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COMMENT IF YOU FAVORITE, PLEASE!I would like feedback on what you like, and stuff.
Automatic thanks to for helping me with the layout.
Thanks to for catching the "One" mistake.
I tried a different style; I guess I wanted to make it less like a movie and float on my own style? Otherwise, I don't like it anyway.
I....hate the ravens. Lmfao I think half of you will hate me for my unproffesionalism and not-craftmanship if I tell you I only spent like...3 minutes on the drawings.
I encourage anyone to go ahead and make their own comic.
Page 2 tomorrow.
Also--forget totally about the first page. That is totally old news.
Yorikoma Kaiden is mine.
K.
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Comments: 51
DiamondWolf [2008-06-06 06:02:01 +0000 UTC]
Sounds intresting~ 's one of the most original first pages I've seen to in a long while.
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Parade-For-Tobi [2007-10-29 22:42:29 +0000 UTC]
this is so amazing you will so be a manga artist...if you wanted to be ^-^
I'd totally buy a copy.
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akokolupe [2007-10-17 15:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is a really wonderful way to begin a story. I am definitely interested, and I can't wait for more!
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rawr-vampirehorses [2007-09-23 20:14:06 +0000 UTC]
I love everything about it! The charcter is drop dead gorgeous and I just don't know what else to say, besides the fact that I am on my way to read the other pages. ^^ Good job! *two thumbs up*
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PazzyTopaz [2007-09-08 06:06:20 +0000 UTC]
I love it love how you set it up and looks really interesting <3
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Nepah [2007-08-30 05:15:19 +0000 UTC]
<3 you inspire me. i wish i could make a comic but lack the skill as well as the devotion. xD
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nerdgerm In reply to Nepah [2007-08-31 04:13:10 +0000 UTC]
you probably could if you tried.
It's a matter of having a story to tell, not the art.
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darkfire-kitty [2007-08-25 01:49:57 +0000 UTC]
For a really crappy one-word-comment; WOW. Just wow.
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nerdgerm In reply to darkfire-kitty [2007-08-25 03:04:25 +0000 UTC]
It's going to be redone.
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ThePumaOfTheNight [2007-08-10 08:54:00 +0000 UTC]
Love the panelling and the coloring and of course the introduction
very well done
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Infinitum-EquusCanis [2007-06-26 13:27:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh shi- it's a him. Sorry. -is embarrassed-
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nerdgerm In reply to Infinitum-EquusCanis [2007-06-26 14:20:22 +0000 UTC]
heh, no problem. Thanks.
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Infinitum-EquusCanis [2007-06-26 13:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Whoa. Your amazing. Really! I love her expression. She got purty eyes.
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InkSplotch [2007-06-21 10:18:27 +0000 UTC]
OMG I LOOVE the begining so far! Can't wait to see more please!!! <3
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OrionsSnarl [2007-06-20 17:29:36 +0000 UTC]
This looks rather interesting! Waiting for next page tommorow O:
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Mustamamba [2007-06-20 15:10:28 +0000 UTC]
this is great O:
i love the coloruing a lot, it's clear and sgafs
this was easy to read c:
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nerdgerm In reply to Mustamamba [2007-06-20 16:54:55 +0000 UTC]
^______^ thanks but jkhff need to fix it.
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swiftred [2007-06-20 03:20:05 +0000 UTC]
i'm intrigued!
...and you also typed "ONE upon a time" instead of ONCE. so y'know.
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nerdgerm In reply to swiftred [2007-06-20 03:31:15 +0000 UTC]
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
figures i'd make a mistake.
oh well, fix it later.
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Kirew [2007-06-19 23:21:02 +0000 UTC]
Its shit! You need to just let people face your work and make you smilE!
JOKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its really good. I wish I had your mad skillge!
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nerdgerm In reply to Kirew [2007-06-20 00:16:44 +0000 UTC]
LMFAO i'm going to beat you up.
sucker.
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nerdgerm In reply to Kirew [2007-06-21 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]
i will.
oh i will.
LMFAO (i actually forgot what i was going to do?)
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DoomyGoodness [2007-06-19 23:20:20 +0000 UTC]
"But before I begin -- like all good stories, I will start with: Once Upon A Time."
I *loved* that line. a;sldjjfkk.
It doesn't look like you spent only 3 minutes on them. Can't wait for moreeee. n_n!
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nerdgerm In reply to DoomyGoodness [2007-06-20 00:16:54 +0000 UTC]
<3 CHERISH MAD WRITING SKILLS THAT I DO NOT HAVE?
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wolfemo [2007-06-19 22:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Kaidan.. is so sexy -fangirlism-
This..
Is so sexy. -fangirl-
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RascalFox [2007-06-19 22:57:46 +0000 UTC]
lovelovelove.
<3 i love your art lmao
EXCITED TO SEE MORE OF THIS
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