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Commission for featuring his OC Loyal Wing.Thanx for the favs and comments!
Do not use it without my written permission!
MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.
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Where in this does scootaloo die? Where is this blood? Where is the alicorn? Did you eat lead paint chips 3 years ago when you were 5?
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I typed the critique incorect. The drawing i critiqued is this neko-me.deviantart.com/art/the⦠. Don't mock the wrong thing! Look better and then mock! You want to look at the wrong critique to mock me!
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You "critique" still sounds like garbage that an 8 year old would say.
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And you're smart? How to be smart without knowing what is critique?
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I know what a critique is. A critique is an honest opinion that is both polite and true about a picture. You critiqued the wrong picture and had excessive capslocks and exclamation points. You are afraid of death and blood, even when they are in minimal amounts. You have a very basic grasp of the english language and your art is very rough and looks traced.
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Your stupid and blind. Good bye.
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Says the person who wrote a "critique" for the wrong picture.
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You're so stupid. Now, bye bye.
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You submitted a "critique" for the wrong picture.
Said critique was essentially "WAAAAAHHHH! I DON'T LIKE BLOOD OR DEATH! I'M GIVING THIS A BAD RATING!"
Lastly, You have nothing but bases and scribbles so you don't even get to have a voice when it comes to art.
I think it's pretty clear that the stupid one here is you and many other people will agree.
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You talk about you, isn't it?
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Hmm. Nope.
I talk about a person who has an immature reaction to blood or death in pictures and submits constant capslock and negative responses to the wrong picture.
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Death is inevitable. It is the one constant in the world. It is just a part of life, as natural as breathing and sleeping.Β
Those who fear and deny it are doomed to have a painful death but those who will greet it as an old friend will pass peacefully.
Even childrens shows understand that people need to be more accepting of death. Applejacks parents are confirmed to be dead and there was also a funeral in the valitines day episode.
Once you accept that death is nothing to be afraid of, then you have the right to critique....
Well, you don't. You will only have the right to critique once you get your head out of your ass and start acting like a mature human being but saying that would break the mood.
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1. "Death is inevitable." you said? You're completely wrong. And i am sure that if i tell you something about The God you will say that The God isn't real because you're an atheist, but i don't care if you don't believe in The God because is neccesary to tell you something about him.
In the bible sais that "The God will come to the earth when the people becomes increasingly evil, and he will tell to all of us the bad deeds and the good deeds that the people did. And the good people will become Angels and the evil people will go in the hell to die."
And is very posibble that when this thing will happen i will be like 70 years, and i will never die. Some people will never die if The God comes to the earth very soon.
2. You asid a stupid thing or you didn't realize? Doesn't matter if you're afraid of death or not. It can be someone that isn't afraid of death and his death was painful, and it can be someone that is very afraid of death and his death was very peaceful. For the most part, the one who doesn't believe in someone, exactly that person hits to meet with that person that he first didn't believe in him. For examlpe:
Let's say that exist a boy named Alex. This Alex doesn't believe in The God because Alex is an atheist. And in a day, Alex sees The God Flying in the sky.
Now you understand?
3. How funny, you give me as an example Lauren Faust? She is a psychopathic person. A little kid doesn't know about dead because is to little to know about this thing. When you're little, you play with the toys and your friends, you don't care about evil and death.
4. How to react mature if you aren't mature? This is impossible to happen.
Imature humans can't simulate a mature human because they are imature, and imature is the oposite of the mature. And the death is something that you need to be afraid, because once everyone was imortal. You know why everyone isn't imortal? Let's tell you a story that atheic people needs to know.
The God made two angels named Adam and Eve. The God tells them that is an apple tree that if you eat one of the apple you will recognize something that you don't want to know. Adam and Evee didn't listened to The God and they start to go to that tree. They saw a devil transformed in a snake and he said to eat one of the apples. And they ate one of the apples. When the ate the apple, they starded to recognize the evil. When they recognized the evil, they recognized the death and if they listened to The God and never eat that apples, everyone was imortal. You was imortal , my familly was imortal, everyone.
The death is a syndrome.
