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Download for full size, if you feel you can't live without it.SHORT SUMMARY:
What's this? Original art? SAY IT ISN'T SO! Too bad it is.
The main cast for my new book, E.D.U.G. Diaries! I'm still writing it, but its a fantasy/parody that follows the antics of a career villainess as she tries to figure out why these danged heroes keep winning. She ends up latching onto a promising woodsman who might just grow to be a hero, and hitches alongside a budding (and very uncharactaristic) fellowship following a suspiciously unclear prophesy told by an old(?) man who may or may not be just plain crackers. Characters from left to right: Kady Waverunner, Crown Prince Glade Locken Farscade, Shaiyl Diblo, Barc Bladeborne, Matilda Honninbrew, Prince Simutem Hetep, Spix the Sprite. See long summary for details.
This took way longer than it should have, given that the lineart was just a sketch and the coloring was SUPPOSED to be sloppy. I just wanted to meet the characters of my book to get a better idea of them. But I ended up going all out with coloring anyways, dang it.
LONG DESCRIPTION:
So I decided to finally bunker down and do NaNoWriMo last November (National Novel Writing Month), and got about 50K words done for this book series of mine, called E.D.U.G Diaries. Its short for "Evil Doesn't Understand Good", which is a TV trope. I got the book idea from spending waaay to much time on that site, and I call out a lot of tropes in it.
I put up a longer synopsis that I had on my NaNoWriMo page on my journal: mystryl-shada.deviantart.com/j… . The Short Summary above has a shorter synopsis, if you don't feel like flipping through the journal entry.
Or you can go here nanowrimo.org/participants/mys… and read the summary as well as an excerpt from the beginning of the book.
The book itself will be mainly a comedy/adventure in a fantasy setting, but don't let that fool you. I've got some drama planned, and some points the story will get pretty heavy. Oh, and there's romance too, so that'll hopefully cover everyone's bases. Unless you like extreme violence or saucy action; I'm not that kinda writer.
So do you want to meet my characters? I don't want to post too much (for example, backstory and character development will be saved for the book), but I can give y'all a glance. Also, everyone in this world is born with an elemental power, the strength of which is determined by character and also how far up the power tree it is (for example, the primary powers of Wind, Water, Earth, and Fire are the strongest and rarest, then Secondary powers like Sound and Ice, then Tertiary powers like Heat and Granite)
CAST FROM LEFT TO RIGHT:
1. Kady Waverunner
Hailing from an islandic tribe of elves, Kady's the kid of the bunch. He's fifteen and eager to make a man of himself in the world, and is in the middle of an adventure already when he gets swept up by the gang. He's hyperactive and tends to climb anything nearby to get a good view of the world. Kady is a bit of a flirt, energetic, easily excited, and tends not to think before acting. He's rather young in mind but is very optimistic, preferring to think that things will work out somehow than fretting about his current situation. While not the brightest bulb in the group, he is very good with his instincts, and is only matched by Barc and Matilda for wilderness smarts, and rules the pack for streetsmarts. He's also very curious, and is often asking questions, sometimes awkward ones if he doesn't understand the context. If he's missing from the group, its probably because a pretty girl walked by or there's a really cool looking tree that needed climbing or a body of water that needed swimming in.
POWER: Rare Primary gift of Water
2. Crown Prince Glade Locken Farscade
The Crown Prince for the country of Farscade, Glade is the world's leading Hero. He wears a different suit of armor for each campaign he runs (its gold colored this time), and he spares no expense for travel. He also somehow manages to be there to catch a falling child from a burning building, or to sweep an endangered elderly woman from being hit by a runaway carriage, or to stop a burglar from swiping a young woman's coinpurse. He's everything that Shaiyl hates in life, and the two argue constantly throughout their adventure. His arrogance, vanity, and flashy grin just adds further strain. But, he IS the Hero, and the group's leader, so what he says goes. Sometimes. But underneath all that glit and glamor is a rather unsure person who's a lot deeper than the gold plating hints at.
