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Aw, I just love this little cutie~ ^^Extremely experimental, an fc for and her "Hazbin Hotel series". It's such a nice concept with a world of creativity. I have always loved the demonic aesthetic and the designs that come from it. So here we go! ^^
Meet Kimberly. Her demonic spirit hold attributes to the mythical jackalope. (Hair puffs like ears, horns, tail, possibly legs) Yes the horns are deer related, but she is not a deer demon like Alastor.
Full Name:
Kimberly Bree Rodman
Nicknames:
Kimmy
Berlybree
Cause of Death:
Car Crash
Cause of Damnation:
Apostasy
Induced miscarriage
Likes:
Helping others
Smoking
Blues rock and Doo wop
Milkshakes
Tap dancing
Sewing
Flowers
Fish
Dislikes:
Psychedelia
Liquor
Feeling ugly
Messing up
Her abusive ex
Hot rods
Cherry Bomb
Abilities:
High Jump
Portal Creation (Demon form)
Personality:
Kimberly is very compassionate to others to a fault. She is very sweet and naive to the point she is easily taken advantage of. A bit of a pushover, Kimberly avoids confrontation by preventing as little argumentative conflicts as possible. This has led her taking up many jobs, many of which outright degrading and humiliating. Later on she grows bored when left all alone and sought a new line of work. One more dignifying. After filling out an ad in the paper, she finds herself with Sir Pentious of all people, who didn't have much intention in her, but figured a couple more hands wouldn't hurt. Kimberly became fascinated in Sir Pentious's work, to which she praised him for. He easily took her validation as a good ego boost. Kimberly has enough knowledge to fiddle with Sir Pentious's creations, ship, and weaponry from past repair work with her father. Most of the time though, she does a lot of cooking, cleaning, and scouting areas for him. Due time with him made Kimberly a bit more confident, beginning to not be such a pushover. She even learned how to handle a high functioning bazooka that he made for her, which she would use against Cherry Bomb.
She gets along with most people who acknowledge her.
She is very friendly to Charlie, Vaggie, and Niffty.
People like Husk and Angle Dust are more neutral. At first Kimberly didn't like Angel, given his relationship with Cherry Bomb, but after some talking, Angel does little more than light teasing as opposed to cruel mockery.
Kimberly does not like Alastor, not that he did anything to her, he just creeps her out.
Background:
At a young age, Kimberly was expected to be the perfect child in a very oppressive society. A traditionally conservative household. Her opinion as a woman was mostly invalid, as she was expected to keep quiet. Kimberly did little to rebel, in fact she always did as she was told. It wasn't long when she started dating a boy who was a real jerk. He was extremely possessive, always telling her she was useless and no one else would ever want her. He was verbally and emotionally abusive, making her feel trapped. One day, Kimberly found out she was pregnant, and suddenly everything was falling apart. She couldn't be pregnant out of wedlock, she couldn't be pregnant while still in high school, but most importantly she couldn't have a baby with her current boyfriend. No one could ever know, or she would be stuck with him forever. In a desperate attempt, Kimberly threw herself down a flight of stairs onto her stomach, causing a miscarriage. Somehow she stuck with her boyfriend for a couple more years. After a huge fight to two had, he finally agreed to take her home one night. While driving, another man drove up beside them and wanted to drag race. Kimberly begged for her boyfriend to ignore him and please take her home. Despite her pleading, her boyfriend ignored her and began the race. He hit a turn too hard and lost control of the car, causing it to crash. Kimberly was killed instantly when her skull broke through the windshield at just 19 years old.
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(Haha yeah! ^^ the 50s slang was pretty good.)
Kimberly placed a rest assuring hand on Ruby
"Hey don't worry. You'll hear no complaints from me, although you seem casual in referring my to a pet. It's kinda demeaning, but enough about that. This my first time being the VIP of, well...anything. Yes Sir that radio fellow has quite the reputation, seems everyone knows him."
