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Published: 2008-04-08 00:01:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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A change in ideas...I take a stab on another scene of my scattered ideas book...
It gonna look messy at first but i'm gonna go back and fix it later...
Hope ya find it not too bad and maybe...
provides me with some useful crits and ideas before i went to actually completing this picture!
Also, this is drawn on one of the bad quality notebook paper so it kinda thin and easily leave wrinkles and so on, and if the face on the top is kinda weid... I can consider kicking it out
PS: Mikhail, if you look by the river where the dock is,....
You gonna see one of my old drawing that I ruined
The girl sitting on a dock with bamboos that I never get the feeling to completing it
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Comments: 6
This pretty good. One thing though, did you purposely put a tombstone because there's a graveyard near by? Even if your trying to show death, it looks abnormal.
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eh... actually I don't really know that part myself either
maybe was on purpose because it was kinda plain there...
Well... maybe it was kinda a bit odd...now that I look at it again....
Thx for pointing that out! I'll see what i can do about it!
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You might wanna fix the nose up there. Gotta Michael Jackson thing going.
Don't get me wrong, though; love the picture.
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eh try to comment on the other one instead of this one... but thx
It just I gone crazy on that part and I didn't see anything... also,... I try to do it in a different perspective but failed lol
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I see the docks part waay in the bak there.
Then you should fix that one girl's left arm- foreshortening is too intense at that part for its perspective.
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eh... that is minor but okie...i'll keep that in mind and see what i can do later!
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