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Published: 2014-08-10 03:05:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2015; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 4
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"Please Amigo.... . . Friend... . Don't leave me like this... . ."STORY TIME!
(this is a mix of OFF's official story (Good ending) and the spin off of OFF called 'U N K N O W N' in which the batter in a ghost)
After The Batter lost his puppeteer to The Judge and was defeated, he lay there soaked in his own velvet pool for what felt like hours
The only thought to go through his mind was how he failed the one and only mission he received, a small cough escaped his lips; followed with the warm sensation of red trickle down his cheek.
And then another, And another... .. .
It seemed; the lighter his body felt, the less he cared about his well-being and more about how close he was to finishing his goal... . .
Yet soon he felt nothing at all... . .
In a attempt to sit up and collect himself he realized he was not what he once thought, after turning his head he witnessed.
His lifeless corpse, drenched in his own blood which had been seeping from his mouth.. too much at that... . .it was not a sight he wished to have seen
All of a sudden he realized he could now complete his goal
Though too soon did he realize this, as the sportsman attempted to run for the switch he was caught off guard by the fact that he was lacking in his lower limbs, never the less, he maneuvered himself over to the almighty switch
His loss was in vein, he could still succeed, he could still complete his goal--
No-
No-No-No-No--
Wasn't possible
Every attempt at wielding the switch ended in failure
His new form, although useful, was intangible
Another cough escaped him
However this time there was no red, but a puff of smoke
And then another, And another... .. .
Maybe it really is better this way... ?
but that was not a fate he could accept
eventually the room turned black with his own countless breaths that he continued to exhale
this was the end
Not only had he failed, but he would die just as any other judged Elsen had... . .Burned.
A new embrace filled him, it.. . was warm, but surely it was his new fate, nothing of the living could have found him
the warm spread, at first it was one side of his face, then, slowly it duplicated and grabbed him by both arms, holding him up somehow
Finally the smoke departed in the space in front of him
only to be greeted with the all too familiar cat mask
- "Please Amigo.... . . Friend... . you can't leave me like this... . ."
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pfft, i dunno
this is what happens to me at 4am XD
Art (c) me
characters/OFF (c) mortis ghost
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Comments: 27
CremePuffMarshmallow [2015-02-12 05:12:03 +0000 UTC]
I haven't watched/played UNKNOWN yet but AAAAAUGH MY FEELSSSSSS
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ViperLily [2014-08-11 03:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Zacharie should have been the main character in my opinion
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Nedrian In reply to ViperLily [2014-08-11 13:46:23 +0000 UTC]
im doing a series of comics as of late
and Zacharie is indeed a main character throughout them c:
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ViperLily In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-11 21:19:54 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I can't wait to see them when they're finished! But I agree with most other people in the comments, this picture is heartbreaking. Cool art style, though.
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mxedchaos [2014-08-10 04:56:30 +0000 UTC]
noo this didnt make me cry hahahah hah oh dear
im totally crying
this is great omg
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Nedrian In reply to mxedchaos [2014-08-10 09:40:26 +0000 UTC]
nuu
please don't cry QAQ you'll make me cry
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mxedchaos In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-10 18:22:54 +0000 UTC]
that was really great
shhh
its okay, i cry easily <333333 you're a wonderful writer
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Nedrian In reply to mxedchaos [2014-08-10 19:00:32 +0000 UTC]
OFF itself upgraded my vocabulary by quite a bit ^^ i blame the judge
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mxedchaos In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-10 19:35:25 +0000 UTC]
i totally understand, i love the vocabulary they use a whole lot, the judge and batter both have such lovely ways of talking
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Nedrian In reply to 0nedividedbyZer0 [2014-08-10 09:40:47 +0000 UTC]
XDD as with everyone Else's it appears
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Ghosty-Birb [2014-08-10 03:21:17 +0000 UTC]
Aaaand there go my feels again
Very well drawn and written friend.
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Ghosty-Birb In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-10 12:27:49 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^w^
I think I followed your ask blog ^w^
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Ghosty-Birb In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-10 12:54:59 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^w^
I'm askthepuppetsandtrolls on tumblr ^-^
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XxWhiskdreamxX [2014-08-10 03:08:00 +0000 UTC]
I think the guy with the mask kinda looks like Jeff the killer my favorite creepypasta :3
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Nedrian In reply to XxWhiskdreamxX [2014-08-10 03:11:42 +0000 UTC]
i supposes Zacharie does share some familiar traits to Jeff,
I've drawn both of them enough now to see where you're coming from c:
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XxWhiskdreamxX In reply to Nedrian [2014-08-10 03:44:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I don't know much about the pic u drew x3 I'm so busy with creepypast creepypast and anime I gotta do other stuff o3o c:
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