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NerezaWorks — Constructive Criticism Requested WIP
Published: 2013-07-22 01:42:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 997; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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this is a work in progress of a commission I been working on for months for Volfenstu on FA
(I probably move this to scraps after I have the finished image up)
As noted some things aren't rendered or lighted properly as of yet, Still that being said I'm looking for help to try to make this picture more lively and in any way better.
I'm looking for not just for criticism but constructive criticism so more then "this looks off" tell me why and what could make this image better.
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I made a few changes off of some advice given to me by my family as well as some artistic changes like the Armour and shield trying to give it more of a heroic fell still looking for additional support or advice though so fell free say something if you see anything I could change to make it better
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Oh, my, god!
I can't even think of criticizing this Lena, this is amazing!!!
Oh my gosh! I would so buy this and frame it!
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your to kind thought the critic is more then welcomed I'm looking to improve on it so if you have any advice your more then welcomed to speak your mind I wont take it personally ^^
and thank you by the way I might be selling it as a print once it finished if ever I get a table at a con I hopeing t get a table ether next year or the year after..
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nice work so far c;
so let me take a look at this
I would tray to make the image focus point more visible,
using saturation and value
so desaturate the background a little, it is stealing ti focus to much, at least for me
multiply layer and darken the dragon wings, it feels a little bit chaotic there
then dodge layer on the flames to light them up a little
and overlay layer to bring up the wolf a little (I would push him into blue tones a little to make him contrast the whole picture)
then highlights on the wings screen layer I guess
and then the endless detail polishing =.=''
so thats what I would do with it at this point, just to focus the viewer on the main action in the picture c;
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thanks martin for your help I keep your advice in mind wile finishing it ^u^
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