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When you have nothing else good to create, there are always redraws... >.>'''

This is actually the first comic page I EVER attempted, with some of my very first OCs. It never got past two pages... Terrible designs, flat characters, no art skill, no understanding of comic books, so design quality, no motivation, terrible narrative, lame story that I never gave a second thought--and it was just overall really bad. And I'm pretty sure I drew it with a mouse.

So the second one is the recreation... it took around 6 or 7 hours, I'm not sure >.>' The "storyline" is still terrible, but if I changed that or the characters' designs too much, it would be less of a redraw. The orange is a tiny bit overbearing I think, in relation to the first one, but I liked it, so I left it. Also, I obviously still don't really know how to make a comic, but SOMEDAY *looks off dramatically into the saturated sunset*

Again, I'm sorry for all the redraws the past month, I'm just finding things to easily squeeze out my creative juices, and I thought since I spent so long on it I might as well upload it. I also hope that I've gotten better at this, what I practice every day... So, tell me what you think..? (Some people are born with natural talent, and that's great, but holy crap do I not have any natural talent at ALL ;m; )

(((also, sorry, but you might need to download it to zoom in better... dont think i can fix that ^^')))

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When you have nothing else good to create, there are always redraws... >.>'''

This is actually the first comic page I EVER attempted, with some of my very first OCs. It never got past two pages... Terrible designs, flat characters, no art skill, no understanding of comic books, so design quality, no motivation, terrible narrative, lame story that I never gave a second thought--and it was just overall really bad. And I'm pretty sure I drew it with a mouse.

So the second one is the recreation... it took around 6 or 7 hours, I'm not sure >.>' The "storyline" is still terrible, but if I changed that or the characters' designs too much, it would be less of a redraw. The orange is a tiny bit overbearing I think, in relation to the first one, but I liked it, so I left it. Also, I obviously still don't really know how to make a comic, but SOMEDAY *looks off dramatically into the saturated sunset*

Again, I'm sorry for all the redraws the past month, I'm just finding things to easily squeeze out my creative juices, and I thought since I spent so long on it I might as well upload it. I also hope that I've gotten better at this, what I practice every day... So, tell me what you think..? (Some people are born with natural talent, and that's great, but holy crap do I not have any natural talent at ALL ;m; )

(((also, sorry, but you might need to download it to zoom in better... dont think i can fix that ^^')))