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Published: 2006-12-10 22:53:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2713; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 15
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Description Finally, Zeheb took the weight off of Jaq’s arms, but still remained on top of him. He didn’t trust his teacher enough to give him a full range of movement. He grinned triumphantly, ignoring the sweat dripping down his forehead into his eyes. “I guess I learned the lesson, then?”

“Mmm, not quite.” Jaq used the slight amount of movement he had to his advantage while Zeheb was off guard. Zeheb didn’t even have time to blink. Jaq’s hands were instantly pulling Zeheb down towards him. Before Zeheb had time to protest, Jaq’s lips were on his.

It was a fast kiss, rough and dry.


HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~Umanix !


So, we knew Umanix's/Java Bee's birthday was coming, and when we asked her what she wanted, she said "Atton and Zeheb". We asked what they should be doing, and she answered "Checking each other's equipment".

As so many times before, me and had no choice but to grant the birthday girl her wish! Not that we objected... much. >_> And personally, I thought that it was about damn time I brought some cookies to my female viewers too!

Here's the whole awesome story behind the picture, read it, it's distrubingly sexy - and also reveals what truly happened after the moment in the picture (and you do want to know anyway): [link]
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Comments: 48

bbb35 [2013-02-12 21:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Hawt couple!!

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uppuN [2009-01-08 03:02:47 +0000 UTC]

uijui! miesrakkautta

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NeitiCora In reply to uppuN [2009-08-30 00:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Mikäs sen kauniimpaa.

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akusma [2008-03-07 18:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Your styles so comic like and I love it!

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CHutsell [2007-09-02 01:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Wowsers! That's amazing!

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NeitiCora In reply to CHutsell [2007-09-10 22:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CHutsell In reply to NeitiCora [2007-09-11 01:06:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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plangkye [2007-08-09 21:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Uh, I think I need to go read that story now. o_o

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NeitiCora In reply to plangkye [2007-09-10 22:09:09 +0000 UTC]

I highly recommend it.

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objectivegray [2007-07-18 06:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I wasn't going to comment because it's older, but I can't help it. xoxo GAH!!!! Very, very nice. I think I'll put this somewhere and stare at it often.

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objectivegray In reply to objectivegray [2007-09-12 17:35:55 +0000 UTC]

This is one I saw before I got my fanart account, hehe. I love it! Not oly is it well-done, but it made me want to know more about your OC. I'm pretty sure I faved it on *VernaJast , too. If not, I will today.

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NeitiCora In reply to objectivegray [2007-09-10 22:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Comments in older pictures are much appreciated too.

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objectivegray In reply to NeitiCora [2007-09-12 17:36:50 +0000 UTC]

[ack! I replied to the wrong reply... Typical, ha ha.]

This is one I saw before I got my fanart account, hehe. I love it! Not only is it well-done, but it made me want to know more about your OC. I'm pretty sure I faved it on *VernaJast , too. If not, I will today.

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VaguelyFamiliar [2007-03-31 21:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Shiny! I really like the pose. And also the sweat. And also the hot.

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NeitiCora In reply to VaguelyFamiliar [2007-04-01 14:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you. I like the hot too - drawing this was so incredibly fun!

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Blue-Ark [2007-03-23 06:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Well now. This is just NICE! Nothing like two well built, sweaty guys getting ready to have at it!

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NeitiCora In reply to Blue-Ark [2007-03-24 17:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Can't disagree with you on that!

I'm really glad you enjoyed the piece, and thanks for commenting!

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Maquaii [2006-12-31 18:51:32 +0000 UTC]

I've always found some of your stuff disturbing, but always so well done. but it leads me to ask a question i've asked before. who was together with that girl, and who was the mean fellah. and what is going on in your head ? and Atton? man you're mean!

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NeitiCora In reply to Maquaii [2007-01-03 21:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Looooooooooool xD Oh Maq... <3 It's complicated! There is no clear good and bad... at the beginning they were all bad guys!

So... Once upon a time there was Keira (the pale blond girl), she was a Sith, had Myo (the mean, dark, bearded guy with black hair) as her lover. They had a son Zaid (of which Myo only found out a little before he died). Keira started to turn back to the light side as a result of being unable to get rid of her own child, met Zeheb (the tan, bald guy) and so Keira and Zeheb got their angsty love story thing going on... too bad neither Keira nor Zeheb (no, don't even think THAT, Zeheb wasn't with Myo. Ever. Except in our imaginations cause they're so hawt, both of them.) ever really got over Myo, so for a while it was sort of a triangle, until Myo died.

Why Atton? Zeheb's backstory says he trained with Atton... x) I swear it wasn't my idea, so the *real* question is... what's going on inside PhantomMenace's, Noneko's and RevansPetDuck's heads... ;D

Thank you for the comment and the support, darling! <3 Show us some Maq art!

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Umanix [2006-12-12 01:11:53 +0000 UTC]

XD

But wait! There seems to be a problem....

No matter how many times I this piece, I only see it appear once in my faved gallery!

T_T

Thank you for this LOVELY man on man action picture, dearie. I love it sooo much.

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NeitiCora In reply to Umanix [2006-12-14 19:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, glad you liked it, considering you're the one who made me do this! xD

And LOL about faving - I'm all happy with that one fave too... <3

Once again, Happy Birthday, and love you too.

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Firera [2006-12-11 18:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Weee~~ Men/men... <3

I drool for yeh.

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NeitiCora In reply to Firera [2006-12-14 19:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Join the club, we still have plenty of drool buckets to go. ;D <3

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Firera In reply to NeitiCora [2006-12-15 13:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Gimme two.

