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MyriaRock In reply to YouGotBloodOnMySuit [2017-01-09 11:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Mystery ^^

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MyriaRock In reply to adurbin09 [2017-01-06 18:10:05 +0000 UTC]

My english is not very good, lack of practice ><

He told to Jeice "Mia explains everything, you should have known who are Mia and Jin" but as Jeice didn't listen he ruins the plan
If Mia talk about Mia there is a little problem when you know that ginyu is around
Jin acted as quick as possible to light the situation

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adurbin09 In reply to MyriaRock [2017-01-07 08:58:04 +0000 UTC]

It's fine haha. It usually doesn't mess with me too much, I just wanted to put that in there if someone comes across it and becomes confused. Honestly, English is an annoying language from what I can tell. (I don't know any other languages besides the basics of Japanese). 

Essentially, what I was saying is this: When Ginyu(Mia) says "For his wife? They are brother and sister! Jin and Mia are not married you dumbass!", this style of speaking is enough to raise a red flag. It's as you say, normal people don't refer to themselves in the third person. This type of slip is easier to do when you're ginyu explaining your current body. However, it is a lot more unnatural to say, "You didn't listen to Mia?" That is making the implication that the current Ginyu wasn't the one who explained everything to Jeice. In other words, if I had stolen Mia's body, letting "they" and "Mia" slip would be understandable, but I would still say, "You didn't listen to me?" I'm the one who explained it, even if it wasn't my normal body, so it would have to be intentional to refer to myself as Mia. Sorry if that came across as confusing and long winded

If you ever want someone to polish up some of the grammar, feel free to let me know. However, I feel like it adds to the charm of your series. Also, if you ever decide you want practice with English, I'd be happy to assist as well! Keep it up! ^^

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MyriaRock In reply to adurbin09 [2017-01-07 14:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

But it's not Ginyu who explained to Jeice, Mia did when she has been under his control by the "Royal Submission". For this scene Ginyu is so pissed off by Jeice stupid talk that he lost his nerves, so he doesn't care about "Jin could find the truth !!!" everything was explained by Mia and as he felt like he has everything of Mia he doesn't think of himself as Mia but always as Ginyu. That's why he didn't say "I told it to you before !"

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