POWER: Rare Primary gift of Fire (a hereditary trait of the Farscade royal line)
3. Shaiyl Diblo
Move over princes and kings, there's a new boss coming to town. Well, there will be soon, once Shaiyl can figure out how those blasted heroes keep tossing down her towers and budding empires. Sarcastic, proud, argumentative, violent, and temperamental, Shaiyl is never one to hold back her opinion on anything. Ironically, she often ends up one of the voice of reason (even if put sardonically). She's seen enough heroes rise up to overthrow her to know something about what to do and what not to do from a heroic standpoint. One day she finally has enough of it and latches onto what looks to her to be a young up-and-coming hero, intent on writing a journal about his progress and finding the weak link in the heroic cycle. Now if only that peacock of a prince will leave her alone, she can do her research. Gah she hates people like him. But that Barc boy; he's got the heroic potential, and isn't nearly so irritating. Yet. But his career's in early days yet.
POWER: Rare Primary gift of Fire (and plain redundant, in Glade's point of view)
4. Barc Bladeborne
If Shaiyl can be called the Leading Lady of the story (even if she is a villainess), then Barc's got Leading Man (despite what Glade might think). Sometimes replacing Shaiyl as the viewpoint character, Barc's the every-man to Shaiyl's crazy opinions. Where she might bring a voice of reason to the party, Barc's got just plain common sense. Brought up by family to be everything a decent man should be, he doesn't like to make assumptions about people, and insists on seeing the good in Shaiyl even when she insists she's a baddie through and through. Despite this, he does have his opinions on the folly or otherwise of others, but he often keeps them to himself. Its him that acts as the group's glue, often pointing out solutions when others get argumentative or confused. Not much angers him, although exasperated might be a good word for the mood the antics of his group frequently puts him in. His capabilities with a bow are second to few, and can swing a sword with the better of them. When Shaiyl first bumped into him, he was on a hunting trip that had taken him a little off the beaten path. Being new to the hero business, he looks up to Glade and is often awed by the things they see and do on their quest.
POWER: Rare Primary gift of Wind
5. Matilda Honninbrew
Rather tall for her mining tribesmen (they are NOT dwarves, they just all have dwarfism; they can fit in the small tunnels better that way), Matilda is the group surrogate mother. Widowed a few years ago, she latches onto the group and treats them as her replacement family, making sure they all eat well by acting as the fellowship cook. And boy can she ever cook; even Glade hasn't eaten such tasty food at his fancy palace. She's a bit of a gossip, and tends to ramble from one subject to another, so the fellowship has no shortage of stories, anecdotes, or rumors to hear while they travel. She's also somewhat opinionated, so don't step out of line around her or you'll get an earful. Her husband was a blacksmith and taught her a lot of the trade, so she surprises people by being able to wield a hammer, and not just in crafting; she can be right deadly with one. She's easily the strongest member of the group by far, a fact which embarrasses Glade more than any other. Being in her late fourties, she's also probably most world-wise of the cast, and can read people better than they'd like to be read.
POWER: Rare Primary gift of Earth
6. Prince Simutem Hetep
Glade really doubts that this stick-and-bones bardic wanna-be is a prince at all, but there's no arguing with his mother, the Queen of Imut, who dumps her third son on the group in hopes that they can make a man out of him and get him out of his darkly lit palace wing. Taking position as the group pessimist, Simutem is glum, cowardly, and humorously glass-half-empty. His flatline sarcasm and capability of pointing out the worst possible solutions have been a source of anxiety for his family, and hopefully going out into the great world beyond might brighten his mood some. Perhaps if he hadn't rescued that Sprite a few years back, he'd be allowed to mope and get it all out of his system. At least he can write some morose poetry and pluck a few sad tunes on his lute to vent his inner drama. Oh, and has he mentioned how much he HATES his elemental gift?
POWER: Secondary gift of Light (a sometimes hereditary power of the Hetep family dynasty), and another reason why Glade doesn't think he belongs in the party. What kind of fellowship member has a SECONDARY power? What on earth can light do?