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Affirmation26 [2006-12-11 07:01:05 +0000 UTC]

already told you, OMG! I LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW! >_> *forces Atton and Zeheb to get it on and watches* >_>

your so rawk babe, Faving!

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NeitiCora In reply to Affirmation26 [2006-12-14 19:04:34 +0000 UTC]

I always love you too. x)

But noooeeeeees! You have any idea how traumatized Zeheb will be if Atton actually got it on with him! Keira would have to spend the rest of her life giving poor Zhebbie healing secs... (not that she'd be complaining, tbh)

Thank you for the comment and the +faveeee! <333

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Affirmation26 In reply to NeitiCora [2006-12-15 00:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Nothing like a scared man getting mouth to mouth from an another dude >>

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PirateRose [2006-12-11 06:37:00 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUUU! NOT AGAIN! *tries to heal the hole ripped in the force once again*

Jeez, what is it that makes people think Atton is homosexual anyways. I just don't see it....

And I hate how these drawings always look good too because then I end up stareing at them angry and amazed at the same time. X.x

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NeitiCora In reply to PirateRose [2006-12-14 19:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Awww, I'm sorryyyy! They totally made me! Not that I really objected, but I wouldn't have dared to do this alone. Too afraid of Atton fangirls. >_> At least now I can share my safe house with Neko...

As for Atton's sexuality, I don't really think we're stating anything about it here. Equal-opportunity kind of man, as the ficlet said.

Thank you lots for commenting again!

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DarthFar [2006-12-11 03:46:31 +0000 UTC]

I am *SO* sorry, Cora. I was appreciating how well you pulled off the anatomy (can't draw muscles to save my life) and pose and the grass, ... and then I scrolled down and saw 'Zeheb' and 'Jaq' - and I burst out laughing (and so choked on my coffee). I am *SO* sorry.

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NeitiCora In reply to DarthFar [2006-12-11 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha - I think you're forgiven, dear Far, you have no idea how much laughing it took to get that picture done... but geez, watch out with that coffee, I very much prefer you alive. I don't want all your fans hunting me around the forests of Finland demanding my head on a plate just because I ended up drawing a very, very wrong slash -picture, based on a very, very disturbed slash ficlet...

And thank you soooo much for the appreciation. Makes my inner, unsecure artist girl feel warm and fuzzy inside! Altough I really disagree about the anatomy part - I don't think you have any trouble with it, you've proved that quite many times... x) Anyways, thanks for commenting once again.

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DarthFar In reply to NeitiCora [2006-12-11 13:51:00 +0000 UTC]



I prefer me alive as well. And god... that bit about fans chasing you down through the forests of Finland is inspiration enough for a crazy painting ("Run, Cora, Run!"). Not that I'm going to do it, but you're more than welcome to.

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NeitiCora In reply to DarthFar [2006-12-14 19:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gawds, that would be so scary, wrong and amusing. xD There would have to be some dedicated KFM members like Winter and some gizkas, and probably every character you've ever honored with your art chasing the poor me...

I really have to try to make some time for that after Christmas, it would be beyond amusing to draw.

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DarthFar In reply to NeitiCora [2006-12-15 10:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha! Farlander succeeds with Force Persuade Roll.

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RevansPetDuck [2006-12-11 03:35:03 +0000 UTC]

It's gorgeous. And genius. I love you. And Atton actually looks like Atton now that he's colored. He really did look like Myo when it was just inked. >.>

Now there will be no confusion.

Hey... you never did color the Myo/Zeheb one... >.>

*hint hint*

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NeitiCora In reply to RevansPetDuck [2006-12-11 03:46:50 +0000 UTC]

I actually even started to color it, but never finished! >_> Oh my...

Thank you soooo much for the loff and the fave, babeh! <33

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gothkath [2006-12-11 01:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

I <3 it. Brilliant.

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NeitiCora In reply to gothkath [2006-12-11 03:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee hee. The RP of d00m for the win, once again... x) Thanks, darling. <3

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Aqua-Limeade [2006-12-11 00:03:24 +0000 UTC]



Snap. I thought I was over that 'slash phase'. HOW COULD YOU BRING IT BACK? How could you...

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NeitiCora In reply to Aqua-Limeade [2006-12-11 00:36:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm sooowwyyyy! But it just had to be done! I'm just afraid I'll get stuck with it now, cause drawing that was beyond amusing... and I still think it's the hawtest thing I've ever managed to put on paper, so there's a high danger I'll end up doing more slashy piccies... >_>

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Aqua-Limeade In reply to NeitiCora [2006-12-11 03:26:36 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO! EVIL TEMPTRESS D:<

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NeitiCora In reply to Aqua-Limeade [2006-12-11 04:16:03 +0000 UTC]

I would never... >_> <3

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star-pie- [2006-12-11 00:00:42 +0000 UTC]

they are so shiny!

and I am enjoying the cookie. Thank you 8D.

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NeitiCora In reply to star-pie- [2006-12-11 00:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Sweaty and wet and mmhmm... >_>

You're very welcome, and thank you! <3

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ocelott [2006-12-10 23:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Well, doesn't Atton/Jaq look pleased with himself!

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NeitiCora In reply to ocelott [2006-12-10 23:17:41 +0000 UTC]

I dare to say so.

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nonny-neko [2006-12-10 22:56:43 +0000 UTC]

<3333333333 you so much. Although I disagree with that last part.

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NeitiCora In reply to nonny-neko [2006-12-10 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Let me guess, you mean the parts where I said the story is 'awesome' and 'disturbingly sexy'? >_> Feel free to disagree, I still know I'm the one who's right.

<3333333333 you to bits!

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