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natespixie — Lay Down for None
Published: 2007-11-05 22:59:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description I know you're watching
and I know why.
The silent drama of it all
makes me sigh.

Everything is a competition
in your head...
If you're not the better one
you'd rather be dead.

How did you get so insecure?
How did you get so sour?
--Oh, that's right--
You let yourself be ruled by a man,
and gave up all your power.

Now your jealousy eats you,
it tears apart
the one thing about you that could have been great
-your compassionate heart.

I know why you watch me,
it's not hard to see.
I'm stronger than you, smarter..
better than you'll ever be.

I'll never be a prisoner
in my own home
I am free to go anywhere,
even alone.

I will never subject my children to mistreatment,
to a life of gloom.
My children are too precious for that,
I want them to bloom.

I will never be a doormat for
a man who treats me like dirt.
I would never let him think it's all better
when I was still deeply hurt.

So watch, dear, misguided girl,
and see how it's done.
Maybe you'll learn to let go of the sickness
to be strong, lay down for none..
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Comments: 9

happytrippykid [2008-03-02 23:58:53 +0000 UTC]

i like it, it'll make people be like, you're right, im gonna stand up for myself!

-good job!

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ghostgirl2010 [2007-11-22 20:57:02 +0000 UTC]

nice poem. u have talent

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natespixie In reply to ghostgirl2010 [2007-11-27 18:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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aint-no-surprise [2007-11-11 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]

This is full of emotion
and I can relate.
I like it.

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natespixie In reply to aint-no-surprise [2007-11-14 14:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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cuttingedgecomix [2007-11-08 03:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting read-sounds like you've been through some shit-I wish I could offer some support-but this is just the internet...

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RatBloodStone [2007-11-05 23:06:10 +0000 UTC]

intresting

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natespixie In reply to RatBloodStone [2007-11-05 23:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.

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RatBloodStone In reply to natespixie [2007-11-05 23:30:17 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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