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NekoJackun β Commission: My Cake...
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Published: 2018-10-26 22:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 8109; Favourites: 156; Downloads: 55
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Lil Princess Celestia made a loud noise and made Raven drop her cake! It's the Worst. Possible. Thing!
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What if I were to tell you that it was *gasp* intentional.Β Β
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Hum.. I wonder what's happening here~..
Did someone make her drop the cake.. and Tia is afraid she'd be furious..? Or, did she accidentally drop the cake for Tia..? What is going on??
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Well... I myself was not excepting little Tia to be there. That was a lovey surprise from NekoJackun.
The original idea in my head was that Raven, from working with a princess who prefers to eat cake all day instead of doing her royal duties, finally snaps and trows Celestia's cake on the floor.Β
That... Really doesn't work anymore now.Β Β Β Β Β
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Ah, so that's what's going on..?
Hum.. well, even if we remove Tia from the pic, it'd still look like Raven accidentally dropped the cake..! I say the message would land a bit better if we do include Tia in it, like, she's eating the cake, and Raven swats it out of anger..!
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Thank you for making that suggestion. I loved it.Β
How about this for a possible scenario:
Everyday Tia greets Raven with a piece of cake when she comes back home from work, but this happend to have been a really stressful workday for Raven and she ends up venting her frustration on poor Tia. Almost immediately realizing the horrible thing she just did Raven hugs Tia and apologizes explaining she just had a really bad day.Β Β
What you think? Realistic? Out of character?
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Yea, that could work.. and of course realistic too..!
Actually that'd make a good scene..! She's just venting on Lil Tia about her frustration and how stressful it was at work..! Raven wouldn't even need to apologize, she should just thank Tia for listening to her problem..!
Oh wait.. unless you're talking about Raven, being under tremendous amount of stress, letting out her anger on Lil Tia who has nothing to do with it..?
Well, that's scary.. hahah..! But yeah, still realistic, though..! It does happen sometimes, when you're so frustrated and end up saying stuff you don't mean..!
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The second one.
I definitely had moments like those (not proud of any of them), sometimes life can be just too much.
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Everyone has those moments..!
Well, anyway.. back to the pic, it's all about expression and body language..! When Neko showed me the sketch to this pic, I didn't know that Raven was intentionally dropping the cake.. I just assumed she dropped the cake by accident~..!
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yeah...
Without the "murder face" added in the coloring stage and the overall dark tones it would look like she just dropped the cake accidentally.
Raven: Oh no, Princess Celestia's cake! ... ... What do I do? WHAT DO I DO? The royal baker told me the last aide who dropped a cake had to do a walk of shame to avoid being fired.Β Β Β
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Hum.. have you seen Neko's original sketch for this? It does have (supposedly) a murder face..! But yes, it still looks like as if Raven dropped it by accident and super worried she'd be punished..! Ahahaha..!
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No... He didn't send me the sketch.
The drawing had another version where Celestia mouth was visible, but I thought she looked "Evil" and asked if he could change it a little.Β
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Aah, I see.. yea I saw that version too~..
Well, anyway back to Raven.. uh.. I guess I have nothing else to say, already stated my point!
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Have a nice day (or night).
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I like her in "Coffee" colorsΒ
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Tia: Nuuuuuuu! Not my caaaaaake!
Raven: Oh crap!
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Raven: I'm so sorry Tia. I didn't mean t...
Tia: ONE MILLION YEARS DUNGEON!
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1st noooooooooooooooo not the cake XD
2nd and she looks evil hot
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1st Yes
2nd That's NekoJackun's specialty.Β Β
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This deserves a 400+ commented thread section
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Veo que de nuevo haces comisiones en lugar de tu comic.
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Woona: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSΒ
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WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????????
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Woona: YOU NEVER SHARE!
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: THATS NOT TRUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
: i give you the leftovers sometimesΒ Β
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ΒΏEn quΓ© capitulo de la serie aparece Raven? ΒΏo es un OC que se volvio famoso?
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Raven (Unicorn) aparece por primera vez en el episodio "The Crystal Empire"Β como ayudante de la Princesa Celestia, pero tambian hay una Raven (Earth Pony) en "Luna Eclipsed" "Filli Vanilli" "Spice Up Your Life".
Algunos Bronies tanbien llaman a el Earth Pony Raven "Writing Desk" y piensan que ella podria ser una ayudante de Mayor Mare.
(O... Tal vez algo mas. derpibooru.org/441783?q=writin⦠)
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Oh nose not de cake!
I was gonna do a funny dialog thing but I can't tell if she did it intentionally or if it was an accident.
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It was intentional, but not with evil intent.
Raven was just really stressed from work and ended up venting her frustration on poor Tia (and her cake).
She apologized later, of course. We all have our bad days.Β Β Β
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Out of curiosity... What was you funny dialog idea?
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Well I don't know if it was as funny now that I thought of it. But...
If on accident:
Tia: M-my cake!
Raven: Oh my gosh she's actually crying! Don't cry Princess! Please don't! I get some more I swear, don't cry.
If on purpose:
Tia: My cake...why would you do that?
Raven: Because Princess you are going on...a diet!
Tia: Noooo!
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On purpose is more funny Β
Tia: I'll die.
Raven: You will die-t.
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Solar Beam, right? Revenge for her cake Β
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Yep.
Never ruin the Sun Princess's cake!
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