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Published: 2011-05-21 23:19:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1931; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 97
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Description bejitto ssj by bejita135 version 1.1: download for full HD view

line in color comment plz
if you have an idea for improving said me please

thanks for for this lineart from dbm 197 :[link]

bejitto version 1 : [link]
bejitto version 1.1 : [link]
bejitto version 2 : [link]
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Comments: 7

dbzfan7 [2011-05-22 17:43:10 +0000 UTC]

awesome man

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Naruttebayo67 In reply to dbzfan7 [2011-05-22 17:59:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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dbzfan7 In reply to Naruttebayo67 [2011-05-22 18:19:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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VMJML1er [2011-05-22 01:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Bien les amélioration

Super vidéoavec trunks sur sons terminator/
[link]

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Naruttebayo67 In reply to VMJML1er [2011-05-22 14:07:09 +0000 UTC]

c'est pas grand chose juste les lignes en couleur.
si tu vois quelque chose pour améliorer dit le moi.
je vois bien qu'il n'est pas parfait mais je ne vois pas pourquoi

ok je vais yeuter la video

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bejita135 [2011-05-22 00:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Okay here's a few ideas you might like.

1. You can make the aura brighter and thicker on the inside.
2. Give more color to the lineart (skin & hair) cause the glow you added kinda makes it fade.
3. You can give more glow to the lightnings.
4. Make the shades on his skin and hair darker (the are barely visible)
5. Also you might wanna add a few shades to his face and his pants (they add more details).

Hope I helped

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Naruttebayo67 In reply to bejita135 [2011-05-22 14:09:19 +0000 UTC]

ok thanks i try this 5 point for version 1.2

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