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(lol don't worry, I've never been outside a spa let alone gone in one before either.)
Kimberly suddenly felt very self conscious, multiple other hellions were in various stages of undress. Kimberly held her hand at the side of her face and averted her eyes mostly to the ceiling. A public changing away, how unbecoming.
"Oh um, thanks but uh...that won't be necessary."
"Very well, just holler if you need me!" And with that the friendly Ruby stepped from the room to allow Kimberly to undress. She was relieved as the other guests began filtering out. That way at least no one was watching her. She neatly folded her dress and sat it down on a bench. With an embarrassed clearing of her throat, she slowly slip down her high wasted briefs and uncliped her bra. Finally all that was left was her shoes. Kimberly hated taking off her shoes on any occasion. She was tempted to just walk out of the room with only her shoes on, but she knew that was never gonna fly with any of the staff members, least of all Alastor who was probably paying a fortune for this visit, not that she even wanted to participate at all. Suddenly Kimberly jumped
"Everything ok in there?" Called Ruby, who peeked her head in the doorway. Kimberly quickly did all she could to cover herself, her face know a flustered pink
"U-uh yeah!" She sputtered out "Just one more minute please." When Ruby was gone again Kimberly groaned and began removing her shoes. In life all the sinners had normal feet, obviously. In death many of them still due, to a certain extent. Many just got claws, others like Sir Pentious lost legs entirely, but Kimberly on the other hand got something else. You'd expect some for some sort of paw but instead. Hooves. No claws, not even toes. She got big, solid, clomping hooves. Even after meeting someone like Sir Pentious, Kimberly still felt ashamed to even admit she had hooves, let alone show them around. It was embarrassing for her. Putting her grief behind her, Kimberly knew she has to take a robe and leave. Alastor was probably waiting on her. The spa had a large collection of robes to choose some. Some nicely modest, others...not so much. Kimberly ended up picking a nice thick pastel pink that was woven like a quilt. It even felt like one, soft to the touch and it smelled like lavender. Now with her new look, Kimberly exited the room, trying her best to ignore the sharp clicks her feet made to the tile floor.
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(Sorry, when you said bunnies everywhere I mistook that meaning other demons were also there. )
Kimberly grumbled "does it really need to be called a debug bath? That makes it sound like I'm dirty or something." Ruby sorta shrugged, it wasn't like she picked the name for the bath options, not did she even pick it for Kimberly in the first place.
"I'm sorry Ruby, this is all just really new to me. How long do you think until everything is ready?"
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Kimberly had a spark of awe that imediantly broke apart when the angel started bulling Ruby. Kimberly growled and marched her way over. She learned a thing a two working for sir Pentious about how not to be a doormat.
"Hey you! You best be putting that little cutain climber down, or I'll give you a good round. A real shiner. You be itching for a switching treating us like that."
(Edge of what if you don't mind me asking. Also sorry if you wanted Kimberly to beg or something here. I thought about it since she is the character to talk people down, I just love the 50s slang in threats. Also she a trick to get out there fast if she needs too)
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Kimberly rubbed her head to sooth a growing headache. She may have not had it great when she first arrived, sucking up to yucks and yahoos for the chance of getting more comfortable, but this pet thing was really something else. I guess the only way to get anything close to luxury if you weren't already rich, famous, or extremely powerful you had to forfeit your dignity and leash it up to someone who was like a piece of property. The whole thing made Kimberly feel sick, and yet, the idea of such comfort and even safeguarding from Alastor was looking more and more like an upgrade. No one could push her around anymore if that meant Alastor was actually serious on wanting to keep her happy. No one would dare cross her out of fear for such an entity like the radio demon. I mean, Sir Pentious wasn't that far off from doing the same. Whenever she scouted potential area threats for him, any sort of threat to her was slim with Sir Pentious blowing anyone he could away. Kimberly couldn't help but smile
"Ruby! Lets hot foot it to the bath house already, I'm ready to take a load off." Following her directions, Kimberly rushed to bathing area tugging Ruby by the arm.
