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Published: 2012-10-19 20:23:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2930; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 39
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(edit: I have requested a critique. I am more bothered about the story telling and art NOT about grammar. I know I have made a few grammar mistakes and would rather hear about art/storytelling than having a paragraph about grammar.)took 3 days and over 300 layers to make.........*dies in a corner*
My beautiful pictures got covered in horrible text bubbles, ahhh >.< (warning, huge file!)
Used tutorial for the forest :3
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did, though Pk had it taken down
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I don't really think I have a right to say.... cause it more than likely would cause a misunderstanding.
Its sad its gone though. Maybe if you note Yassui she might have it somewhere else and be willing to give you a link/the file . :3
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WHAT
YOU'RE IN THIS GROUP
EVERYONE IS IN THIS GROUP
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everyone SHOULD be in this group
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LOL YES
Though I'm too busy to submit anything OTL
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Ahhh really nice work with the colors. You always do a good job, but this is special! And with that white background, the contrast is just so clear.
You're entering Pikachu rank, even with work that's this quality?? Its really really good stuff
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thank you so much!!! (this has cheered me up alot)
and I only stayed in pikachu rank cause of my story telling and planning. which needed alot of work. But I've improved a great, so I think I'm ready to move up come mission 8 :3
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I'm glad it cheered you up, cause its true!
You truly have improved in all areas since Mission 4! I've always seen your work cause we're both Pikachu Merchants, so I see you every time judging comes out! I agree that you're ready to move up, congrats!
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destroy everything!!
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f*ckin love that
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wow!
Hope the forest BGs were simple, easy and fun! They look really nice! C:
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they were more than fun. They are so simple yet effective and I loved trying different colours. I only feel bad that I abused your technique too much!
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Nah, don't be. I love helping out so it's cool! C:
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...just... freaking awsome!!!!!!! and awwww to Lilith
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thanks jimmy. I think the speech bubbles ruined the awesomeness DX
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..uhm...gramar error at third last scene, it's accept, not except 
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thats another one. My grammar sucks DX
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at least it isn't that bad if you have people that help you
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true true, you peeps are too kind XD
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well Sai's limit is 259 layers, so I had to merge half of them. So if Sai didn't have the Limit, it would have been over 300
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aah, thank you very much for the cameo! i just love your style of coloring. ;n;
poor lilith! if leia wasn't so manipulative/if vincent were there, he'd totally try and make her feel better. :c
i wonder how she'll react to the fact that omin is in the past?
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your welcome, I hope I got her right! and probably not too well actually. But no one knows they are yet.
Also I've really gotta put Vincent with Omin X3 (just for the simple fact he's too cute to pass up and also because I was originally going to call Omin Vincent XD)
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
This is so gorgeous, so beautiful!I mean, gawd I am so impressed! The siloette panels are definately my favorite, especially the red one!
I just really love thissss
AND DEAR LAWD THREE HUNDRED LAYERS
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thank you so much! and sorta. The limit Sai gives is 259 layers. I exceeded that and had to merge alot of them, so yeah over 300 XD
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....oh wow this page is magnificient really oxo
I'm shocked by so much awesomeness
the background <3333 you made an excellent use of yassui's tutorial !!!
and the whole ambiance.... Damn i love it <33333
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its happened to everyone, though I don't think everyone with blame Pk for this
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oh, great emotion and awesome array of colors on this pages, and the scenery is done so well and autumn like
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(or sunset like..) meh.. anyways thank you! glad to here to feed back, and I assume there were no grammer mistakes 8D
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sunset like, autumn ish, they can be synonymous. and no problem. actually, there was one I saw "It was desided" instead of "decided". other than that I saw nothing else mistake wise with the dialogue
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god damn it. Theres always one mistake.
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it happens, usually can't catch all of them by yourself
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tell me about it. Mind you suck with grammar anyway XD
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