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Published: 2012-03-18 22:18:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 747; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 9
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This is an unfinished drawing- Since the background is gone.Im gonna send this one to a magazine so I can win an Ace Attorney game (which I dont own myself), thats why Im uploading here just the characters, the unfinished version: I NEED YOUR HELP!!
How does that look? Good enough? How can I make it to look better?
All help is useful, thank you >o<
Ill upload it when finished, I promise
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aaaaaaaah ace atorney games are fantastic Γ_Γ im kinda to much stupid (lol rly.) for them but its an amazing series! good luck with the contest~ im sure you have big chances to win~
hm... about the pic... i agree with people how said to put more shadows. mainly because its a night scene with lot of lights *readed the first comment* this kind of pic for sure need a big contrast of shadow and light...maybe... you should use some layers in multiply/overlay for extra shadows (after have the bg done) and layers in luminosity/screen for extra light? : D not sure if you like this kind of tool... just saying cuz ithink myself that they are really helpful~
and idk about color the lines... if this fits the game i think its ok... but if you want to do it... the person who said it probably wanted to say to you to lock the lines and change the colors, likes, where is white do the lines in grey, where is blue put the lines in very-dark blue... stuff likes this... *thinks* just chose the lineart layer and select the "preserve opacity" option, so you can reclor it and also add shadings on the lineart... anyway i think its very personal to do or not. lol;
ANYWAY. about all the tips... plz follow the ones that your heart tell you to do o/~ *BRICKED*
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Lolol Im sure you arent. Ive played all ace attorney games- but I havent finished neither 4th or 3rd (even if I played them almost until the end lel)
Ive always loved graphic novels, you know
Thank you!!
I added shadows yesterday, I guess Ill upload the new version soon >
Well Ive never tried with multiply,luminosity and stuff but I could give it a chance 
Thank you for explaining it to me since I didnt understand what she wanted to meant /derp
I guess I could try that too and see how it looks- if not, just back to normal >
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what software did you use to draw on a tablet and how to get it and how to put it on DA?
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Urr I used Paint tool SAI, I got it from a page named Softonic (spanish) and how to put what? XD
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Ahh you have to click the buttom 'submit' at the top of the page
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yO TE AYUDARΓA PERO YA SABES QUE EXPLICO FATAR D:
aΓΊn asΓ lo veo genial ; v ;
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POR QUΓ NO TE FΓAS DE MIIIIIIIII
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Porque la gente que escribe en mayΓΊscula no trae na bueno.
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pero si sOLAMENTE GRITAAAAAAAAAAAAAN
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Y si te quedas afΓ³nica quΓ© pasa con la letra
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Yo no sé poner la letra chiquitita, enséñame :>
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PUES LE DAS A LA TECLA DE BLOQ MAYΓS Y SE PONE asΓ
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La chiquitita del todo <.<
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poniendo < sub > (junto) uvu y delante del texto
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Make something eye catching for the background, something that directs the attention of the viewer to the subject. An escape from a successful heist with angry foes perhaps? Or a simple Paris landscape.
Is the prize the soon to be released gyakuten saiban 5? I hope it's Apollo justice 2 *_* I'm super saiyan over excitement.really.
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Imma add the Eiffel tower- idk if thats enough to attract attention ;v;
The prize is ACE ATTORNEY 1 XD the first of all, but I still want it lol
I didnt finished the first apollo justice even if I really like those all stuff about crimes and mystery, you know me already :I
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sure xD and lights!
ah, Its still worth it.
Finish it! don't get lazy on the background! xDD
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AAA we should practice on not getting lazy in making backgrounds.
Its still good
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Its impossible, impossible i said D:
Nope, unfortunatly not :I And Ive just noticed its not like a contest- its more like a DRAW between all the drawings AND LETTER than they receive!!!! /dies
Ive got not more hope anymore lol
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WHAT. NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBRU!
Does that mean the prize is a lie? D:
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They just want free advertising !
But rhythm thief fanart is still worth it. XD even though you don't get the the ace attorney game.
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It will be released on 5th april in France!! Can't wait!!
Well, for your drawing, I think it's good and I suggest you to put a nocturne scene of Paris!! Maybe of the Louvre museum (because he's a thief) or the Eiffel tower? Or the triumphal arch? There are lot of Paris photos on google, you will be really helped!!
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Thats the bg I though since the very beggining XD Theyre jumping of a bridge on the night and yes, I hope to add the Eiffel Tower or the Louvre from behind XD
Mhm... Imma try to get some photos from google then, thank you >v< Do you live in Paris, Armonix?
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Ok!
No, I live from 10 minutes of Paris! (with a car and very near XD)
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I was thinking of asking you to take a photograph- to make the drawing unique, but nvm XD
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Ah sorry! But... When do you have to give back your drawing? I think I can go to Paris and take a photo... Well I'll try!! I hope I can do it
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Haha Ive already finished but thank you XD If youre gonna go to Paris anyway... Could you take a photograph on the Notre Dame cathedral?
I would really like to draw it XD
Thank you, really XD
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whoa! *o*
i think you'll win with this!
and about the background, do you already have one?
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Thank you
Yes, Im going to add a bridge after them. Its a nocturne scene, so there is gonna be lights everywhere- Hoping to add the Eiffel Tower too, maybe the Louvre, idk. And some evil guys over the bridge chasing them (?)
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No Problem.
This is a great idea! Maybe it would look good if the bg turns out a little.. pale? xD
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Pale? Hmm... the game is truly colourful, I guess how thats gonna look Γ².o
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ok, wrong word.. idk how to describe what i imagine >_<
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Maybe a bit more lights here and there! [link] <--just to show what I mean
And you could try to change the color of the lines a bit... maybe only shading it..? I dunno, I'm just trying to say something useful vkldngjsdfg
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Yeyeye I like how you put the lights, Im gonna try that Γ².o the clothes look more natural this way.
Colour of the lines? Maybe I need another explanation... lol
You mean, like change it into black?
I chose that colour for the lines because they have that colour on the game...
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I don't know, I saw some Pixiv artists do that in their tutorials... ;v; something like coloring some parts of the outline with one colour and some others with another... I don't know how it works. Γ²wΓ² But you could have try.
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Now I understand what you said, explained it to me, I have no brain /shot
I could try that too... Imma see how it look
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Ah, I'm glad you understood! ^v^ However, I'm not that good so I'm just trying to help but mine are not the suggestions of a good artist ;v; I'm trying things out too.
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maybe more shading ? but its rlly nice the picture and cute =v=
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More Shading, Imma try that Γ²vo Thank you!
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