7. Spix the Sprite
Simutem's (Or Simmy, as she calls him) eternal companion and pest problem, Spix is happy, bubbly, optimistic, hyper, and a trickster through and through. Its unclear to the rest of the group if she's following him because she considers him a friend, or if she's trying to annoy him. But whenever he's managing to pull off a wonderfully dour mood, she always tries to find the bright side for him in her simple manner, much to his further annoyance. Like all Sprites, she's childish, refers to herself in third person, and has an impish manner about her. Unlike other Sprites, she doesn't so much shun prolonged human contact, since for some reason she's latched onto Simmy (again, is it just because he's so much fun to bug, or what?) She is an Ivy Sprite, and wears clothes made from the ivy leaves she grows. She sort of acts like a pet parrot for Simmy, if parrots were sentient and undermined one for kicks.
POWER: Ability to control ivy plants, and carries around a few seeds to plant in case she needs a vine or two. Would be considered a Tertiary power if human/elf.
So that's my cast. I was supposed to draw the group Mentor, but since he's sort of a odd old (maybe?) man who frequently comes and goes without warning, method, or reason, the group really isn't sure if he's an actual member of the fellowship or not anyways.
Art was a quick sketch that was supposed to be colored quicker, with no shading, but I reeeeally got obsessed. SIGH. What should have taken maybe a day of on-off work ended up spanning half a week. I need to figure out Clip Studio Paint; maybe I can work faster on that than in Photoshop.
Background done using a variety of Photoshop brushes set at different opacities; I just experimented and this is what came out. Oh well, it works.
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Comments: 15
RenegadeSpirit [2019-08-03 01:27:13 +0000 UTC]
You know, you are hiding to be a great art. You already have a clear & focus art and talent. All you really need is to congratulation you for it.
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Detective-Barricade [2016-01-28 15:22:27 +0000 UTC]
What an amusing, well-rounded fellowship! I definitely see potential for the group over the course of the story...
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mystryl-shada In reply to Detective-Barricade [2016-01-28 19:37:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've already got some fun dialogue, usually between Glade and Shaiyl. Or Shaiyl and anybody; she's fun to write. Maybe I should try to draw the actual antagonists of the story next, although that may be harder; a few of them are still being fleshed out as characters.
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Detective-Barricade In reply to mystryl-shada [2016-01-28 20:52:54 +0000 UTC]
I can imagine. I'd wait until you've got the antagonists fleshed out more before trying to draw them, but that's just me.
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ToaNaruto [2016-01-28 13:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Well, this certainly has got me interested. Excellent work!
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mystryl-shada In reply to ToaNaruto [2016-01-28 19:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Woot, thanks! I was stuck in a rut with the story, so I thought drawing them out would bring them more to life for me and motivate me more. It worked; I haven't been able to think of anything else for days. O_o
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Neganium [2016-01-28 08:09:26 +0000 UTC]
Noice, very noice. This is shaking up to be something Great™. :3
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mystryl-shada In reply to Neganium [2016-01-28 19:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Here's hoping. Bugs need ironing out, but this should all be pretty standard. Thanks!
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Neganium In reply to mystryl-shada [2016-01-28 21:47:27 +0000 UTC]
How you gonna publish this? I might wanna read it, but there's a limit to what I can actually do about that.
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mystryl-shada In reply to Neganium [2016-01-28 23:19:13 +0000 UTC]
To be honest? Not sure yet. I'd rather go through a legit publisher so I can hold the thing in my happy hands in all its hardcopy glory, but that's really hard to do these days. If I can't get a publisher or editor on board, I may have to self-publish, and I haven't started looking at those options yet. At this point, I'll just be thrilled to get the dang thing written.
IF I do go through a legit publisher, they're apparently picky about the length of a new author's novel. So I don't dare go over 100K words. I'd prefer to stick to 80K; about the length of the first Harry Potter book, with each book after getting slightly larger.
My big problem is a target audience. I'm not really writing with any in mind, particularly, but its looking like a young adult novel. And I just heard that some publishers look for certain key words that will sell a book better to young adults, and some of those words will never see the light of day in ANY story I write, let alone one that could target older kids.
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Neganium In reply to mystryl-shada [2016-01-29 05:03:54 +0000 UTC]
Hm, idk anything about the publishing process, so... yeah idk what to say. I suppose if you can keep it in your own hands, then that'd be swell.
Didn't the guy that wrote the Inheritance Cycle self-publish initially, when he wrote Eragon?
