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Published: 2011-11-14 15:08:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1706; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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The Exile dropped her saber and tottered against Atton's chest. He grabbed her dropping his vibroblade.-What is wrong? he asked holding her but she just gabed tight on him trying to heal herself. Atton then saw the blastershot wound on her back. He pulled out his blaster but could not decide whom to point it at.
-To many of them. she sed
- I am sorry for what I sed to you before, I was wrong it was not my business. he replyed
- I am sorry too. It hurted me so much because you were write. I did joined the Mandalorian wars because of my affection with Revan.
-Can you heal yourself again?
-No she sed I used all my energy for the last heal. she sed
"To heal me" Atton thought to himself "If only I was not so stubborn and had this force training..."
Don't worry Mical , Mira and Visas are going to storm in and save them
After this Atton decides to train as jedi.
I had the idea from this drawing [link] by the sweet Had this wonderfull composition. Hope she does not mind.
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Comments: 17
Mirax-chan [2012-07-16 12:05:51 +0000 UTC]
Ah, that's a very good work, both the drawing and the writing
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Nefrit In reply to Mirax-chan [2012-07-16 13:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it... is not is a bit cheezy?
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Mirax-chan In reply to Nefrit [2012-07-16 14:21:25 +0000 UTC]
It might be, but cheezy's good in this case ;] And I really like the expression on Atton's face, good job there
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Nefrit In reply to Mirax-chan [2012-07-16 18:46:17 +0000 UTC]
So glad!
And thank you again!
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onlyRa [2012-05-05 03:47:37 +0000 UTC]
I love the art and the colors! Also I don't mean to be rude but you have a few spelling errors in the description. I don't know if you knew that.
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Nefrit In reply to onlyRa [2012-05-05 09:56:57 +0000 UTC]
Umm don't be spelling Nazi pls! I have bad English but so what?
I am here to show art not literature and I am very glad you like my art.
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onlyRa In reply to Nefrit [2012-05-06 00:44:12 +0000 UTC]
I just wanted to let you know.
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JungleCityHunter [2011-11-17 20:59:19 +0000 UTC]
The female Exile has faced so muchβ¦ but now sheβs crying and throws herself into his arms because thereβs too many of themβ¦ another weak femaleβ¦ some Jediβ¦
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Nefrit In reply to JungleCityHunter [2011-11-23 19:05:08 +0000 UTC]
Haters will hate Have a nice day dear
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