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Description I recently recieved one of those types of gifts that means more, in it's own little way, then you can really feasibley put into words - because it's so heartfelt and perfect in it's intentions, you know you'll love it for as long as it's around. *ren52 mailed me this awesome little sketchbook - and by little, I mean roughly 5 1/2 x 8 1/2 inches, cute sort of little, that literally makes for a perfect fit in my smock pocket at work - its size lets me haul it around pretty much everywhere, so I have this newfound determination to put it to as much use as possible. I've dubbed it the MSB - the Mini Sketch Book. This is a Mel in love, baby.

I'll post pages as I get them done - not every one, per say, and maybe not in order, but I'll try and keep things flowing with it where and when I can.

Started this image at work, and finished it when I got home this evening. Not a whole lot of time invested, because the style itself calls for quick movement. It's fun. Anyway, for the first page, I decided to illustrate... a first. I jokingly refer to it as Kayo and Sabretooth's "first date", because as you can see... Victor is SUCH a charmer.



....yeeeahnotsomuch.

In NXU verse the pair have know eachother since Kayo was fifteen. This scene literally takes place withing the first 24 hours of that remarkbley crooked relationship.

"A bustling, grubby, smoke-asphyxiated road side eatery annexed to the crooked little convenience store. Cheyenne found herself practically glued to Creed's flank, eyes wide, heart pounding as he all but shoved his way through the seedy venue, chock full of the type of urban, truck-cabin scum that she had spent months on the run trying to avoid. They were everywhere - she could smell them. Danger looming about in bulky coats and flannels and faded threadbare Levis. Dangerous to her, anyway, she gathered, as Creed seem to barely register their presence as he bouldered his way for the neared booth, the thick smokey air practically folding around him in waves. They certainly were no threat in his mind. While shifty sneers were cast her way, the strangers practically dove under the table in efforts to avoid the Monster Man's gaze. Cheyenne found this rather amusing."

That is not to say that, upon further inspection and a lingeringly creepy conversation, Cheyenne isn't a bit... freaked out. She's still in a marked amount of pain from the first flow-blown exposition of her pyrokinetic capabilities through an already rather unhealthy body, her arms now wrapped against the burns from exactly that.... nevermind the fact that the feral man before her was completely ripped up by a barrage of artilary less than four hours prior, and he's now skulking about with a few minor cuts... cuts of which she's watching literally mend themself as he speaks. What's worse is the way he keeps staring at her... sniffing her out...

Chey: "What?"
Vic: *sneers* "Isn't every day y'see th' devils' eyes on a drowned rat."
Chey: "... fuck you."

...Now that's love.

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Comments: 43

Miyuki9999 [2009-04-20 09:51:12 +0000 UTC]

is there a fanfic for this?

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nastydevil [2007-10-01 18:21:31 +0000 UTC]

i downloaded your sketch.This scene is what i want..i m gonna sketch some stories too..im so nervous .

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MxfitForge In reply to nastydevil [2007-10-02 03:23:58 +0000 UTC]

This scene is what you want for what, exactly?

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MarsW [2007-05-16 10:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Very expressive and great shading. I toke a look to your gallery after some time, I really missed your Sabertooth pics

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MxfitForge In reply to MarsW [2007-05-27 01:52:51 +0000 UTC]

I really should draw more Vic! I miss the fellow myself Dually noted!

Thank you for the comment ^_^

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broken-day [2007-05-02 21:44:55 +0000 UTC]

The shading is amazing. You have an excellent gallery, too.

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MxfitForge In reply to broken-day [2007-05-03 02:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! ^_^

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thegr8sephiroth [2006-02-28 03:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Want more of this story! Want more!
Ugh, I gotta stop typing when I'm tired... my Inner Child tends to get out of his cage.

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gkelly77 [2006-02-04 05:15:27 +0000 UTC]

lol. Cool. I love Vic's face in the 2nd panel.

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Lady-Silvercat [2006-02-03 17:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Have I mentioned I how you draw Sabes? Whooohmmama! Okay, that being said, this is a great little storytelling bit. LOVES IT! Gonna have to faves this one, just because of the character interaction and the facial expressions. Definitely true to the characters, definitely. Wonderful stuff hon!

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AttritionOfPugnacity [2006-02-01 23:27:33 +0000 UTC]

I like giving gifts. I like to see the expression of joy on their face. Especially the ones I love. By the way great picture. I'm at a loss of words anymore I fear, to describe your pictures and how consummate they are.

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JAREDHARRIS [2006-02-01 20:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Cool stuff indeed.Like the hairstyles.Check us out.

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codaleia [2006-02-01 19:40:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm always amazed by the quality and the detail of your B&W art o___O Bravo !!

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ravekitten [2006-02-01 06:41:24 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO!
Poor, poor Chey. Dude, this is priceless.
*snicksnick*

~K@

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Tephers [2006-02-01 03:15:29 +0000 UTC]

You did this on a piece of 5x8 paper? o___O ASDFGHJKL! Dayum.

