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Published: 2012-10-01 15:45:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 790; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 9
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point Commission for *Kitty-Kiwi she paid for a 25
commission but i kinda had too much fun drawing this 
plus i cant draw pictures wiout backgrounds anymoreso this turned out a lot better than what she paid for ^^
commissions please ASK me about, depending on what you want depends on whether i'll accept it or not
plus if i dont have any inspiration to draw something i simply have to deny, plus, nothing too detailed
prices are in my donation pool on my page near the comments
ether way i hope ya like this ^^
Art/random_smeet (c) me
Blorb (c) kitty-kiwi
Picture for reference and inspiration >> [link]
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Alright, first-ish try at this, but here goes!
First off, I love the shading, the wrinkles in his clothes, and just over all attention to detail. but his left arm in slightly too bendy, It looks like he doesn't have elbows. It might be my fault, but you didn't quite portrate him as an old man like he's supposed to be. And it doesn't matter too much but the anatomy of the smeet looks just a bit off, his arms and legs need to be a bit tucked in.
Overall I really enjoy this, thank you So very much!! <3
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Not that bad for your first critique, to be honest. You didn't overload with either praise, analysis, or improvement suggestions.
A critique usually consists of an overview of what you see and reflect upon, techniques such as perspective, mood, and representation as well. You note this as an sum-up of what impressions you got.
The positives are self-explanatory, but you can also explain WHY you like something. It is the same with negatives; explaining why something is poorly done, could use improvement, or is unfitting will help specify things.
The analysis, negatives, and positives can go in whatever order you please. I got by analysis, positives, and negatives, but this is just my preference.
That's my two cents on critiques, if you didn't mind.
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XD nice zonzon... critiquing a critique! XDD but thanks for the advice
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I really love this! well worth my 25 points ^^
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