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Kimberly seemed a little unnerved by the thought of being watched but some sort of freaky shadow creatures. But she quickly put on her biggest smiles.
"That was quite the show you put on Mr. Alastor. Them angels they're...they're a bunch a cads. Uh, what exactly is a debugging anyway?"
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Kimberly took a step back until she laid up flat against the wall.
"Uh you know, I'm not really feeling this anymore. After all I groom my own fur and I can assure you I'm clean as a whistle. Completely unnecessary bug treatment. Lets just forget this whole thing and do something else. What Alastor doesn't know won't hurt him." Kimberly chuckled nervously and she practically sank to the floor.
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Kimberly gritted her teeth as the demons around her scrubbed her fur down the skin. She held the ends of the tub very tightly, one demon grabbed her ankle from under the water and aggressively pulled her up.
"Jeez Louise you big chowder head, every heard bed side manners?" The large demon merely chuckled and pulled out a leather gripped bristle brush
"Relax little bunny, this is the best way to prevent thrush. You ever seen thrush? Really nasty stuff." The demon began stroking the brush deep in Kimberly's hoof. Kimberly bit her lip to fight back the urge burst into laughter.
Oh she thought my hooves are so sensitive. The demon looked up to see Kimberly clutching her hand over her mouth. This caused him to grin sadistically
"Oh? What's the matter little bunny, does this tickle?" The demon continued to stroke the brush all over Kimberly's hoof despite all the squirming. Kimberly could no longer hold back and spurted out an array of fits of laughter.
"Haha- st-stop hahaha, ple-please." Kimberly wriggled as the bristles grazed in her small crevices. The demon finished and switched to her other hoof, all while seemingly enjoying it. Once he finished he stood as Kimberly caught her breath, her body still a bit fidgety.
Her debugging was done. Carl helped Kimberly to her feet and Ruby handed her her robe. Ready for the next step in her spa routine.
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Kimberly was quick to re robe herself, her fur may have looked better than ever but she wasn't so keen are being so exposed.
She was glad all that over and took a deep sigh
"Well Ruby, that whole thing started out pretty rough, but I feel pretty rejuvenated and my fur has never shinned so much. Is that everything?"
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"I'm not trying to be vain, I just..." Kimberly looked down as she fiddled with her hands "I feel- I feel, beautiful for once." She began to say something else but turned away. Ruby placed a comforting hand one her shoulder as they entered the elevator.
"It's ok Kim, I was only messing. I didn't mean to upset you." Kimberly looked up and sighed
"It's just...for once someone took care of me for a change. In life, I was...always told- horrible things. About how, everything was my fault." She turned back to Ruby. "I've never told anyone this, but the reason I'm here was because of my ass of an ex killed me in while drag racing. He's seen me around a few times since. Always acting big, trying to push me around some more, but I've grown past his pathetic intimidation. When I confronted him, he tried to explain how guilty he was and that he missed me. That was a lie. He tried to make it out how lucky I was because he said I would never find anyone else than him. He even tried to point me as the bad guy for never thinking how his life was ruined for that crash. He was mad I didn't think about what HE went through after killing me. For years he made me feel so ugly, so small, so disposable. Even when I never saw him, so many people here just saw me as another nobody. Well not anymore! With Alastor, no one will able to so much as turn their nose at me ever again."
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(Aww thank you! ^^ I really appreciate that~ I'm sorta just going along with what you write. Trying to justify Kimberly going from feeling humiliated by being treated as a pet to having her thinking about how she can benefit from it. Honestly the only thing I could think of from here is Kimberly interacting with Charlie and the others at the hotel and pretty much the weird interactions of the crew reacting to Alastor having a pet. If I were to keep this going from a story point might involve more involvement with Sir Pentious or even Kimberly getting karma on her ex, but slowly learns that being Alastors pet causes everyone to fear her, and a realization that Alastor isn't that different than said ex. Meaning he gets more possessive. Really i think you could maybe do a full on story with Kimberly rather than rp. I would love to read that. ^^ Also btw I'm actually redrawing Kimberly. A sorta redesign. ^^ This whole thing has motivated me to draw her better.
