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Mystic-User — What I would do for you
Published: 2006-07-31 02:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2375; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 14
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Description How much do you mean to me?
I'm surprised that you had to ask
I'll answer that question in a heartbeat
It will be my simplest task
I want to hold you whenever you're sad
My heart stops when a tear rolls down your cheek
I'm determined to keep you laughing
I strive for the things that you seek
Life seems so worthless without you
I'm never going to let you go
I'd be nothing if you stopped loving me
Maybe it just doesn't show
And if a door closes for you
I pray that one more opens soon
I'd walk to the ends of the earth
Just to be with you
All these words that I said
Were simple, yet true
Therefore, shed those doubts and worries
Because I would never choose anyone but you
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Comments: 44

xKittehxWingsx [2008-10-26 04:11:30 +0000 UTC]

.... GOOD!

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Mystic-User In reply to xKittehxWingsx [2008-12-16 14:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thank you. ^^

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xKittehxWingsx [2008-10-26 04:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Many things to discuss in this feeling....

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xHP-GD-MCRx [2008-03-11 14:30:00 +0000 UTC]

it's beautifully well written.
and it seems to flow so well.

this is great.

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Mystic-User In reply to xHP-GD-MCRx [2008-05-01 19:41:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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xHP-GD-MCRx In reply to Mystic-User [2008-05-02 02:04:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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leontheechidna [2007-05-01 18:24:30 +0000 UTC]

I think it's beautiful! It means a lot. However I do like you're older stuff as well. However, everything you do is amazing.

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Mystic-User In reply to leontheechidna [2007-05-28 18:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks, but most of my older stuff is crap. I need to throw those into my scraps.

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leontheechidna In reply to Mystic-User [2007-05-29 18:20:00 +0000 UTC]

I don't think any of your stuff could be crap...

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Mystic-User In reply to leontheechidna [2007-06-13 11:43:29 +0000 UTC]

xD I do. I hate so many of my older poems that it's rediculous. I'm thinking of just taking them off all together.

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leontheechidna In reply to Mystic-User [2007-06-13 21:00:44 +0000 UTC]

I wanna take a lot of mine off as well...

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carzypineapple [2007-01-13 01:04:18 +0000 UTC]

lovelovelovelove it!

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Mystic-User In reply to carzypineapple [2007-01-14 22:40:47 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you so much!

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Aura-Lee [2007-01-02 01:46:48 +0000 UTC]

So depressing. TT_TT

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Mystic-User In reply to Aura-Lee [2007-01-02 23:05:41 +0000 UTC]

^^ Heh, thank you.

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Aura-Lee In reply to Mystic-User [2007-01-02 23:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Steph, have you gone emo?

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Mystic-User In reply to Aura-Lee [2007-01-02 23:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Do you have to call me by my name on here? o.o On here, I'm Mystic.

And maybe...

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Aura-Lee In reply to Mystic-User [2007-01-02 23:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Fine. MYSTIC! Whooo!!! Sacredness! =3

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Mystic-User In reply to Aura-Lee [2007-01-03 14:01:08 +0000 UTC]

.....What? o.0;

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Aura-Lee In reply to Mystic-User [2007-02-18 01:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Psha~! I'm talking gibberish, duh. ;-D

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Dhanyelle [2006-11-10 06:57:31 +0000 UTC]

aww. so very cute that's how i feel about my bf. yay

i can never write love poems. i have tried and tried and tried. the only time i've ever really been able to is when i'm depressed ...and then the love poem is depressing. so--yeah it's not really a 'love poem' if it's depressing


love your work!!
dhanyelle

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Mystic-User In reply to Dhanyelle [2006-11-10 23:57:46 +0000 UTC]

^^ Heh, thank you!

Love poetry isn't my best either.(Even though it's been favorited the most. XD Ironic, isn't it?) I'd love to take a look at your poetry too! It is nice to meet a fellow writer, since you don't really meet a lot of them on DA anymore. ^^ Thankies for the fave too!

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Dhanyelle In reply to Mystic-User [2006-11-11 08:43:53 +0000 UTC]

welkies yes, writing seems like it is a fading art, though i'd die without it.
Yes, that is ironic but sometimes my worst art is favored most by many

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Mystic-User In reply to Dhanyelle [2006-11-17 00:15:42 +0000 UTC]

*nodds* Even so, now the few good poets are shinning much more clearly because of the lack of interest.

XD Isn't it ironic?

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Dhanyelle In reply to Mystic-User [2006-11-23 08:30:20 +0000 UTC]

lol true, very true.

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dekutree [2006-08-01 00:32:28 +0000 UTC]

pure love.

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Mystic-User In reply to dekutree [2006-08-01 23:05:59 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you for fav. it!

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turtbub [2006-08-01 00:00:23 +0000 UTC]

my adoration for this poem is infinite. it is EXACTLY how i'm feeling right now.

nicely done. <33

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Mystic-User In reply to turtbub [2006-08-01 23:10:41 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you! I'm so happy that you like my poem!

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ramen-rune [2006-07-31 22:41:24 +0000 UTC]

That was so sweet. I love it, it's really beautiful.

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Mystic-User In reply to ramen-rune [2006-08-01 23:17:36 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you!

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ramen-rune In reply to Mystic-User [2006-08-02 02:44:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.^^

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Mystic-User In reply to ramen-rune [2006-08-02 20:43:10 +0000 UTC]

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menace2008sgirl [2006-07-31 16:14:26 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful! it reminds me of someone......

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Mystic-User In reply to menace2008sgirl [2006-07-31 20:53:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ I was using a few memories of my own when I made this...

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psychoeliza [2006-07-31 14:13:26 +0000 UTC]

thats also good!^_^

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Mystic-User In reply to psychoeliza [2006-07-31 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you!

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Ashahero [2006-07-31 04:31:27 +0000 UTC]

sweet its a lovey thiny!

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Mystic-User In reply to Ashahero [2006-07-31 05:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I did it since you wanted me to not be so "depressing" ....

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Ashahero In reply to Mystic-User [2006-07-31 16:41:35 +0000 UTC]

yea! no depressing stuff! nice work!

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AmyRoseLover [2006-07-31 03:12:45 +0000 UTC]

thats truely beautiful!Great job!

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Mystic-User In reply to AmyRoseLover [2006-07-31 03:41:08 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thank you!

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AmyRoseLover In reply to Mystic-User [2006-07-31 03:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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Mystic-User In reply to AmyRoseLover [2006-07-31 03:48:53 +0000 UTC]

^^

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