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Published: 2009-04-28 04:04:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 8479; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 0
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"Neverwas" (yes, the two words are put together on purpose) is an alternate timeline to 's Crack series.

What is this?
The idea came years ago after reading the fifth arc of the Crack - I only just drew it on paper now. In Crack 5, Vlad realized how much he felt he screwed Danny's life and decides to fix it once and for all. To do so, he traveled through time and input Clockwork's time medallions on their two daughters Madison and Jackie, their two currently pre-natal twin sons, Daniel and Vladimir, and one on Danny himself.

He would then travel to the 1980's and kill Jack from afar so that his past self would marry Maddie and adopt the five kids (six with Danielle, though she's dissolved by the time of this fancomic). The end results would be Vlad and Maddie married, living in the same castle he has in canon time (inherited from the Dairy King who's Vlad's uncle in her Crackverse), with five kids.

In Crack, this never happens because Danny prevented it. My little fancomic to this fanfic is the results if it did. Or at least a "What If".

What to keep in mind
Two things you need to know: you have to understand Tav's Crack series. If you don't or have never read it, you aren't going to get this.

The other is the name "Steven," That is Danny himself. Tav chose the name "Steven" (not just because she likes it) because his son is named Daniel. Because Danny is more recognizable then his offspring, he's the one with the name change. I mean, we can't have two kids with the name "Danny".

COPYRIGHT: Hartman, Nickelodeon. Madison, Jackie, Daniel and Vladimir are owned and developed by *TavalyaRa
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Comments: 32

ibistriceanu [2018-09-09 19:30:33 +0000 UTC]

OOOOO LOVE IT

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TheWhiteTitan [2013-10-12 14:30:47 +0000 UTC]

For some reason, I don't see the happiness.

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awren [2009-06-07 01:46:24 +0000 UTC]

I always found the "Jackie" thing funny...

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Destiny-girl [2009-05-04 02:16:35 +0000 UTC]

are you still going to continue with your love letters comic? i'm enjoying wyour work very much. Also i love the way you put the classic 'Crack' back to life...sigh...i juct wish the author would still continue with it!1

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neoyi In reply to Destiny-girl [2009-05-04 02:22:28 +0000 UTC]

I probably will get "Love Letters" in the near future.

Actually, the Crack IS finished. She just never posted them all up due to losing interest in DP. You can read the entire Crack series if you ask the original author for it.

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bbb35 [2009-05-01 02:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Kinda reminds me of that scene from "Billy and Mandy"
Where Grim is having a nice dream about the perfect life.

Vlad (realizing) Wait this isn't my beautiful home...This isn't my beautiful wife

Vanessa(Vanessa's voice speaking rapidly)
Same as it Neverwas Same as it Never Was Same as it Neverwas Same As it Never Was....

(Vlad wakes up with Vanessa leaning over him and Danny)

Vlad (Annoyed) STOP SAYING THAT!!!

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TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 00:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Your coloring style for this threw me at first- I noticed the lack of skin tone immediately and then that everything seems grayed. Accident or brilliance? You tell me, because I think it nicely emphasizes that this dream life is bland and something essential is lacking. Maddie looks meek and tired from the first panel, Vlad weary himself. And the kids, well... except for "Stephen" (I love his thoughtful expression!) all of them seem distracted and in some way oblivious, not quite happy. The not-sex scene was still as hilarious to me as the script and poor Vlad! His expression in the last panel, I just wanna hug him.

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neoyi In reply to TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 02:17:14 +0000 UTC]

I was experimenting with colors when I worked on the coloring. I admit the lack of gray tone on the people's face was just a cheap way for me to be lazy, but I was also trying to make it kinda...weird, for lack of wording. Like it's not normal, I guess is the proper way to put it.

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TavalyaRa In reply to neoyi [2009-04-29 03:11:47 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a great idea, especially for this!

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neoyi In reply to TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 03:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Well, now I know to keep it. Heh.

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TavalyaRa In reply to neoyi [2009-04-29 03:55:32 +0000 UTC]

It was an inspired choice.

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foxesdemonica [2009-04-28 20:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Man am I glad the story didn't end this way. Too sad.

