? I was thinking of leaving it un black and white but have the painted area around my eyes in colour so it stands out more.
Do you think that will work? Or do you have another idea??
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That actually might work. I meant just a little more colour, so maybe give it a try and see how it works!
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Okay, Well then I'll try it and see how it comes out, when I get the chance. I'll send you a link to the edited one once I get it done. :]
Thank you for your help!
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Alright! And no problem!
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Hey ya go! I edited it and put the colour in. :] Tell me what you think.
Oh and Merry Christmas
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Just Commented!
And Merry Christmas!
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Ah, you can't imagine how weird poses I use to make a good self portrait...
Anyway, this is a very strong image even if it's not in color and you just 'flipped the image'.
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Haha, Well the weirdest poses usually give you the best photographs.
And thank you, I do think that this is a strong photographs though I wasn't sure if others thought so. It's nice to know that it's not all in my head. :]
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Yes it is. That's me right there.
Painted with some acrylics, converted to a black and white photograph, duplicated and then flipped. :] That's me.
I even got paint on my sister's camera, but she doesn't know that. :]
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Just making sure.
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Haha I understand perfectly. And no worries I took it myself. Standing in the bathtub with the camera on the window sill, waiting for the self-timer to go off. It would have been a strange site to others. Lol
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Hahaha, yeaaa i know all about moments like that...
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