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Published: 2012-03-31 13:02:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 3536; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 10
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Biscuit's hair is longer that Biscuit in LLGZ comic....XDDDRelated content
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I like the general idea of this page; I'm assuming you made this piece digitally, because of the way it's been done. Going with that theory, I think the piece was well constructed, and I quite like the style of the drawings, because those jackets in particular can be difficult to draw (especially digitally).
However, I do have a little constructive criticism to add. Though it is laid out like a basic comic, I'd say perhaps shading it a little would add a lot more impact, as would adding proper backgrounds (don't worry, I find those tricky too). Also, perhaps using a clearer font for the writing could do it good. The idea in all is neat, but with a little more effort put in, it could be even better.
Yours,
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well....er..heheh...thx for telling me some idea...^^I draw this traditionally by Black pen...^^
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Oh! Sorry, I didn't realise.
In that case, maybe you could leave the text bubbles blank and add the text by computer?
(Sorry, I find it harder to tell when something's been scanned.) (If it was photographed not scanned, forgive me I'm stupid). xD
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hahahah...i scan it...XDDD...No problem...oh...yes...i'm thinking about it too...I'll text on computer next time...XDDD
thx u so much...XDD
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Oh thank God you scan it - if I'd been wrong than that'd have been awful!!
And no problem, I don't know how helpful that was but I hope it at least gave you a few ideas...
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omg i drew a pic of a boy named berry awsome see [link]
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Those guys are really, Cute, as well as funny! XD
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yes...XD Bull is being bully by His big brother..XD
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