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Bao-Yu [2009-04-28 18:15:12 +0000 UTC]

(I always kind of thought that if Maddie and Vlad did end up together it would end up dull and...something missing. Like a lot of relationships fall prey to after that determination to get what you think you want only to get it and then get all bored.)

There bored faces are good for the "intro" feeling of how things really are.

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tori-chan80779 [2009-04-28 13:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Vlad doesn't seem very happy to me...He seems kind of sad.

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MollyTheWanderer [2009-04-28 06:46:59 +0000 UTC]

So Vlad remembers the original timeline? That's kinda sad.

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neoyi In reply to MollyTheWanderer [2009-04-28 06:49:02 +0000 UTC]

No. Canon Crack Vlad altered the timeline, then removed the time medallion himself. That Crack Vlad, the real canon Crack Vlad no longer exists.

The Vlad we see in this fancomic is the Vlad who never got into an accident. The one who marries Maddie after Jack "mysterious" gets killed, and later fathers the five adopted kids.

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tazzy-chan [2009-04-28 05:33:26 +0000 UTC]

this is interesting, i never actually gave the alternate universe any thoguht until now
now that you mention it, id imagined maddie wearing non ghost fighting clothes if she was to marry vlad

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neoyi In reply to tazzy-chan [2009-04-28 05:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Maddie and Vlad are still very much interested in ghosts. They've always been since at least college. Their love for ghostly research still exists.

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tazzy-chan In reply to neoyi [2009-04-28 19:35:36 +0000 UTC]

no no, i understand that, i just figured maddie wouldn't be hunting ghosts anymore

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TavalyaRa In reply to tazzy-chan [2009-04-29 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]

I figured that under the circumstances, she would. She loves the field and in this timeline, she and Vlad pursue it together. It's not a threat to their relationship (like it is in "Masters of All Time", where Vlad probably feared she might run into Jack Plasmius and discover the truth), so he doesn't see any reason to object to it.

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tazzy-chan In reply to TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 04:03:36 +0000 UTC]

i see i see.
of course shed still pursue the field, but i thought since she wouldnt be with jack anymore, shed dress more the way vlad does, you know, prim and proper and all that jazz

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TavalyaRa In reply to tazzy-chan [2009-04-29 05:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Keep in mind that Vlad has a different developmental path here as well. He didn't become half-ghost and was in fact secretly nudged by the Vlad Plasmius still hanging around with a time medallion (at this point, that Vlad has already removed the medallion, resulting in the nullification of his existance) to ensure that he did not abandon the field. So he's closer to college!Vlad than canon!Vlad or crack!Vlad anyway and not himself prim and proper.

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tazzy-chan In reply to TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]

ah. i didnt take vlad's changing into consideration.
and it had totally skipped my mind that the half ghost vlad ceases to exist

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TavalyaRa In reply to tazzy-chan [2009-04-30 02:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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neoyi In reply to TavalyaRa [2009-04-29 17:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, closer to College Vlad turned super suave millionaire Vlad. *grins* Oh, was that my libido speaking?

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TavalyaRa In reply to neoyi [2009-04-30 02:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Implying your libido ever shut up in the first place.

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neoyi In reply to tazzy-chan [2009-04-29 02:15:28 +0000 UTC]

She still would. If it's ghost, she'll study and research it.

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Twilight-Deviant [2009-04-28 04:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh. I like it. Funny, yet very depressing.
Mmm. Bed Vlad with his hair down. I just want to attack him and never let go.

Dear lord. Five teenagers at once. *slit wrists*
Hehe. Steven. XD

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TavalyaRa In reply to Twilight-Deviant [2009-04-29 00:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Five teenagers at once.

o_o

Yeah, at least in the Crack the most they have is three (briefly) at a time and at that point Madison is old enough to help them wrangle them.

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akiwitch [2009-04-28 04:45:41 +0000 UTC]

This looks very interesting.

I love their discussion of sex. XD

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ItialianMonkie [2009-04-28 04:31:58 +0000 UTC]

lol. =]

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hermiethefrog [2009-04-28 04:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, this'll be very interesting. Now that you mention it, that alternate universe Tav brought up in Crack 5 did sound very interesting...I can't wait to see what's going to happen.

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