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1. A god only lives as long as its last follower. By that, I mean that a god only exists as long as someoen belives in it. Once the last believer dies or stops believing, the god fades away into nothingness. This is most aparent in greek mythology where there were tons of gods like helios (the sun god), Melinoe (the ghost goddess) and phobos (the fear god) but, over time, their duties were assigned to major gods like Apollo, Hades and Ares respectively. They are what is considered a "dead god" as in they no longer receive worship. And since humanity will eventually die off completely at some point in the future, even gods are not immune to death.
2. "You asid a stupid thing or you didn't realize?" I somewhat get the second part but what do you mean by "You asid a stupid thing?" That is not an actual sentence. Also, pain is an illusion and not all deaths are painful. Pain only exists as a way to tell your body it's in danger. Denying pain only makes it worse. It's all in the mind and people train themselves to not feel it.
3. Lauren Faust is not a psychopath and people need to stop sheltering their children from basic laws of nature. Kids will learn about death no matter what. You don't need to baby it.
4. You just admitted you were immature.
5. I honestly don't give a damn about a book that is hundreds of years old that a bunch of people who never read it quote.
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1. You believe in the mythologic gods? This means that you're really stupid.
2. "Pain is an illusion", you said a very stupid thing. Your brain is to stupid to understand intteligent things. You're really imature.
3. "people need to stop sheltering their children from basic laws of nature" Yes you're right. Let's stop teaching kids about grammar at the shool, let's teach them about the death. It must better to have as the teacher the death and the director Dracula in person, but i am afraid that they will refuse us.
4. Yeah, in your dreams.
5. Your gods are older than the Bible.
Boy, go to the jail because you're good at nothing.
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1. I don't believe in the greek gods, I am using them as an example of how gods can die.
2. You are calling me stupid because I have a different religion.
3. Pain IS an illusion. It only exists because your brain tells you it does. There ARE ways to prevent it and people HAVE successfully trained themselves to not feel it.
4. It's spelled "intelligent" not "intteligent"
5. teaching a child about the concept of death should not take nearly as long as teaching core classes (math,Β literature, social studies and science)
6. "How to react mature if you aren't mature? This is impossible to happen." and since you aren't reacting maturely to the pic.
Critique byΒ INGRIDPETRY Β Jan 18, 2014, 1:24:29 AM
i love so much the drawing but ............... I don't love the blood and poor scoota loo her wings are lose and he can't fly now and i am very disapointed. I love u scoota loo i miss u i miss u very much, i really love u!!!! You re the best pegasus ever and...... I WANT U TO BECOME A ALICORN LIke twilight spARKLE!!!!!!!!! AND U DIE NOW!!!! I REALLY CRYNG A LOT THIS DRAWING IT'S VERY SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD WHY SCOOTA LOO DIES IN THIS DRAWING??????? HHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHH?????? I REALLY LOVE SCOOOOOTTTYYYYYYY AND I DONT LOVE THE BLOODS AND HER DIES AND HAAAAATTTEEEEEEEE HHAAATTEEEEEEEEEEEEE HHHAAAATTEEEEEEE GOOOONNAAAAAA HHHHAAAATTTEEEEEEEEEE
I don't think that is considered mature. Therefore you admitted you are not mature.
7.You know the only place that says god is older than the bible? The bible. The book that people quote to try and get rid of things like basic human rights but completely neglect the passages that say shit like "If a person beats a slave and it dies then he must pay the owner, however, if the slave survives than the man owes the owner nothing."
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You're completly wrong, but nevermind. Do you want me to show you a photo with me to see that i am an adult?
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You have failed to give a valid reason as to why I am wrong. Also, it's not a matter of age, it's a matter of maturity. No madder how you look at it, your response o that one picture was not mature.
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ingridpetryartcreations.blogsp⦠Wow. Such adult, wow, much grown.
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Maturity is not determined by age.
And I still don't see your proof of me being immature.
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What? I never called you immature??? I was just showing you a picture of the girl.
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Sorry, I got confused for a moment. I mistook you for the only other person in this thread. There's also no reason for you to post a random link. So...
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And you think that you're mature?
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Do you have proof i'm not?
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Present it. If you have proof that I was responding immature, then present. I presented my argument with evidence to back it up so now it's your turn to back up yours with valid evidence.
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You want to say that ehen you have proof you'reΒ immature? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!
