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Published: 2005-01-09 18:55:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1062; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 58
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The Magnificent DeceitYou were resplendent under the moonlight, shadows concealing the ugliness inside. Ignoring the dreadful pallor, I ran to you and intertwined myself in your halcyon arms. We swayed in blissful dances on the plains of ignorance. No evil words exchanged. No insects defaced this haven’s beauty.
You held out your hand (I couldn’t feel its coldness). Trapped in the cerulean expanse, I failed to see the decay accumulating at my feet. Black ash and dying embers of passion long spent. Hazy clouds defeated a sun reminiscent of former warmth. Wolves preyed on innocence; ravens consumed the rotting flesh of Affection.
Blind to all of this, there was only your face. Your snakelike smile wrapped itself around me; I lost myself in its charm. Showered by your lies and lavished in your deceit, I swallowed your words, stale as rusty razorblades. I drank the ambrosial essence of your voice, yet my lips tasted of bitter platitudes.
You lured me to the edge to kiss your fanged mouth and allowed my feet to trip upon the precipice. I gazed at you and implored, “Save me from the fall and I’ll bask in the warmth of your treachery.”
I could not read the expression that seized your face. Cracks spread across your cheeks like delicate spider webs while your eyes glazed over. Your hand left mine; I grasped the frigid air. I shivered as you broke away, crumbling before me.
The veil fell from my face and I saw for the first time. Suddenly aware of this desolate ruin, I silently wondered, “Was it my hand or yours that rent the sky and blotted out the sun?”
(full view is awesome)
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Comments: 7
In-Apt [2005-01-16 18:08:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome indeed...
breathtaking photograph, striking and powerful image...
[[didn't you got hurt??]]
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nasado In reply to In-Apt [2005-01-18 22:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the compliments!
ps, my lips are quite OK. the razor was very,very dull; couldn't cut something if it wanted to.
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shamaneh [2005-01-09 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]
This is an amazing photo (love the storyline too)
I don't have much of a critique, as over all the image kicks ass. I would have liked to see a bit more of the head, so that the pic would be a little more rectangular and a little bit cropped off of the left side. The balance seems to be to one side. Of course you could say that you intended that
Can't wait to see more
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nasado In reply to shamaneh [2005-01-09 20:22:54 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate your feedback! Thank you.
(and thanks for the watch )
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