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>edit< - thanks to constructive criticism by Rapier-25 I´ve changed that hand holding the tail. It looks much better that way
>edit<About time, I finish this series. Now, where I´ve finally got number one, I am finally closing the gap and it will be number six next, then seven, then eight; no backwards/forwards anymore - not that anyone would have noticed anyway *lol*
I think, this time I caught her quite cute. It is taking me some time, but I draw her alot in my sketchbook and I am getting close to what I want her to look like in the comicstory. As soon as I am secure drawing her with no further ado, I will start the comic/manga.
Comments/Feedback welcome - as always
Oh, and it´s her own tale, covered with a vibrating capsule, that she´s using to stirr up the shaving foam. It´s not some sort of tentacle coming out of her rectum, so all you anti-porn-freaks can stay relaxed: this image is perfectly harmless.
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Thank you - but it is quite old, when I was still developing her looks and image.
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it´s a metal capsule around the tip of her tail and it can vibrate
The Kyoko-Manga is about it, but it won´t appear before page ten or so...
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wow. can you send me a note with the link?
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It´s in my gallery but I am only on page three so far...
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as I say, it will take me another month or so, until I have reached the page with the tail. So no hurry...
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Huh... interesting use of her tail... but why does she want to shave off all her fur anyway? Wouldn't that be painfull, cold, messy and time-consuming?
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Well, personally I do not shave my bodyhair, but my wife does, my daughter does and a lot of my female friends do also - they never complain...
Of course Kyoko´s fur is much warmer, then the hair on my chest, but I cannot have her wear lingery, if she doesn´t shave... Also it is some sort of fetish and I can always say "The Alien-Tail-Capsule is forcing her to shave! Poor Kyoko!"
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Uhhh, right... it's just that for antros with full-body thick fur coats, it woudl be a little more laborious than with hairy humans.
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Excuse me, for a what? What´s an "Antros"? I´ve never heard that before...
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Sorry, typo there, I meant "Anthro" a more polite term for "furry"
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Oh, I see - from "anthropological"; "human-like". Thank you
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i do like how this came out keep at it,and youll get no complaints from me.but i was curious about the tail though
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The tail-capsule is an alien artefact and it can vibrate and send out bolts of electricity. It got stuck, when Kyoko´s put her tail in it (like a chinese finger-trap) and it has a life on it´s own.
The comicstory with Kyoko will feature this tail-capsule-problem, because it is trying to take over Kyoko´s mind and controlling her all the time, causing trouble.
And by writing this, the story is already copyrighted automatically
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hmm thats an interesting,funny premise
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Well theres always more than one way to skin a cat....Hehehe
Lovely proportions and well done on the pose. Squatting is always deceptively tricky to get right. Well done.
Work the shading more. The blotchiness hurts her shapes a bit. Simply smooth them over abit.
Love the sassy colour scheme. Give her a fiesty sexy feel.
Nice touch on the whiskers. They arent in front or behind but go through the hair. Nice touch.
Love her facial expression. Its exciting.
her hand is abit oddly shaped. Curling her ring and pinky fingers at the second knuckle may have helped the overall shape.
Feet are wonderfully done. Great shape and her toenails painted is another nice touch.
A hot piece of work. Well done
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Excellent! Thank you very much for that detailed critique! I really appreciate it
The blotchiness is really annoying and it is due to the stupid marker-pad (original copic, by the way). Had the same experience with the sixth shaving-pic. I will change back to sketch-paper, even if it´s absorbing more liquid and has a tendency to bleeding. The ammount of smudges caused by the allegedly smudge-free copicliners that I had to remove in Photoshop... the same with the blotchiness - I already did what I could in Photoshop, but still...
I will finish the whole series and then I will see if I can improve the drawings one by one. I need some time to judge the pics myself. When they are freshly done, I cannot see the mistakes. A mirror would do the trick, but I don´t have a portable one for instant control...
Hands - I find it a lot easier to do hands, when working on larger scale. This was done in 15x20cm which is too small for good hands on a full body picture. I will work larger scale in the future to catch the hands better.
Thank you very much again. You are a great help
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My pleasure. Glad to be of service.
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I´ve changed the hand, as you suggested. If you can find the time, have a look
And thanks again!
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THERE WE GO!!!
Thats 10x better. A vast improvement. Well done.
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Thanks to you. It is important to me, that you see, that I do take criticism VERY serious
Thanks again!
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I am glad for that. It shows you have character and you will grow alot.
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Growing is what I am here for
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OH!!!
Forgot to commend you on wonderful use of pens.
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Mew indeed!
Finally the first one! Now I can do her shaving her breasts! *lol*
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Definitely fun for me! I need a Kyoko-live-Model *lol*
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maybe lady monika?
i am sure once it takes off you will have line ups of volunteers
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So you want me to tell her tomorrow that you assume that she has to shave her breasts? Allright, I tell her - if you are insisting...
*lol*
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hmmm...that could end badly. on sooo many levels
disregard!
lol
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okay... so do I get my model, or what?
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