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mystryl-shada In reply to Neganium [2016-01-29 05:47:06 +0000 UTC]
From what I've heard, his parents owned a small publishing company and he got started that way. Then when people started reading them, a bigger company picked it up. But don't quote me on that; I'm going off what I heard on the rumor mill years ago.
But believe me, if he'd submitted that script to a bigger company like TOR as a first step, they'd have thrown him back. While an interesting story, its not terribly original (plot of Star Wars, magic from Wizard of Earthsea, and dragons from Pern) and there's some minor issues with the storytelling. At least that was my impression of the first book; never did get around to reading the others. Maybe they get better. But hey, kudos to him for getting popular anyways! Sometimes a story can shine even if it has a humble beginning. Also, it pays to ride the wave of popular opinion; fantasies were just hitting it big when Eragon came out. Then vampires were all the rage, and now dystopias of the future are playing out.
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Neganium In reply to mystryl-shada [2016-01-29 23:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Considering I'm not a fan of any of those other things (I've only barely heard of one of them in passing, in fact; and the other has a familiar name but I'm fairly certain I hadn't heard of at all), it seemed pretty original to me. Plus, I liked how it was written- it took itself very seriously. Sure, the villain was kind of OP... I can't really remember too much bc it's been a long while. And I've only read the first three. But I remember liking them a lot, even if a few passages read a bit like fanfiction at times, when I think about it. And I don't like how he goes through most of the series without describing the protagonist at all; he describes him once through the whole of the first book, at least in his entirety. Then he lists some changes to his appearance, both later in the first book, and I think in the other two. But he doesn't really reference how the character looked in the first place. I think he had brown hair? And some details are inconsistent between books, mostly from an superficial standpoint- but even J.K. Rowling has been guilty of this sin in the past, and pretty often, at that.
Sorry, I was rambling. I mostly know nothing about how writing or publishing works, what's popular in what time (although vampires have been pretty consistently a fan favorite; at least until Twilight ruined them), or anything like that. I just know what I like to read- which mostly consists of fantasy of some shape or form; at least when it comes to something that's not fanfiction, where my tastes are a little broader lately.
Still, I do still like a good fantasy, which is why this idea appeals to me. Granted, I'm also a fan of branching the genres now a little.
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mystryl-shada In reply to Neganium [2016-01-30 07:14:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh no, I think that was a fairly fun book review to read, actually. And yeah, I'm betting my own writing needs a lot more spit and polish till I even test it on my friends. Good critique; you did a good job of balancing what you liked and what interested you about the series with constructive criticism. I really should give the book series another chance; I might like it a bit more now that I know what to expect.
That bit about how he never describes the protagonist is rather funny, lol. And here I'm trying NOT to drown my readers in description; I've had creative writing teachers say that I sometimes spell things out too much; its good to leave at least a few things to the reader's own imagination. The thing I have the hardest time with is trying not to outline how every line of dialogue should be intoned. *Slaps wrist* Leave it to the reader to figure some of that out! But that's because I started out as a cartoonist, not a novelist.
Thanks! Glad the idea appeals! And I do agree that done right, vampires can be fun. I've got one in another book idea; he's a type of demon who works at a youth club's clinic for the doctor who summoned him, and there's a constant running joke of him trying to mooch off the blood drawn for tests. He misses the good old days where medieval doctors would drain blood to purify the body; there'd always be plenty for him then.
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Neganium In reply to mystryl-shada [2016-01-30 22:14:07 +0000 UTC]
That's an interesting concept, haha! I've seen a few funny ones involving vampires around, like vampires trying to feed off of people with like, sickle cell anemia, or other types of anemia, and being some measure of both disgusted and even offended, going so far as to try and get the person to go to the doctor, and to take care of themselves regularly- just so that they can taste good to the vampire, lol.
I don't know much about the technical details of writing, like I said; so some of the stuff you've been saying kind of goes over my head.
Keep in mind that it's been a few years since I actually got to read the books. And I never read the fourth book, either. Of course, that has more to do with accessibility than anything else. Now I'm actually a little worried that I won't like it as much as I used to... and I used to love it. I wonder if the author has done anything else now that the series is finished...? (Or is it really finished?? I have no idea; it was supposed to be a trilogy, but it wouldn't all fit into the last book...)
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