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I have proof you are immature. You claim to have proof that I am acting mature and yet you are not presenting it. If you have proof that I am mature, then show me. Give me an example of me acting immature recently.
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1. Like every-child, you intrude in other people's discussion.
2. Like every-child, you want to convince me with something non-existent.
3. Like every-child, you're angry when you don't have proof.
4. You're paranoid like a child.
5. You draw like a child.
6. Like every-child, you know nothing.
7. Like every-child, you love to contradict.
8. Like every-child, you want to prove that you're mature just because you're immature ( the opposite of mature.).
9. Like every-child You can't calculate.
10. Like every-child you don't want to change your opinion.
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Β And don't be nervous, let's have a delightful conversation. You're to angry to be mature. And like i said, i was little when i writed nervously that critique. If i was an adult, i writed without caps. And yes, i write the same thing because the death isn't something that needs to exist. I hate death.
Some opinions didn't changed when i was little and when i am an adult. I have proof, thats because i didn't change my opinions. When you change an opinion, you change with sense. Videlicet, you change your opinion only if you realize that you're wrong. I am not wrong, i am very corect.
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Wow, that's... That is actually accurate to you. I mean, if anyone reads this conversation, they will see that you are the one who did all that stuff except the first one.
"Like every-child, you want to convince me with something non-existent." You tried to convince me there is a god, which I believe is non-existent.
"Like every-child, you're angry when you don't have proof." I gave plenty of proof, you are the one who didn't have any.
"You're paranoid like a child." I'm not paranoid and nothing I've said or done has indicated any paranoia.
"You draw like a child."Β
Β Β Β a) Your drawings are just bases and scribbles
Β Β Β b) I have not posted a drawing on DA in a very long time. My real art can be found atΒ a-spoopy-mod.tumblr.com/taggedβ¦
"Like every-child, you know nothing." I know plenty. Like, if I want to write a critique, I should first make sure it's the right picture.
"Like every-child, you love to contradict." Where have I contradicted myself?
"Like every-child, you want to prove that you're mature just because you're immature" I only proved you were immature. You are the one who said you had proof I'm immature. I wasΒ justΒ calling your bluff. Also, youΒ kept trying to prove you were mature by saying stuff like "I'm an adult"
"Like every-child You can't calculate." Show me where I failed to calculate something.
"Like every-child you don't want to change your opinion." You are refusing to accept that death is inevitable. You refuse to accept that people have the right to have their own religious beliefs and mock those who believe different from you. You refuse to admit that you were straight up wrong.Β
I have never indicated any anger in my typing. At every step I have proved you wrong. You are the one who has been taking this like a personal attack. This was never about religion or age, it was about your failure to write a decent critique because
a) you do not know how to write properly
b) you don't even care about the artistic value of something
c) you didn't even make sure it was the correct picture.
Nobody cares that you want scootaloo to be an alicorn. Nobody cares that you are in denial about death. Nobody cares about your headcanon. The fact of the matter is that you were incredibly rude to an artist and continue to be rude to people who call you out.
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Hahaaaaa. I love unique OC's. Not some reskinned copy/paste fest of an already established model. As usual, you did fantastic work. I don't know what it is, but it seems as though everyone can draw but me. It sucks. Regarding the picture, if I had any gripes, it would be with the eyes. I mean, the shape and color are fine, but the pupils are REALLY big. Like, it looks like the medicine just kicked in or something. I don't know if this was intentional and I'm just being nitpicky, but it's still something I figured I'd address. Not all that memorable, but still great.
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Yupp, the eyes meant to be that big and thanx for the critique again.
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"I made a vow to protect the Princess of the Night, and I intend to keep that promise.Β Now that she has returned, I must go and seek her out, wherever she may be, and let her know things haven't changed."
"Who, Nightmare Moon?!"
"No... Princess Luna!"
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Forgot to mention, the picture would happen during the pause.Β ("No..." (turns head))
I may have just gotten an idea for a Fanfic!
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Well if u have a idea for a fanfic, ill let u use him in it. His background story is on my page.
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I'll check it out!Β Thanks!
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niice, love the wings and the colors you used!
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Oooh, looks awesome! Love the armor. I was just thinking you hadn't uploaded anything in awhile.
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Well, yeah I've been extremely busy with school and other drawings
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