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Description "I said to motherfucking kneel!" Gamzee screamed at Equius, causing Nepeta's heart to race as she watched the scene unfold from her hiding place in the air duct. There was a sharp twang and the small sound of an arrow whizzing through the air, and Equius roared in pain. An arrow had lodged itself deep into his meaty lower thigh, right above the knee. Equius fell to his knees, then looked up quickly as Gamzee approached, laughing maniacally.

     In one swift movement, Gamzee snapped the bow in half, pulling the bowstring taught. He yanked it forward, wrapping it around Equius's neck and pulling as hard as he could. Equius struggled against the string, trying to pry it off of his neck, while at the same time fighting to breathe. The thin string cut into his neck, and small beads of dark blue blood trickled down this throat. Nepeta gasped, "No."

     Equius fell backwards, feebly struggling with the string. Then he lay still. His broken sunglasses slipped off, revealing blank, vacant eyes.

     "No!" Nepeta screamed. Her eyes stinging with tears, Nepeta sprang from the vent, an enraged yowl piercing the sudden silence. She extended her wickedly sharp claws and pounced at the enemy she had once called a friend, planning on ripping mercilessly into his unprotected back. She saw him turn to face her, and Nepeta quickly changed her plan; she was going to rip his fucking eyes out.

     Nepeta landed on both feet in front of Gamzee and flashed out her hand, claws aiming directly for his face. Faster than she could blink, Gamzee caught her by the wrist and stopped her mid-swipe. Nepeta's eyes opened wide in surprise as he seized her arm, holding her wrist tightly. She tried to free herself, but Gamzee's grip was firm. Slowly, he brought the razors up to his face and sliced three deep cuts diagonally across it. Dark purple blood ran down his nose and into his mouth, opened wide in an insane, gleeful smile. Then, in another impossibly fast movement, Gamzee snapped her wrist back. There was a loud crack and Nepeta screeched in pain, stumbling and falling over backwards. Gamzee began to laugh, an insane, unpitying sound that echoed throughout the room. Heart pounding, Nepeta looked up into the eyes of the advancing highblood.

     "Please, no. Gamzee please, please no," Nepeta begged, desperate and terrified. She struggled to at least sit up, but Gamzee kicked her hard in the mouth. Nepeta's helmet flew off and she instantly tasted blood; only seconds later the olive green liquid was drizzling down her chin. Gamzee laughed again, louder this time, and kicked her in the side. Once, twice, three times. Nepeta lay on the ground, dazed with the pain, and sobbed out softly, "Please, Gamzee. I thought I was your friend."

     Gamzee froze. "Friend?" he croaked out softly. "Friend? You thought I actually motherfucking cared for you, lowblood? Well motherfucking think again."

     Nepeta's eyes opened wide as Gamzee brought out a large juggling pin, and she tried to shield herself, raising her good arm over her face. Using all the force he could muster, Gamzee swung at her head; there was an earsplitting crack and Nepeta saw dark spots flash before her eyes. She lay there, struggling to stay conscious, when another blow came. Dark green blood pooled around her head. Her hand reached out blindly, and Nepeta suddenly found Equius's cold hand. She gripped it with all her remaining strength, and as green tears mixed with green blood, she whispered, "I'm s-so sorry, Equius. I- I love you."

     Gamzee's maniacal laughter filled the room as he raised his club to deliver the final deadly blow. Nepeta gripped Equius's hand with every last ounce of her strength and closed her eyes.
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Comments: 99

NeonGreenPenguins In reply to ??? [2012-05-14 23:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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aimee-pie [2012-02-26 00:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, my
all my tears to you, good patron.
and my hat
/tips hat
wonderfully done; i could honestly feel what nep felt then.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to aimee-pie [2012-02-27 03:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah, is Nep your patron?
Thank you so much, I'm very glad you enjoyed it~

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aimee-pie In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-02-27 03:31:18 +0000 UTC]

no, but my best friend's. she was sobbing at the end!
and your very very welcome!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to aimee-pie [2012-02-27 03:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Aww -hands ~aimee-pie 's friend a Kleenex-

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aimee-pie In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-02-27 21:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol
she thanks you.
<3

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to aimee-pie [2012-02-27 22:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Well tell her "you're welcome" from me.