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Oh? Interesting.
Alastor to me is just the mind of character you have to write out of character in any fic for something like this.
"Sounds like a rough gig Ruby." Kimberly thought it over. "Hey, don't worry. I give ol' Alastor a talking to. Even if it doesn't work out with him, I got someone else who may be able to help."
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Ok.
Kimberly scratched her hooves along the floor, not hard enough to ruin the tile or get them dirty.
"So?" Ruby started "how long have you been the radio demons pet?"
Kimberly sighed
"Not long. I actually never met the guy until earlier this morning."
"Really? Well, he just really liked you if he wanted you at first sight." Kimberly cleared her throat, a small blush tinted her cheeks
"Yeah well, what can i say."
Kimberly decided to change the subject by talking a little about what she remembered in life. He parents, her first swing dance, and her favorite flavor of milkshake. One that seemed to make Ruby thirsty. The two agreed when they got the time they'd go out and get some.
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Kimberly stood from the bench clutching her rob
"Good to see you again Mr. Alastor! Did you enjoy yourself?"
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Kimberly's face flushed, some demons could even be heard snickering.
"If- if it's alright with you Mr. A- I mean, uh- master." Kimberly's voice got significantly quieter as uttered that last part of that sentence. "I'll just stick to walking."
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(Don't apologize for for being open. ^^ Im happy to learn. It actually is pretty strange that Alastor hated being being touched but he himself will be the first to touch someone else. I had 1 other rp before this one, it was through notes and was a long long time again. It was never as in debt or went as long as this one and it was sexual pretty instantly. I'm not against sexual rp, but that one had very little buildup and was very short.
I'm 22 almost 23, female. I love all kinds of 80s music. Mostly classic rock and ballads, but i also listen to a variety of music, old and new.)
Kimberly decided not to push any further, but she couldn't help but think over what Alastor said. How one of the most powerful beings in hell had something taken from him and he apparently couldn't stop it? When she got the chance, she would have to ask Ruby more about what a pet meant. She went off hooked to his arm as they entered the elevator to the 3rd floor. Kimberly didn't know what to expect from this upcoming salon trip, but she tried to stay positive.
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Kimberly giggles at the radio demon trying to talk with a mouth full of leaves. This was such a different side from the twisted all powerful deity everyone talked about. She gawked at some gorgeous pink and blood red peonies. Kimberly picked up a bunch ran to Alastor.
"Master! Look at this. Peonies are my favorite!" Kimberly held the bouquet inches from Alastor face. His nose scrutched up and went into a sneezing fit. One after the other, Alastor slightly kneeled over attempting to cover his face with his hand. Kimberly took several steps back holding the flowers close.
"M-master? Are you...are you allergic to flowers?" Alastor struggled to get to contain his sneezes as he inched closer to the exit. He managed to hold them off long enough to glance at her and nod. "I, I didn't even know you could even have allergies after death?" Kimberly put the flowers down and hurried towards the exit with Alastor.
"Oh I'm so sorry master."
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Kimberly placed her hand on Alastor's arm.
"Well master, why don't you just finish the rest of this trip without shoes?"
(sorry it's short, I really don't know where to go from here. Any suggestions?)
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Kimberly looked at Alastor's hooves and practically gushed.
"Oh ho, is that? Come on master, I've taken you as someone who wouldn't worry about such a thing. I mean, here I was thinking my own feet were unflattering but yours are adorable!" Alastor's face blushed to the same shade as his hair. "Check this." Kimberly rose her leg and removed her slipper, showing Alastor her hooved foot. "I guess I never had trouble since I never had special shoes to walk. I just had to walk on my own."
