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Published: 2006-10-24 03:28:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 769; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 2
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Description Really backed out of a background on this one. *laugh* To be honest, I'm not sure if this doesn't belong in scraps, but I have a fondness for shiny things. <3

Riza Hawkeye. Lady with style, authority, and guns.

Can anyone offer a critique on the body proportions or perspective?

FMA (c) Arakawa Hiromu.

Materials: Ink, Photoshop
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Comments: 10

KamikazeChipmunk [2006-10-27 23:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Zomg. Oo; Riza Hawkeye is so fraggin' hawt in this piece of artwork. XD And yes, I'm allowed to say that. ~.~ Anyway, /great/ job. I love the shade you used for her lips and her eyes. You've officially inspired me to draw fanart of her. X3 Thank you for submitting!

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bluekipod [2006-10-25 16:57:55 +0000 UTC]

nicely done! i always wanted to draw her with that same wardrobe but i couldnt get the pistol body strap thing figuered...anyway it looks really well thought of and studious ,concerning the anatomy. i think the only that looks a bit weird is her nose.. i think u'd want to widen it just a bit to the left of the pic.. aside of that i really like the hand, a simple yet an always cerrect linework..

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G-manluver [2006-10-25 00:15:55 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is amazing. sorry if I can't offer a critique I'm not really good with humans myself.

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BlueFlamedPhoenix [2006-10-24 22:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I've got nothing on the perspective/proportion but I hink her forhead is too shiny considering there is hair above it.

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kickarsedrumma [2006-10-24 03:42:15 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Well, proportioned and it's less flat looking than a lot of other works I've seen around here. I'd say that with the degree and style of shading you've done that you might want to add a little bit more texture to her skin and fabric. As far as contrast with the background, the only thing I would suggest to make the outline of her arm a little less noticible to avoid the layered look.

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HellHellCat [2006-10-24 03:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely. I just love the detail in her eyes.

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HidekoDahlia [2006-10-24 03:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Riza! Riza's awesome.

The shading on this is great! Very 3-dimensional. As for body proportions and perspective, I'd say everything looks just fine. The only thing I can find that is a little weird is the hand. It looks a tad bit small or something... Oh, wait, I think it's the pinky that's bothering me. Okay.

Great picture, even if you think it should be in scraps. Sometimes the best pictures are the fast ones. Kudos!

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NinjaMunkey [2006-10-24 03:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I absolutely love her in your style. Personally I think you did a great job with the perspective: fave ^^

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lonemustang15 [2006-10-24 03:29:58 +0000 UTC]

I like the pose ^^

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BrokenRozez [2006-10-24 03:29:15 +0000 UTC]

Agh, Riza~!! :dancebunnydance: +fave

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