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Published: 2007-03-11 04:52:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description To be scrapped soon!! Fullview
Finally! I've submitted something! And it's something from my never ending list of things to do!
This is PART of my part of a Collab with ~miaka69usa Just part of it. It's just the very very basic lines! And it took me forever to get them right. Still nothing is dark and I want a critique on the anatomy and proportions! Anyone want to redline it? *hints to Caffy*
'Kay... so Miaka said it was to be a team of Pegasus pulling a chariot and obviously, that didn't work out! But they are Pegasus, they're dancing! I hope you don't mind Mia, and that this is a good enough idea! I'll probably finish the lines tomorrow if I can get a critique on things to change!

Sorry for the quality of the photo, bad camera + bad lighting = crappy photo. The paper is too big for my scanner...
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Comments: 22

DreamingMyth [2007-03-12 16:01:59 +0000 UTC]

i think this looks great so far! the one thing that nobody else pointed out yet is the wings on the pegasus on the left.. or more specificly the wing going towards the pegasus on the right.. the connecting point is a bit too high and the wing looks way too thin. other then that it looks great though!!

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Mystykat In reply to DreamingMyth [2007-03-13 04:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm yet to get the rest of that wing in but I see what you mean about the connection point Thanks for pointing it out! Good thing I haven't inked it yet!

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DreamingMyth In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-13 04:44:53 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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forgotten-words [2007-03-12 02:45:13 +0000 UTC]

theirs no hooves... how could u lol....i never draw hooves they to me are the hardest part to draw on a horse

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Mystykat In reply to forgotten-words [2007-03-12 04:25:11 +0000 UTC]

They'll be there, don't worry!

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Raiyasha [2007-03-11 18:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poses. =3 I'd like to critique but I'm afraid I don't know too much about drawing horses, but it looks fine to me.

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Mystykat In reply to Raiyasha [2007-03-13 04:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks That's okay

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Raiyasha In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-13 18:58:54 +0000 UTC]

No prob. XD

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wolflover90210 [2007-03-11 17:50:02 +0000 UTC]

looks PERFECT to me!

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Mystykat In reply to wolflover90210 [2007-03-11 18:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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wolflover90210 In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-11 19:25:01 +0000 UTC]

welcomes!

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Rebel-Love [2007-03-11 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Those poses look very pretty.

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Mystykat In reply to Rebel-Love [2007-03-11 18:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Rebel-Love In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-12 08:57:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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KJL90 [2007-03-11 14:53:07 +0000 UTC]

I love love love the line of the left horse's neck. You got that perfect -- it's spot on. The only thing I see that could benefit from some reworking is the muscles in their hind legs; their thighs look a bit on the thick side.

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Mystykat In reply to KJL90 [2007-03-11 18:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I drew the left one first, so he looks 100 x better! Gyah! You noticed that too? I was hoping no one would, I couldn't get it right. *is motivated to go change it*

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darkdragon7 [2007-03-11 11:03:27 +0000 UTC]

pretty good i like the horse on the left the best. but they both look great

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Mystykat In reply to darkdragon7 [2007-03-11 18:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I drew him first ... It always ends up that way... Thanks

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darkdragon7 In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-11 20:47:16 +0000 UTC]

lol =]

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RodeoKing [2007-03-11 04:55:19 +0000 UTC]

this looks good! the heads are good, same witht the legs! .. but if you wan to be specific lol the belly of the left horse does not align with its chest.. other than that can't wait!

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Mystykat In reply to RodeoKing [2007-03-11 05:04:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critique! I just changed that, thanks for pointing it out! Thanks for the comment!

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RodeoKing In reply to Mystykat [2007-03-11 05:06:10 +0000 UTC]

your welcome! im more than happy to help!!

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