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Published: 2018-09-20 19:33:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 276; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Meet Apollo, a lovely ferret!It's the first time I draw one :3 Reference photo here !
I'm really liking the ballpoint pens ā„
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First of all, I think the composition is nice, and I absolutely love the intense look on this cute guy's face.
What I think is holding this piece back from being really impactful is that it lacks contrast. The line weight is too consistent throughout, and there's a lot of white space that isn't really leading your eye anywhere in particular. If anything, my eye just wanders off the page.
Maybe if you darkened the background a little it would frame him better, or even if you gave him some more dramatic shading/heavier outlines?
Seriously, though, this guy is absolutely adorable. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks for this critique!
I completely agree with you 
That's a nice suggestion, I might try this for the next pieces with colors/background
Thank you! ā„
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OMG I love it!!! It looks like my ferret ;____;
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Oh no, hope I didn't bring back painful memories D:
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not at all! She's still alive and she loves to destroy things and eating Froot Loops haha
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What a wonderful portrait of Apollo! Well done, again!Ā Ā Ā
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Thank you so much! ā„
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