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nemo-kenway — Dealing with the Devil part 1
Published: 2013-11-22 23:39:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1707; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 4
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I'M SO SORRY ABOUT THE CONTINUITY ERRORS IN THISIt's too late to fix them now, but I'll make sure there isnt any in the next part
so this is set before 'Plume's Daughters' which is why Plume's younger and has a different mane style
Natas belongs to
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Plume belongs to me
MLP belongs to hasbro
So most importantly, what do you guys think of this?
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Note me the story you had in mind and we'll go from there
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How did she become so nasty? And where are her wings?
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I wrote a fanfiction about what happened to her but it wasn't great so I'll just explain it.
She got sent to deliver a very important letter and ended up having to fly through a lightening storm, she got hit by it and fell done a rocky abyss (probably ghastly gorge) she woke up in a hospital to find the doctors had removed her wings as they were to damaged to save, her mental state deteriorated in the hospital and when she got out she was completely insane and blamed all the pegasi for what happened to her
And that's pretty much it.
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I was reading that alicorn's lines in Ezreal's voice (from League of Legends) for some reason. o.o"
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I havent played that but I just looked his voice up on youtube and thats actually really close to what I imagine Natas sounds like XD
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So Natas is his name, kool
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Oo! What a cad *humf*! I hope she gets her own back on him sooner or later.
I hate it when males treat females like they're not even people. I hope Plume turns on him too after the way he's just treated her.
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oh dont you worry, she will! XD Plume doesnt just let things go lol
but as -very- odd as it sounds they might just end up warming up to eachother
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Warming up to each other? Oh dear, I thought Plume was smarter than that 
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Yeah, I know, it's why I said"sorry for the continuity errors" by the time I'd noticed it it was too late to change so yeah
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its my fault for not noticing until I made the final panel
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It's ok, we all fuck up sometime ^^
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some of us more than others! XD and I'm part of the some lol
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Haha, I have to say that I join in pretty much as well. I can forget signature markings, forget shading on something. Hell, on a commission I even forgot Celestia's wings! Thankfully I noticed that right as I started to color it and not after I had uploaded it.
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that is seriously something I would do! lol I used to always forget to draw Plume's scars where her wings would be!
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I do the same. I have a character who has scars on his face and I constantly forget them x_x
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I really need to mark simpler OCs XD but even then once I forgot to put to put a cutiemark on one of my ponies! :S
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I think no matter how simple a character is, we will alway forget something.
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Youre right there! hopefully the things we forget wont be too difficult to change next time!
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They usually never are 
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Woah,filly.startin a new series when you haven't finished the first one??be careful not to mix them up.
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I fancied doing something a bit different for once but I won't get them mixed up don't worry!
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WOOOOOOT BEST THING TO READ WHEH WAKING UP XD
you totally got his personality
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W00t w00t 
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how long will this comic be?
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Hmm I don't really know, generally I only know a rough outline if where I'm going and so on, I'm hoping it won't be as long as plumes daughters! XD
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i actually hope it will XD but i dont want you to have too much work so im just sticking with "do what you can handle"
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It might, really it depends on where I decide to go with the story!
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He's an evil trickster who is more powerful than plume, so they're going to clash, but something tells me she'll warm up to him.....
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There will be many plot twists and turns in this! But it won't be depressing so it's all good xD
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Really glad to here that!!
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It will be! Do continue the other one though!!! I must know what happens to the new pegasus. =3
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How can I join this group?
(I'm a newbie at Deviantart, how can I join this group? I wanted this to be my first group ^^""")
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Which group are you talking about exactly?
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This group, the one you posted this comic on. ^^'
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what is the meaning of this? that Nats fiend is talking like myself
(nice begining so far)
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then you and I have a lot in common my friend. Natas is my demon oc and he was made to be a gentleman who is actually the most coldblooded muderer you know x3
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HA! i just had borned yesterday, i am sorry, but someone who murder, is not a gentleman, i should know best
(that's not me speaking. . .is my OC E.Guess 
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definition of gentleman:
1. A man of gentle or noble birth or superior social position: "He's too much a gentleman to be a scholar" (Aphra Behn).
2. A well-mannered and considerate man with high standards of proper behavior. See Usage Note at lady .
3. A man of independent means who does not need to have a wage-paying job.
4. A man: Do you know this gentleman?
5. gentlemen (-mn) Used as a form of address for a group of men.
6. A manservant; a valet.
i dont see anything that points to him not being one. on a side note: he has never killed anyone in person. he made others do it without even realizing they did it for him
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