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Published: 2005-07-28 18:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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I can't fit the whole title in the title box, "Do not weep maiden, for war is kind." Based on the poem of the same name by Stephen Crane. Somewhat a literal interpretation, but I tried to add a little change to it by having a rather personal connection in the picture. Hence, the dead man grabbing on to the woman's shoulder as a way to guilt her into not forgetting him. No personal relation between the two (unlike the poem), simply trying to force some empathy, rather than apathy towards the death of these individuals.But, if you haven't read the poem:
Do Not Weep Maiden, for War is Kind
Stephen Crane
Do not weep maiden, for war is kind.
Because the lover threw wild hands toward the sky
And the affrighted steed ran on alone,
Do not weep.
War is kind.
Hoarse, booming drums of the regiment,
Little souls who thirst for fight,
These men were born to drill and die.
The unexplained glory flies above them,
Great is the Battle-God, great, and his kingdom,
A field where a thousand corpses lie.
Do not weep, babe, for war is kind.
Because your father tumbled in the yellow trenches,
Raged at his breast, gulped and died,
Do not weep.
War is kind.
Swift blazing flag of the regiment,
Eagle with crest of red and gold,
These men were born to drill and die.
Point for them the virtue of slaughter,
Make plain to them the excellence of killing
And a field where a thousand corpses lie.
Mother whose heart hung humble as a button
On the bright splendid shroud of your son,
Do not weep.
War is kind.
--Poem (c) Steven Crane (his estate?), obviously
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Comments: 16
nerdsloth In reply to scoopninja [2005-08-19 14:29:21 +0000 UTC]
I find that a little offensive, Mike.
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scoopninja In reply to nerdsloth [2005-08-19 15:45:48 +0000 UTC]
you should find that a lot offensive
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nerdsloth In reply to scoopninja [2005-08-21 03:15:55 +0000 UTC]
Grr. Curse your callousness.
Now you've made me mad. You won't like me when I'm mad!...Unless you do...in which case...uh...crap.
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darkcow00 [2005-08-01 03:25:22 +0000 UTC]
nice poem, i also read it in english, good drawing too
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HalfmoonGardens [2005-07-29 22:01:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that poem was weird, very situationally ironic
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nerdsloth In reply to HalfmoonGardens [2005-07-31 02:47:32 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. I like it, though.
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silentglaive [2005-07-29 17:51:23 +0000 UTC]
That is really kind of freaky.
She has a large neck. o____o
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nerdsloth In reply to silentglaive [2005-07-29 17:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Why is it freaky? Is it her neck or the whole drawing, or both?
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silentglaive In reply to nerdsloth [2005-07-29 18:01:53 +0000 UTC]
well the bleeding guy with his arm around her.
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nerdsloth In reply to silentglaive [2005-07-31 02:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Well, the intent is to have a dead person reaching out to her so he is not a forgotten name, rather than a person. It's supposed to be a statement against making casualties of war faceless names who we forget as we go on with our lives......not a creepy dead guy who tried to molest her...no means no.
(He's supposed to be grabbing her shoulder, rather than putting his arm around her, by the way)
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slrfirestorm [2005-07-29 14:29:24 +0000 UTC]
whoa, that girl has huge eyes...........................................................................................................but otherwise, wonderful.
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nerdsloth In reply to slrfirestorm [2005-07-29 17:55:56 +0000 UTC]
The intent was to have larger eyes to be able to show more emotion. I usually give characters large eyes.
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blissychild [2005-07-28 18:20:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thats an awesome poem and a great picture to go with it. Very nice.
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nerdsloth In reply to blissychild [2005-07-29 17:38:07 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you. I just remembered the poem from English class last year.
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