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Description Omg look she actually did it- she made a page!
Yeah- lol sorry for the long wait guys but I'm back at it
So once again guys go give your thanks to Arual she has been super helpful in making page 3 and 4
You guy make sure to look at the pages in order even though there are two pages missing from the series in my gallery, they are in Arual's gallery
Just in case you guys are confused about the order (super sorry I know it is strange)







Those are the pages in order! 

Now on to the topic of this page and the last two, I have been looking through the comments on the last two pages and was really impressed with you guys, a few of you have picked up on a few suspicious themes and I would like to clue you guys in that you have every right to be suspicious. Infact- you should be... This comic is not going to be so plain and simple- there will be many hidden meanings and vague messages. If you read over page 4 again more carefully you will see some vague suspicious behavior in Squirrelpaw and Weaselpaw.. There is a mystery in this comic and little by little that mystery will be revealed. I cannot tell you much but I can tell you that this mystery involves that outsider Squirrelpaw mentions in page four. I also am going to give you an answer that will only stir more questions than answers-
You cannot trust anyone in this comic- and someone who will greatly impact this no named main character- is the one that she should fear the most... 
Now for page five!
The three cats in the first two panels are three other apprentices- yeah there are alot of apprentices in Thunderclan at the time being- and those three unnamed apprentices, Weaselpaw, and Squirrelpaw aren't the only ones- there are still one Thunderclan apprentice left not pictured and there is still two more to join the apprentice's den not including the main character who will be too xD
That grumpy orange tom questioning Snowbird is named Sandstreak and you will be seeing more of him
that black tom with green eyes in the last panel is SURPRISE leader of Thunderclan! The she-cat next to him will be seen frequently as the story progresses as well.

I think sometime in the next few days, maybe tonight, I will be posting a Fun Facts journal that will display all the characters, their ref's and fun facts about them as they appear- I am actually going to need your help with it though!
That's right! I want your guys' help on coming up with the fun facts for each character, post head canons in comments or in a note about a character, for example: Squirrelpaw has a phobia of loud noises
and if I think it works or is interesting- I will actually use it and make it a canon fun fact about the characters!
The people who pay attention to the fun fact journal will enjoy the comic more I believe because there will be little scenes where you will only understand it if you see that one of their fun facts explains it

I also will be posting a theories journal of my favorite theories you guys can come up with!Next: 
Before I sign off with the Question of the Page- I would also like to give you guys another mini spoiler/ clue
Remember how I said you can't trust anyone in this comic? Well I did not just mean that about the cat she should fear the most, these are dark times for the clans, don't trust anyone, because there are more enemies than you can possibly imagine

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Comment below! Question of the page!: Do You Think You Can Trust Everyone Pictured So Far? If Not- Who?
A) I Trust all of the babies!
B) I don't trust anyone...
C) I don't trust Snowbird- too friendly
D) I don't trust Weaselpaw- too passive
E) I don't trust Squirrelpaw- seems to be smarter than he looks...
F) I don't trust Sandstreak- seems very short tempered..
G) I don't trust the leader- did you see how he made Sandstreak jump!?
H) I think at least one of the background characters shouldn't be trusted- they give me a bad vibe
I) I don't know who to trust!?!?! You're screwing with my brain Neo!

Art, Story, Characters (c) NeonInks
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
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Comments: 19

Mewisadorable [2017-12-09 19:45:29 +0000 UTC]

I, E, A, and F!

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Sisselwt [2016-11-02 19:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Hehe... he is a little dumb... xD

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LuminousBlep [2016-09-26 16:49:21 +0000 UTC]

C



SUSPICION ONLY RISING <.<

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LilyAviarn [2016-07-19 12:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Panel 4:
"Sir, detecting high levels of sass!"

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Thinking-0f-Her [2016-06-16 20:26:29 +0000 UTC]

I) I don't know who to trust!?!?! You're screwing with my brain Neo!

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GinnaSAN1223 [2015-10-07 09:44:10 +0000 UTC]

MY BRAIN HURTS
EVERYBODY SEEMS SO NICE???!?!??!?
AND I LOVE ANTAGONIST CHARACTERS SO SHUT UP
sandstreakisbabok

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Wonderbolt11 [2015-09-18 12:55:49 +0000 UTC]

ur art style is sooo cool

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Piper007 [2015-09-17 07:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Really cool comic also I love you're drawing style

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NeonRacoon [2015-09-15 23:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Hello Sandstreak~ and I think I spy Eaglesplash In that last panel oooo
I think if I were to doubt anyone...it would be the leader
Not sure why, they just give me a bad vibe
Keep up the great work Neo! ^^

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AmberstormSunny [2015-09-15 23:13:48 +0000 UTC]

F, but I think his short-tempered-ness might be a red herring.

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Brighteyes02 [2015-09-15 22:39:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't trust Sandstreak at all!

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spottedpool90 [2015-09-15 20:40:52 +0000 UTC]

C : I finally have a reason not to trust Sniwburd >

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GentleRustle [2015-09-15 19:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Eyyyyy so glad I found this comic!

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NeonInks In reply to GentleRustle [2015-09-15 20:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you^^ i hope you enjoy it! <3

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caprisunadd1ct [2015-09-15 15:29:36 +0000 UTC]

A) I Trust all of the babies!
B) I don't trust anyone...
C) I don't trust Snowbird- too friendly
D) I don't trust Weaselpaw- too passive
E) I don't trust Squirrelpaw- seems to be smarter than he looks...
F) I don't trust Sandstreak- seems very short tempered..
G) I don't trust the leader- did you see how he made Sandstreak jump!?
H) I think at least one of the background characters shouldn't be trusted- they give me a bad vibe
I) I don't know who to trust!?!?! You're screwing with my brain Neo!

This is so cute! I love the story so far ^^

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NeonInks In reply to caprisunadd1ct [2015-09-15 20:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much!^^ Sandstreak does seem like the obvious choice of who to distrust... If he cannot be trusted, than it may be for less apparent reasons

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ArualMeow [2015-09-15 02:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww yis, the appearance of pretty Violetpaw.  I can trust her, right? (Please?)
Out of all of them... I probably trust Snowbird the least. Too friendly d;
Flintstar seems cool though, all old and wise and what-not. O:

Page looks awesome! <:

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NeonInks In reply to ArualMeow [2015-09-15 12:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Awwww thank you so much ;u; I saw you added the background characters on page 4 ;u; they look so perfect and you stuck to their design perfectly! I had a feeling people would stop trusting Snowbird Violetpaw may or may not be able to be trusted, but I can tell you that she is good at heart

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ArualMeow In reply to NeonInks [2015-09-16 22:25:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Glad they looked okay~

hehe, good.

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