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mybrainhasproblems — Sickness
Published: 2011-02-13 22:52:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 231; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description I feel robotic in a way
just how in sickness I spend my day

not alive but far from dead
empty thoughts flash through my head

never hungry, never full
all of this is total bull

I can't go out, I don't want in
I cannot lose, I cannot win

nothing here and you are there
this robotic state is far from fair
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Comments: 4

hadarchik [2011-08-10 06:22:40 +0000 UTC]

haha, I thought "sickness" had some deep rooted metaphor. Didn't occur to me you're actually sick. lovely!

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mybrainhasproblems In reply to hadarchik [2011-08-11 01:01:39 +0000 UTC]

It seems I'm quite profound until you see the root of my blatherings

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Teeny-Tiny-Me [2011-02-19 01:45:24 +0000 UTC]

lol the comment, but it was a good poem!

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mybrainhasproblems In reply to Teeny-Tiny-Me [2011-03-06 02:00:17 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thanks

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