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Kimberly humpfed. She made sure to talk in a low enough voice only Alastor could hear.
"What a big blubbering gorilla. What's ups with all this pet business anyway. I've been held up in this hell joint for over half a century now, and I've never heard high tell of such a thing. Who decides whether pets can be taken and given at will?"
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Ruby: All I really know is that demon is kown as 'pet inforcer'. And their job is to make sure we pets don't hurt our masters. Now if your excuse me, I'll be rite back.
Ruby left and Alastor lifted his head and smiled at you.
Alastor: 50 years huh? Well I've been here close to 90 year and have had 5 pets. Your my sixth. And I still don't know a whole lot about the rules. I do know those 'pet inforcers' have the power to take away my teleporting powers. So if they take you away, I can not stop them nor can I go after you. Even I have my limits.
Ruby came back pushing a big and tall white chair with wheels on the side. It was beautiful and look very comfortable.
Ruby: Here master. If you really are having trouble walking your pet can move you around in this. I do it but I can't really see where I'm going. I'm to short!
Alastor: What a wonderful idea, thank you Ruby. But Kim dosen't have to wheel me around. I got something one for that.
Alastor got up and sat in the chair. Then his shadow double appear behind the chair and it's has on the handles.
Alastor: Now then. Let's get are hair done!
Kimberly: Uh sure master. But did you really mean it when you call my hooves beautiful?
Alastor blush and turn his head away from you. You found yourself finding him pretty cute right now.
Alastor stuttering: Um, well, um, oh, hee, hee. That is...
Alastor put his hands on his cheeks and radio sounds started coming out of his mouth instead.
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Kimberly winced slightly at the high pitched static sound, but giggled a little under her breath.
"My apologies master. You're such a charmer." Kimberly ended her sentence in a much more sensuous voice than before. "I will try my best to keep those no good enforcers from suspecting any trouble." Kimberly proudly stated. "I'll be straight and narrow, I'll do whatever you ask me, my master." Kimberly still wasn't too big on the idea "master" and "servant" but even she knew she was better off with Alastor than any other demon. At least he seemed like he wouldn't hurt her. "Let me push you in the chair, after all, a good pet should be doing everything they can."
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The shadow step out of the way and bowed to her. Then it talk to Kim. The shadow's voice sound alot like Alastor's but more raspy and strain. Like Alastor has been talking for a long time with out any water.
Shadow: You have to forgive master. I'm sure he thinks your feet are pretty but heres the thing. ( leans in and wishpers in your ears) His VERY shy! It's a deer thing. So maybe try and not ask him such things. Unless you want to see him blush!
The shadow laugh and went into Alastor's shadow under the chair. It ws pretty creepy.
Alastor: Well, shey we go then?
Kim push Al into the salon. It was easy. Al was so light and the wheels were good. The salon was nice and big but no one else was in there. You were greeted by a female angel. She was taller then Alastor and had long blonde hair on the right side of her head and shave on the left.
Her wings are big white on the top with red and black feathers on the button. She had on red lipstick anyway black eyeliner.
When she turn around to greet you and Al, you felt him sink back into the chair. He did seem happy to be greeted by a angel. The female angel had a very plasnet voice.
Angel: Hello and welcome to the 'hair & fur & and & make-up palace'. My name is Bon-Bon, how can I help you sir?
Alastor a little bit nervous: Uh, yes. Hi Bon-Bon. I would like for my pet to have the cute-dess hair ever! As for me, I just want something new.
Bon-Bon: Right away sir. Push him this way and fallow me.
Kim fallow Bon-Bon and brought Al to the sink to get his hair wash. Al sat there waiting for someone and Bon-Bon gave you a smock to put on and sat you down in a hair. Ruby stood with Al as he ask her to. You set in a chair.
