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Published: 2015-05-18 19:37:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1127; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Spanish:En su forma regresión primal, Diancie se encontraba en un estado de locura, atacaba a cualquier ser que intentara destruir el diamante sagrado, su furia cegaba sus pensamientos cuerdos, puesto que el diamante conseguía absorber mucho de su poder y con ello, su cordura.
Su vestido solía tener dos largas extensiones que llegaban casi hasta el final de su cuerpo; los cristales de su cabeza eran el doble de los que en su forma normal tenía; poseía orejas más grandes para poder proteger mejor el cristal; su expresión era muy fría, despectiva hacia todo ser. Además de ello, su tamaño era considerablemente mayor, sobretodo su cuerpo pétreo y tenía un cristal más en el centro de su vestido.
El pokémon Diancie, en su estado de demencia, podía arrasar todo, y convertirlo en bellos cristales indestructibles. Tras un tiempo, Diancie pudo intentar recobrar su cordura y volver a la normalidad.
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Comments: 5
canailla [2015-05-21 21:30:35 +0000 UTC]
A comparison is needed to notice how difficult it is to do something like this. If someone didn't like it, they just needn't have come to see it. Don't you think?
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BlazingDragonLord [2015-05-19 00:09:26 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, but this could use some work, you didn't really change much here, I'm afraid to say
Try seeing how Mega Evolutions/Primal Reversions are designed and maybe you can come back and apply what you've learned
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NanekoProject In reply to BlazingDragonLord [2015-05-19 13:42:33 +0000 UTC]
This is my first time drawing a primal reversion, so I don't pretend to make it well initially. Thanks for your advice and for commet.
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Silvan-Raptor [2015-05-18 19:53:52 +0000 UTC]
you keep flipping between his and her, if you cant decide if the character should be male or female you could always just use they or their. Or ask tumblr, they have shit like xir and jiz and weird pronouns that can work too.
on a design stand point, you really didnt change anything. even kyogre and groudon changed more. Its a nice redrawing of diancie though, so you got that going for you
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FranMagius In reply to Silvan-Raptor [2015-05-18 20:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Could you be a little more friendly, you know?
At least, I would appreciate the effort , rather than get criticize for criticizing , and indeed must be very blind you to not notice that certainly changes a primal form , it does not have to have them as "outstanding ".
And you could be bothered to look that she is Spanish, like me, and many people, and we can make mistakes, it is not our native speech, so please, a little more respect, thanks.
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