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Nagi-Oki — An Animated Odyssey Chapter 1 Page 4
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Published: 2018-02-26 17:15:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 5815; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 4
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I had a really clear vision of this page as I was writing up the script. Drawing it was a challenge in showing Bendy with three separate emotions. Sammy was a challenge in that I had to draw a human face down on the desk. But I think I handled it well. Still unsure of what I'm going to do in regards of drawing the real humans, my style itself leans more towards the iconic style than realistic.But I'm proud of myself for sticking with it.
Anyways, I may not have a page update, but I may have an art update instead. I'm going to NJCC this weekend and I'll be away from my computer. Stay tuned!
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Comments: 29
This looks so great! You did really well with conveying emotion. Bendy made me feel things
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Then I succeeded, I'm pretty proud of how Sammy looks too.
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Hmmm, the plot thickens! Btw beautifully done with the blue fabric! And I hope you have fun!
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Thanks, sometimes it's hard to work with clothes in colors.
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Hmmm I wonder how ypu got here..
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I legit just reread this comic today.
Are you following me or something? XD
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Thanks, I'm trying my best here.
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That’s good. But make sure you’re having fun, too! If you feel you need to take a break, do it.
Just sayin’, stress is always the first thing that makes artists want to quit. Don’t let yourself get stressed.
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I just need more discipline.
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It’ll come with time and perseverance.
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Well, good luck and have fun!
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this is really good page 
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You already know how I feel about your writing so I'm going to focus on the art.
The background texture and coloring a great. They're a good set up for the focus - the action. Sammy is ominous and his coloring - his skin - that's dreadful with the absolute stillness in comparison to Bendy - we get that nothing good is coming from this. Bendy is nicely animate and sadly so as the truth dawns on him. Good job on his body language and expression. It is both cartoony and tragic so - well done here.
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Thanks, the thing about backgrounds in panels is that they need to be complimentary not competing with the actions. I like it but I'm thinking maybe a darker background would have looked better.
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Whoa...Sammy's skin is black, so you know things are good...
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I'm trying to figure out how I'm going to represent humans in the series.
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Thanks, you're too kind.
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You've drawn Bendy so adorably in this. Though I have a feeling dark times are ahead for our animated heroes...
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You're a writer, you got the instincts to know.
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