P.S. Eye scars = smex.

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beyo [2006-02-01 00:55:33 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a place me and my buddies frequent for the cheap food and promise of interesting characters.
I love these characters.

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argothal [2006-01-31 23:21:03 +0000 UTC]

victor from x-men victor? i love that guy man. he was my fav in the first xmen movie. *squeels*--i never squeel- i never knew who you were drawing before. i love this! all this in pencil? is very very good. nice and funny.very clean. i love it;D

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Tahneka [2006-01-31 22:20:56 +0000 UTC]

thats really good!

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TerriTheSketcher [2006-01-31 20:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Meow.

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dorian-hawk [2006-01-31 20:04:50 +0000 UTC]

your so talented mel.

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Velox-Mortis [2006-01-31 18:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Yay for the MSB!!!!!!!!!!!!

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DragonLily4 [2006-01-31 18:09:13 +0000 UTC]

It's hillarious....makes me laugh! That's a great sketchbook! It's cool that you have something you can carry around with you!

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Maxrunn [2006-01-31 17:56:11 +0000 UTC]

the first two buld the suspence and then.... I laugh. Very good!

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carlconnor [2006-01-31 17:24:02 +0000 UTC]

That's seriously cool Mel.

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lunaticenigma [2006-01-31 17:20:18 +0000 UTC]

A'haha, this is so adorable, you have no idea... Well, I'm sure you do since you drew it, but ya'know 'a mean, eh?
I'd really like to know the back story about these two, and the rest of the Verse! Is there a link somewhere? I'm sure you've posted it before, and before now I've wanted to read about 'em, just was never really able to get around to it... CUTENESSFACTOROVERLOAD. Splash to the max. ;O.

SO, yes. Very well done.
*sigh*. True love, definitely at one of its finer moments.

:giggles: .

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MxfitForge In reply to lunaticenigma [2006-02-13 05:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Ack, sorry it took me so long to reply to this. I managed to get super-behind in my messages again. *makes a "Doomed face."* O_o

Thank you so much for the kind words! There's a couple of places you can check out more of these two - Next X for one ([link] ) Under the title "Nexus". I've got bits and pieces written and posted at my DA writing account as well (The actual begining [Prologue and chaper one] of their back-history is called "Nightmare Whispers".) at Crimsongrimm [link] . Hope that helps! And thanks again.

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lunaticenigma In reply to MxfitForge [2006-02-13 09:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Woot! Alright, thanks. I'll take a look at 'em... and, you're welcome for the comments.
You're an awesome artist and more than deserve them!

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madonnawayne [2006-01-31 17:07:14 +0000 UTC]

CHARMING indeed! *slobberdrool*
Man...that is one FIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE hunk of manmeat!

The major difference in their builds is gorgeous. I love you.


...Victor is gorgeous too. *grabs hold of his hair starts smelling*

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nightshade69 [2006-01-31 16:07:00 +0000 UTC]

lol it amazes me how beautiful your stuff is i mean it looks like it took weeks to do and you said u did it at work you are an art goddess lol

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Wyv-Kate [2006-01-31 15:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Damn, that's *hella* impressive, I love the bottom panel. You did THIS on a teeny little piece of paper? Cripes, I can't wait to see more!

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CapnFlynn [2006-01-31 15:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Bravo! The last panel sells it for me, definitely.

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mallettepagan0 [2006-01-31 15:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Hahah, that's cool, and they make a fine couple. XD; I like the little details, especially in the table (swirlies!). Wonderfil pencil work and shading too.

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Makai-Bandit [2006-01-31 15:05:41 +0000 UTC]

ooo thats an interesting relationship ^____^
your expressions are love

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1Jiles [2006-01-31 14:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Really nice! Love the expressions!

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MxfitForge In reply to 1Jiles [2006-02-03 05:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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redelf [2006-01-31 14:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Isnt love and hate pretty much the same thing sometimes? Chey's expressions are priceless.

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MxfitForge In reply to redelf [2006-02-13 05:44:54 +0000 UTC]

LOL, wonderfully put - that's so true, too! And thank you.

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HankFidel [2006-01-31 14:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Sweet pic

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MxfitForge In reply to HankFidel [2006-02-03 05:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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BluntieDK [2006-01-31 13:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Chey: "What?"
Vic: *sneers* "Isn't every day y'see th' devils' eyes on a drowned rat."
Chey: "... fuck you."

Priceless. Love it.

And sweet jesus...the shading...*gibbers*

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MxfitForge In reply to BluntieDK [2006-02-13 05:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee. Glad you like it, thanks!

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Ludi-Price [2006-01-31 12:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Girl, you rock in every possible way. I don't know what else to say. This is just funny and cool and superbly drawn to boot. I want to be reading your comics one day. Especially if they're X-Men related.

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AtomicStoney [2006-01-31 12:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Victor's hair... I want Victor's hair. :B *omnom*~

I just love how skinny and frail Chey looks in comparison. XD

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