Bon-Bon: Your hair is already clean so you don't need the wash. Oh Fronswall!
A cute teddy bear like demon came out and walk up to you and Bon-Bon. He was very cute, look just like a big stuff toy.
Bon-Bon: Her master want this one to have cute hair.
Fronswall: Oiu. My special-yow. Let's see.
Fronswall began looking at you.
Fronswall: Hmm. Let's start by brading your ears. That be cute!
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Kimberly gave a big smile
"That sounds nice. Um, you're not gonna cut my hair though are you? I've had it this way for so long."
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Fronswall: Well, yes. It's fine but it can be cuter! It's see what I can do.
Fronswall started brading your ears. It didn't hurt. As he did, you look over at Alastor gettng his hair wash. A tall imp was doing and seem to be really enjoying it! Most of all his ears being rub and wash. He was almost making a O face.
The bare then move on to your hair and as soon as Alastor was done, so was Fronswall.
Fronswall: There. Tell me what you think.
He turn you around. Your ears where real cute braded with pretty ribbons and bows in them. Your or rather your tuff look like a cupcake. Big and fluffy.
Alastor: Oh! I app-sue-lee love it! Just love it! How is it Kim? Not to heavy I hope.
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"Not at all master! I think it's wonderful! You really like it?" Kimberly held her hands together in her lap and her legs stretched out in front of. Trying her best to look cute. She had never pampered like this, so was enjoying it.
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Alastor: I do, I really do. It's so cute! Maybe I should go for cute.
Fronswall: I happy to do your hair. We really need to do something with ears.
Alastor: Oh, really? I've tried but ( grabs ears and pulls them down) I can't do a thing with them!
Alastor puts on a smock and sits in and chair as Fronswall gets to work on him. He sits very still but giggles ever now and then. (his ears are very ticklish and sensitive) Soon Fronswall was done. He turn Alastor around for Kim to see him. Instead of Al's normal straight hair, it was all curly. Just wall to wall curls. Like a lamb or dog. And he had pretty red ribbons on his antlers.
Alastor: So? What do you think? Is it the new me?
( Another fan theory of mine. Alastor dosen't like being touch because his shy. Also deer are natural shy animals. So that's why I think Alastor is shy. Out side of radio.)
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Kimberly slightly covered her mouth a giggled.
"It's certainly a new look. You look adorable."
(I can see that.)
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Fronswall turn the chair around so Alastor can see himself.
Alastor: Hmm. I don't know. ( looks closer) Ah. I am cute! But I don't know about the ribbons.
Fronswall: Ok. Let's try this.
Fronswall puts on bat pins in the middle of the ribbons. They we're cute.
Alastor: The'er cute but I don't know.
Fronswall then puts on lighting blots now.
Alastor: Hmm. Dosen't scream me.
Now Fronswall puts on human skull pins.
Alastor: Better. Do you have them deer?
Fronswall: Uh, no. I'm afraid not. How about these?
Now Fronswall put in old timey radio pins.
Alastor: Oh, I love them! There perfect!
Kimberly: Yeah. That's the look! It's...you. So now what?
Ruby's tablet beep. She check it.
Ruby: Oh, a spot just open up at the manddie peddie's. They can you both now!
Alastor: Aw, at last. Let's not keep them waiting. (looks at Fronswall) Thank you very much for the new looks.
Fronswall: Your very welcome! And how about a tip?
Alastor gave him his V.I.P. card and he swipe it and Al put in a lot of money. You saw. You said goodbye as you left with Alastor and Ruby. They told you and Al to come back anytime! Kim head tores the elevator and Ruby told you to press the sixth button and she will gide you from there.
Alastor: That was fun! I having a really great with you Ms.Kim. I hope you are with me. Sorry about before. (rubs back of head) I get kind of shy with stuff like that.
Alastor blushess and looks away from you.
( I don't know about you but I love shy guys. So cute.)
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