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aimee-pie In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-02-27 22:17:51 +0000 UTC]

I will~
now
must
go
draw something
>.>
/tips hat
always keep writting, my good citizen~!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to aimee-pie [2012-02-27 22:22:06 +0000 UTC]

/returns the hat tip
I will try my best!
Good luck drawing whatever you are going to draw~ :3

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aimee-pie In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-02-27 22:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Tankou
Best of luck with it all!!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to aimee-pie [2012-02-28 00:36:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome
Best of luck to you too!~

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Fiver25 [2011-12-31 04:17:52 +0000 UTC]

any one eles ever notice Equius took a literal arrow to the knee? (this is awsome btw)

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Fiver25 [2011-12-31 04:22:07 +0000 UTC]

I- I'm not sure I know what you mean...
(Thank you; I'm glad you liked it <3)

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TheTheifofTime In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-01-21 16:28:59 +0000 UTC]

"Arrow to the knee" is a line used in Skyrim, a videogame. And I agree awesome story!!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to TheTheifofTime [2012-01-21 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh haha That makes sense.
Thank you very much~

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TheTheifofTime In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2012-01-21 17:29:28 +0000 UTC]

yw

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JohnVriskaForever [2011-12-13 23:15:19 +0000 UTC]

.....-sniffle- <:'I

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to JohnVriskaForever [2011-12-14 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much.
*casually hands a Kleenex*

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JohnVriskaForever In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-12-14 05:25:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks -hug- :')

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to JohnVriskaForever [2011-12-14 05:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha you're welcome.

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Mage-Madisaur [2011-12-10 00:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Whooooa, the emotion in this is piercing. Well done.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Mage-Madisaur [2011-12-11 20:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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azzash [2011-12-06 00:20:58 +0000 UTC]

The saddest (double) death of all Homestuck... *cry*
Write the situation from the perspective of nepeta is interesting, in general I have rather seen transcripts from the perspective of equius which therefore always cut the death of his moiral. You played well. *cries even more*
But aradia came back in some sort of ghost, sure they can play the same way !!!! *can't stop sobbing*

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to azzash [2011-12-06 02:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... This is interesting. I haven't seen any fanfics of this scene from Equius's perspective!
Sorry you're sad, but I'm glad you liked this!

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azzash In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-12-06 19:21:51 +0000 UTC]

humm... I read something like 3 or 4 fanfics from equius point of views, and all the others where wrotes from an externals, so cut off just after Eq'death most of time
I'm glad you write it ^^

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to azzash [2011-12-07 01:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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Acid-Hybrid [2011-12-05 23:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Please excuse me while I cry.



..forever.


Very nicely written, though. ;m;

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Acid-Hybrid [2011-12-06 02:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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srenkalee [2011-12-05 05:32:31 +0000 UTC]

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to srenkalee [2011-12-05 05:40:17 +0000 UTC]

;_;

Thank you for commenting.

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srenkalee In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-12-05 05:42:24 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome <3

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SpongeyYoshi [2011-12-01 18:38:06 +0000 UTC]

All the tears.
All of them.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to SpongeyYoshi [2011-12-01 23:42:46 +0000 UTC]

::::' (

(Thank you for commenting!)

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tori1510 [2011-11-29 19:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, have to say. Nearly made me cry.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to tori1510 [2011-11-29 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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tori1510 In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-11-30 00:08:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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Thebubblegumgirl14 [2011-11-16 12:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh gog...I'm crying D''X

This was so well written; nice and pacey but still descriptive. Keep it up for next time!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Thebubblegumgirl14 [2011-11-16 22:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww don't cry.

Thanks so much!!

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InCarnAte413 [2011-11-15 21:49:46 +0000 UTC]

BAD Gamzee. D:

This was awesome. Please, keep on writing.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to InCarnAte413 [2011-11-15 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]

WHY GAMZEE WHY D:

Thank you so much, and I'll try!

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Hey-Fay [2011-11-15 07:27:28 +0000 UTC]

... this made my teeth hurt when I read the part him kicking her in the mouth. THIS IS AWESOME!

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Hey-Fay [2011-11-15 23:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww sorry I made your teeth hurt...
But thanks so much for this comment!

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Hey-Fay In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-11-16 05:36:49 +0000 UTC]

I loved it. Its not often I can find a fic that makes me feel whats happening. This was wonderfully written.

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to Hey-Fay [2011-11-16 22:05:28 +0000 UTC]

This comment made me so happy and now I'm smiling so big it hurts my face.
Thank you so much!!

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Hey-Fay In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-11-17 04:32:29 +0000 UTC]

<3!

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machmaste [2011-11-15 02:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome and RogueOfHeart has perity much said everything that can help with the story. Then again I'm not that great of a writer and I hope I can read more of your stuff. ]: )

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to machmaste [2011-11-15 04:11:12 +0000 UTC]

"...I hope I can read more of your stuff."

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The problem with this is that I don't know if I'll be writing anything else... Except for maybe a revised version of this one based on RogueOfHeart's suggestions. If I post that one, you're welcome to read that, but I'm not really a fanfiction person. This was honestly my first fanfic.

Also, thank you very much for commenting.
I will stop rambling now.

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machmaste In reply to NeonGreenPenguins [2011-11-15 04:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh it was awesome. And your welcome ]: )

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hana-shiro [2011-11-15 01:15:45 +0000 UTC]

This was so heartbreaking, but you captured the emotion perfectly. I love it. <3

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NeonGreenPenguins In reply to hana-shiro [2011-11-15 03:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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