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Published: 2012-09-25 02:38:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 8272; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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Poor Kuzimu... a little reason why he's so upset and grumpy
Aww, the guardian of the border's trying to keep up with the pride being the only male rogue among some snobish royals one... such hard time...
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PS : I do fast translanting into english sometimes, so there can be mystakes or harly understadable sentences :
( if you feel confuse please tell me where, I'll be happy to explain what I meant in the text, then turn a sentence right if it's written wrong. The importance is that it can be read.)
The pages takes me 1 to 3 hours to makes depending on the background and linearts.
This work is done fast because I have a life
but if someone want to offer help correcting the text and is present on DA almost all days then I'll be happy to send the text to them before doing my pages as I always do the text first.
and don't forget this work is done for fun.
this story take place just the night before my page one :
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I'll send some references sheet this week
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Comments: 22
In fact Fujo's pain was to be made after the hole prodject, or even not at all, because of it's grafic and high violence and gore... but as requested from a fan I'll post it
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and Fujo's pain (Fujo's story) later, when we'll enter Priderock with the rogue 
it will be about 9 pages max.
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yes, but it can be a spoiler, I finished it in fact, I'll post it when I'll finish 3 or 4 other pages
^^I'm happy you ask
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ah, ok! gotcha! 
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^^no prob, I usually answer alot of question I really don't bite
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I can help you with your english if you'd like ^^
Here's what it would be:
My staying in this pride is useless.
It doesn't make sense, this is usless. I love her so much, but even if she accepts you and I as pridemembers...
And everthing else makes sense.
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oh thanks alot, I'll change this
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The wording is confusing darling. You might want to have somebody proof read it first. In the first bubble, it says "ours" when it should be "hours" but your problem is not so much the spelling as it is the way you write the sentences. The art is fantastic though.
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oh whoops. didn't read tha right. Ignore me. XD
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actully no, it would be hours. Because she's talking about time.
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hm do you want to correct the text? cause I can send it to you first if you want, but still, I like the helping comments
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I would if I had time. Sadly I'm busy with classes. But if I find something I can go over real quick whenever you post them I'll tell you in the comments.
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