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Published: 2013-01-15 23:15:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Westward wind brings leaflets
from far reaches, shed
of the Jennifer tree
and I study them
as parts of a whole,
puzzle pieces softly singing
truths
and tenderness.

And I imagine you;
streaming light
lingers in your outstretched limbs,
longing for the eastward wind.

I whisper into them
the echoed songs.

Your body pressed
heart to my heart, and coiled
skintight
to my skin,
seamlessly fit.
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Comments: 5

rlkirkland [2013-01-18 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Romance, a wine with many elements, every experience a tone to savor.

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nawkaman In reply to rlkirkland [2013-01-18 18:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Well said.

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IyraEMM [2013-01-16 09:56:31 +0000 UTC]

I think this is lovely. I like this part:
"And I imagine you;
streaming light
lingers in your outstretched limbs,
longing for the eastward wind."

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nawkaman In reply to IyraEMM [2013-01-16 17:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I rewrote and rearranged that part many times so I'm glad it came out okay.

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IyraEMM In reply to nawkaman [2013-01-17 18:58:32 +0000 UTC]

It's lovely! And you're welcome

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