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Comments: 37

123REN321 [2014-03-02 03:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Where is the teacher? lol

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Elaine-Eden [2013-03-25 10:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Ach so, Strudl ist ihr Name...?! o__O' Das ist n Spitzname, oder??? Das arme Kind! Kein Wunder, dass die so aggro ist. Bei dem Namen würd ich auch ausrasten xD

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AnimeGirlXxXmanga [2012-05-19 16:01:42 +0000 UTC]

OMG THERE'S A TOMBOY IN HERE!

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stephaniescarlet [2012-01-27 10:13:05 +0000 UTC]

AHA!!!! I NEW IT WAS A GIRL!! >8D

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i-am-tsukiko [2012-01-22 22:37:55 +0000 UTC]

i love the tomboy!

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Lila-Varney [2011-10-31 04:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh Im in love, Juniiiiii

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Naschi In reply to Lila-Varney [2011-10-31 22:20:45 +0000 UTC]

juhuu, i'm glad you like her *o*

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Tadpole7 [2011-10-31 00:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice inks.

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Nortstar [2011-10-30 13:25:58 +0000 UTC]

woh..Strudl is scary

but i like that page Nadja have nice expression on tird panel

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Stereophonia [2011-10-28 21:53:03 +0000 UTC]

*O* !!! OMFG I love her
Great job *O*

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Naschi In reply to Stereophonia [2011-10-28 21:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like her ^^

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OgawaBurukku [2011-10-28 06:46:37 +0000 UTC]

As much as I love your art, I am having a hard time figuring out how to read this. Left to right? Right to left? The first and last panel read right to left but the middle two are sequenced so it looks like it's left to right. I have kind of had this problem with the flow of your pages since the beginning of this comic. You might consider reading up on sequential art techniques, because your art is great but, to be honest, your storytelling is a bit weak in comparison.

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Naschi In reply to OgawaBurukku [2011-11-06 07:54:29 +0000 UTC]

it's all japanese reading style but you are right there are also exceptions. if the speech bubble is far upon the other it is read first though.
i think about adding a tutorial with some helpful advices soon ^_^

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JadineR In reply to OgawaBurukku [2011-10-28 14:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Hah, you know I have this same trouble with her pages too I think she mentioned once that it reads right to left. It wouldn't surprise me because almost every single German homemade manga reads right to left XD *eyes her books*

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OgawaBurukku In reply to JadineR [2011-10-29 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]

I think her biggest problem is that she has characters facing the right side. There is a pretty basic rule in comics that, for the most part, you don't have characters facing the opposite direction of the page flow unless they are leaving the panel or are looking regrettable. I only do it, occasionally, when there isn't a lot of action in a scene and I'm tired of characters all looking left. I like Naschi's old-school artwork but she doesn't place word balloons and characters very well. It's actually a really common problem with Western artists doing manga-styled comics, since they naturally read left to right. You have to train yourself out of it, like I had to do when I came to Japan. On the rare occasion I DO make an English-language comic, I will have to remind myself "left to right, left to right" when placing characters and coming up with layouts. This is why I always say if you aren't doing a comic in Japanese, don't draw right to left. There's just no reason to, but I see so many people do it. I bought the first volume of Carciphona by a DA artist as well as Sacred by a European DA artist and both were, for some reason, right to left. I do right to left because I actually release my comics in Japanese originally.

Glad I'm not the only one having some trouble reading these pages

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JadineR In reply to OgawaBurukku [2011-10-29 20:29:11 +0000 UTC]

I agree with everything. The funny thing about all this, is that supposedly if a German comic is in manga style and does read left-to-right --as would be normal in Germany naturally-- nobody will read it and it'll lose money because it's not "authentic manga" enough D: I read this somewhere once and I couldn't believe it. I felt bad for German manga-influenced artists. This would explain a lot though.

For about 2-3 years when I was in jr. high, I did my pages right-to-left (oh, young weeaboo XD). The funny thing about that, is that after another couple of years I drew left-to right, because well duh, we read left-to-right over here. However I would almost always make the mistake of arranging a page that would be correct in right-to-left but not the other way around To this day I still have to check myself so I don't make that mistake.

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OgawaBurukku In reply to JadineR [2011-10-30 10:01:49 +0000 UTC]

That's too bad about German artists! I actually debated flipping FaLLEN so it read left to right in Enlish but it seemed like too much work...

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Blooming-Pinguicula [2011-10-28 03:05:55 +0000 UTC]

I totally thought that was a guy ... eheheh ....

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addiction2anime [2011-10-27 21:14:55 +0000 UTC]

I must say, you are extremely talented! These manga pages never cease to amaze me! The art is brilliant and I enjoy reading them! I can't wait for the next one!!!!!

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Naschi In reply to addiction2anime [2011-10-27 21:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for nice words *o*

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addiction2anime In reply to Naschi [2011-10-29 04:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Puh-lease! You so deserve way more praise than that...unfortunately, your epicness has left me speechless...

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Naschi In reply to addiction2anime [2011-11-02 11:39:03 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you very much *o*

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vichu-san [2011-10-27 00:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work Naschi! Your style is elegant and clean!

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Amberrant [2011-10-26 22:00:27 +0000 UTC]

It's a girl! I was right

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Naschi In reply to Amberrant [2011-10-27 16:11:19 +0000 UTC]

hehe XD

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Blaue-Rose [2011-10-26 17:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow... O_o
Strudl is so mean... O_o
Erik is a hero~!!! X3
Nice job... X3

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trickster-eyes [2011-10-26 16:08:37 +0000 UTC]

I just started reading your manga and I'm so excited to read it every Wednesday!!! ...I have to admit I'm a little sad that Strudl is a girl... I was hoping for a love triangle <3 (Since it seems like the blonde guy from the first few pages will be a love interest)

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Naschi In reply to trickster-eyes [2011-10-26 20:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, that sounds nice. Thank you very much ^__^

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MizuKatsu [2011-10-26 15:30:05 +0000 UTC]

ohh how great work n-n <3

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Veruxka009 [2011-10-26 12:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Poor Juni! What a first day!!!

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Naschi In reply to Veruxka009 [2011-10-26 15:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thats right <.<
Poor little Juni.

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Veruxka009 In reply to Naschi [2011-10-26 16:03:12 +0000 UTC]

My first days aren't like that!!

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HarryPotter98 [2011-10-26 11:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeeee *___*

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Naschi In reply to HarryPotter98 [2011-10-26 16:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^o^

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T2T8-ToOTiGht [2011-10-26 11:17:43 +0000 UTC]

awesome page

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Oceans-Art [2011-10-26 11:13:09 +0000 UTC]

she is crazy ô_ô'
love this page!

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Naschi In reply to Oceans-Art [2011-10-26 15:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, i think the same >.<
Thank you ^^

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