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neonsquiggle — re: immovable objects and unstoppable forces
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Description they all say sometimes
we need to swallow our pride,
but let me tell you
that the only time
pride ever fit inside my mouth
was when I was talking about
         me,

and darling, I know you are the same;
I can see it
in your eyes,
dark and so defiant,
I can see it in the way
you have never been scared;

and the catch then becomes
letting love grow
between a hurricane and a hard place,
between walls built and broken
around each other,
between wild words and war
so easily waged;

but you and I
could never quite capitalise
on quitting,
and we’re still waiting to see what happens
when you drive into collision
two forces that never learnt
how to
         yield.
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Comments: 8

Wanderer-Fehn [2016-09-20 05:34:21 +0000 UTC]

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comatose-comet [2016-07-27 23:02:41 +0000 UTC]

i adore this, incredible imagery and theme and it ties together so perfectly! Amazing job

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neonsquiggle In reply to comatose-comet [2016-07-28 09:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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pansydiv [2016-07-25 14:07:44 +0000 UTC]

and the catch then becomes
letting love grow
between a hurricane and a hard place,
between walls built and broken
around each other,
between wild words and war
so easily waged

Relatable. 
I empathize with this poem so hard. 

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neonsquiggle In reply to pansydiv [2016-07-26 08:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means a lot.

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pansydiv In reply to neonsquiggle [2016-07-31 08:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Well all I can say is thank you for writing it!

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emsoileau [2016-07-22 16:53:21 +0000 UTC]



I love the last lines of that first stanza best.

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neonsquiggle In reply to emsoileau [2016-07-23 02:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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