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Published: 2018-06-15 19:40:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 801; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description I.. forget what I was gonna say lol. Guess that happens when you write. It felt good to write again, though. Anyway, here's some garbage Elder Scrolls fanfiction:

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Aurel knew he really should consider moving closer to Whiterun. The jangle of the freshly-earned Septims in his satchel served to remind him of that. He wasn’t exactly relishing the thought of sneaking past that bandit-infested tower while the guard wasn’t looking again; one of these times, he was going to be caught.

Boots crunching in the fresh snow, he squinted, green eyes straining to see farther in the fog. It was an unusual occurrence. The cold often left the air crisp and biting, too thin for fog. At least the storm had been short-lived. He’d rather not stay in the Bannered Mare if he could help it. Being the only Altmer in the city earned him a number of stares, even if there were other elves there. And the way that one Talos priest eyed him…

Whiterun was still preferable to Riften, however, for a number of reasons.

He felt his ears perk before he registered the distant crunching of snow, the metallic clanging of armor. He stopped. Heart pounding, he held his breath, listening. Eyes scanning over the tundra, he cast a wary glance over his shoulder and summoned a cluster of embers from his palm. He hoped it wasn’t a group of bandits. The sight of a mage’s flames was usually enough to deter a lone thief.

There was barely anyone in sight. The distant, golden gleam of elven armor caught his eye, a group of black-robed silhouettes walking just ahead of the armored figures. Thalmor. Even worse than thieves.

His heart jumped into his throat. His legs twitched with adrenalin, his body about to begin fleeing of its own volition, but he forced himself to breathe. It was very unlikely that they’d even spotted him. Even if they had, given that he was an Altmer, they were likely to leave him alone. That was one advantage his race granted him in this frozen, Nordic land.

But what if they recognized him? What if they had been one of the ones to..?

No, no. None of the individuals that knew his face would “lower” themselves to patrol the roads, let alone step foot in Skyrim. Besides, those agents were too far away for him to have heard their footsteps. Whatever was potentially after him was closer, and he couldn’t afford to divert his attention on the elves that probably hadn’t noticed him.

A groan echoed from somewhere to his left. He jumped, whipping around to face the source of the sound. At first, he was unable to spot anything of interest. But as the embers sparked into flames in his palm, the firelight shone off of a set of dirty, bloodied armor. It outlined a man’s face and figure, distinguishing his fallen, writhing form from the shadows of the trees behind him.

Aurel hesitated. His first instinct was to help the man, but this wouldn’t be the first time he’d been fooled by the “injured traveler” trap.

It was the darkening, red stain in the snow beneath the man, the way he stilled, that spurred the elf into action.

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Comments: 9

Cha0slord [2018-06-29 03:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Project Comment here


Someone, walking, watching his back, ready to incinerate anything that moves. The story is immediately conveyed in the pose, expression and camera angle. The minimalist background, where the snowy tree almost blend into the sky, contributes to keep focus on the character. This is clearly a piece built around this story of suspicion, and it achieves its goal.


Yet, the piece has a lot of room for improvement, on both technical and composition aspects.

First, I didn't recognize the flaming hand immediately (I mistook it for some sort of torchbug). This is due to the left arm being hidden. Bringing the hand a little further ahead would help. It could also open the opportunity to have it cast more light onto the character. Which brings me to the second point...

You have one very strong sunlight coming from the top left of the image. Yet, the sky suggests clouds. In a cloudy setting like that, the light is much more diffuse, "surround", making much softer shadows (see the very hard shadows around his eye that almost hide them). You could go for a 3-point lighting or just strengthen the environment lighting.

And a tiny detail: snowflakes should be slightly motion blurred.


Overall, despite an overall lack of polish, the image manages to tell its story. Good job here.

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Ismar33 [2018-06-28 13:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Great job!

I found this art on ProjectComment and I was really blown away. The amount of detail on this piece is really strong and good. It shows that you really went out of your way to bring this character to life and that payed off quite nicely. Well done.

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LanawynTheBlueElf [2018-06-26 14:30:34 +0000 UTC]

great

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embers0ashes [2018-06-23 13:48:52 +0000 UTC]

I saw your work at :iconprojectcomment:
Personally I like this,
though one thing I would have done is brighten the persons eyes a little so I can see more detail there.
and possibly (even though the background is blurry) added maybe a little more in the background it looks like you have one tree, I would put a whole world back there so it really gives your art the realistic vibe I assume you are going for.
it also looks like his arm may be extended behind him, maybe next time turn the body more to see his arm fully extended so you know that is what it is forsure doing so it doesnt look like the hand with the fire ball is coming from nowhere

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embers0ashes In reply to embers0ashes [2018-06-23 13:50:16 +0000 UTC]

again these are NIT PICks cause this is so freakign great

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HazelRose3637 [2018-06-18 05:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Great form Not only can I tell his race, but also his age/experience just from his face. Also you did a great job detailing his outfit and adding the magic embers in his hand. Magic is always fun to see! ^^

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N0ctrne In reply to HazelRose3637 [2018-06-18 19:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad it's clear that he's a high elf. I was afraid that the blue cast to the image had washed the yellow tones in his skin out too much.

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Eichenfels [2018-06-16 18:52:43 +0000 UTC]

My dear friend, i like it. I saw your work at :iconprojectcomment:


and this is the second piece of art from you that got an instant Fav from me.

Your shades and style is pretty good and i must say there is from the characters side not many i can tell you to do better. Also the light reflecting at the chin is pretty cool. The only thing i don't like that much is the blurry background. Even if it should be blurry, i would make it a bit more sharp so it is more clear what it is. I assume it is a tree, but at first sight, i thought it could be a cloud or dust from an bombing, till i looked closer. Your description is pretty cool, like the fanfiction so far, is it yours?


Hope I could help a little bit, go on with your fine work, i really like it.


Greetings


"Eichenfels"

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N0ctrne In reply to Eichenfels [2018-06-18 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, for commenting, and for the and s!

I agree with you on the tree. I was more concerned with the character while making this, plus I'd been staring at it for 8+ hours, so it was easy for me to tell what the background was. But looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it would be hard to tell. I'll try to keep that in mind if I make a similar image.

And yeah, the writing is mine haha. I used to write a lot, and I've kind of been missing it. I have a whole story in my head for this character and another Skyrim character I have, so I figured I'd write a little and post it in the description. I was thinking of making a companion piece to this, so there'll be a short continuation if I ever get around to that.

Thank you again! It's always an encouragement to receive such lovely and thought-out comments.

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