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Published: 2009-09-10 21:57:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 315; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description This was the first drawing. I didn't finish and unsure if I am. It depends on which one she wants. I also have another idea I want to do with her hen I have more time. Sorry about this one.

This is for

Suggestions or want to change anything let me know. Depending on which one you want.
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Comments: 48

Kataionna [2009-09-12 17:22:41 +0000 UTC]

The background with the moon looks so cool! XD

I really like both of them!

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Kataionna [2009-09-13 00:32:46 +0000 UTC]

THanks. I need to come back and finish this.

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Kataionna In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-13 04:13:22 +0000 UTC]

I know it'll rock when you do!

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Kataionna [2009-09-13 04:15:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks. I realy love the new icon lol.

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Kataionna In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-13 04:20:36 +0000 UTC]



I'll havta tell she did an awesome job!

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Kataionna [2009-09-13 04:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh I will check her out and let her know as well

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Kataionna In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-13 04:33:46 +0000 UTC]

XD HAHA! Please do. She thinks her icons she makes suck.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Kataionna [2009-09-13 04:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Already doneShe messaged me first hehe.

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Kataionna In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-13 04:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Great! Glad to hear!

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Jester1992 [2009-09-11 14:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey lovely, good work.

( Do you accept and/or enjoy constructive criticism?
Would you prefer a public post of this criticism or would you appreciate a note?)

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Jester1992 [2009-09-11 14:47:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm not done with the piece , but sure. I don't mind. I'm not he happiest with it and started the other.

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Jester1992 In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 14:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok, well I was just gonna talk about the position of her features. Here eyes seem 'out' a bit. And with the background lines too, if you make them a little faded then it would blend and make it look like just part of the sky (unless that was the look you were going for, and in that case then just ignore my ranting). Hope I helped a bit....

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Jester1992 [2009-09-11 14:57:47 +0000 UTC]

I agree, thanks so much

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Jester1992 In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 15:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Glad to be of assisstance. (Also, your commission is pissing me off to the hizzle. lol. I scanned it and then tried vectorising it.... that didn't work. so i think i'll just color it in and then scan it atgain. I really don't think you're gonna care as much as I do about it. Caring about my tyoping is a different thing. I'm off to bed. Night.... )

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Jester1992 [2009-09-11 15:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Good night. I'm sure it will be lovely.

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Jester1992 In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 22:19:43 +0000 UTC]

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Jester1992 [2009-09-11 14:57:46 +0000 UTC]

I agree, thanks so much

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anangs71 [2009-09-11 14:41:19 +0000 UTC]

wooow yellow on the green its cool

i'm glad with the color

n_n

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Neglectedmemories In reply to anangs71 [2009-09-11 14:48:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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anangs71 In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 15:59:11 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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me3009 [2009-09-11 14:13:34 +0000 UTC]

I really love this one!

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Neglectedmemories In reply to me3009 [2009-09-11 14:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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me3009 In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-13 11:39:59 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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Nikita-KellyGin [2009-09-11 08:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!!
cool colors beautiful eyes!!!!!
you are good

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Nikita-KellyGin [2009-09-11 14:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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DamitaLPerez [2009-09-11 02:22:36 +0000 UTC]

I like this one better. The other one just seems to plain and I like when you make more detailed work.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to DamitaLPerez [2009-09-11 02:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DamitaLPerez In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 02:32:32 +0000 UTC]

I also am doing the 10 free sketches thing. Just thought you should know if you'd like one.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to DamitaLPerez [2009-09-11 02:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Just saw that

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Shadowsister [2009-09-11 01:02:00 +0000 UTC]

I like both of them. ^^ They're both so amazing. ...

Is her eye colour supposed to be different? First one it was brown, now it's pink. Doesn't matter really. ^^

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Shadowsister [2009-09-11 01:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Shadowsister In reply to Neglectedmemories [2009-09-11 01:37:54 +0000 UTC]

^^ okay.

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MeltedBrains [2009-09-11 00:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool expression

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Neglectedmemories In reply to MeltedBrains [2009-09-11 00:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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FlavorlessMuffin [2009-09-11 00:15:11 +0000 UTC]

The only thing that looks a bit off is the face. This looks great though! I really like the window look for the background

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Neglectedmemories In reply to FlavorlessMuffin [2009-09-11 00:32:00 +0000 UTC]

yea I had a lot of work to do. Thanks

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taisytowns [2009-09-10 23:39:21 +0000 UTC]

I think I prefer the previous one. The background is great and also the pose that she is in, but the shape of the face looks a bit off. That could possibly be the angle her face is at though, I don't know.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to taisytowns [2009-09-10 23:51:37 +0000 UTC]

I agree, I had a lot to do. Thanks again.

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eartianwerewolf [2009-09-10 22:53:21 +0000 UTC]

ah different strokes for different folks.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to eartianwerewolf [2009-09-10 23:05:27 +0000 UTC]

very true

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eartianwerewolf [2009-09-10 22:43:24 +0000 UTC]

I like this one better too, but probably because I have taken a recent liking to backgrounds.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to eartianwerewolf [2009-09-10 22:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. I might go back and finish it She chose the other

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MurderShannon [2009-09-10 22:39:50 +0000 UTC]

o0o0o this is pretty to! i like the moon a lot, its fantastical!

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Neglectedmemories In reply to MurderShannon [2009-09-10 22:42:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Akaiso [2009-09-10 22:07:05 +0000 UTC]

I like both of them.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to Akaiso [2009-09-10 22:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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DarkRiderDLMC [2009-09-10 22:01:24 +0000 UTC]

I like this one WAY better.

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Neglectedmemories In reply to DarkRiderDLMC [2009-09-10 22:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Really? I thought for sure the other..

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