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NeroScottKennedy β Strange Potion Part 11
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Published: 2017-05-10 03:13:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 79601; Favourites: 532; Downloads: 498
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Another part is here, if you saw some grammatical errors just tell me, my english fails sometimes.More parts coming.
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Thank you so much!!!.
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your welcome buddy
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You cannot blame Emily's friend for beign worried I'll be worried too...if Emily stopped growing. She like everybody else wants to see Emily continue growing.
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Yes, she is just a good friend hehe.
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Actually this is the best one grammatically so far, the only thing is the last balloon should be 'let's go find some new clothes'.
I understand this is a comic and you don't have room for too much elaboration but until this page it kind of feels like all your characters tend to be withdrawn and not very talkative, or did you make them that way?
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Yeah, i did it that way, but maybe i have improve the script because Β thanks you mentioned that detail, i feel the comic is going too fast.
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I think you are right there. Β The question is how big of a story are you telling? Β What is the end goal? Β Since if we go too many more pages you already have enough pages for a small comic book XD. Β
What you are trying to do should determine how fast/slow everything should be. Β For example if this is going to be how her life adjusts and her becoming like a heroine with her new strength you are going a little fast
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Hehe, is a nice question, i have in my mind what will happen with Emily but i'm still have to write the future of her friends, but my objetive is finish this comic , because i want to do more stories and fanarts, including improve the quality of my drawings.
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Well the objective of finishing the comic can have more than a few outcomes so its really kind of your choice what that is.
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her friend needs to start drinking potion too!
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Yes! It would be really nice to see a size comparison to her friend right about now while her growth spurt continues.Β
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Off course they will
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Loving how this is going, I wonder how will she find new resistant clothes lol
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Thanks , just wait
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Loving the sequence. Hope it continues some moreΒ Β
(the grammar nazi in me is saying: "I drank" instead of "I drinked", damn irregular verbs, and "I felt more energy in me", then again you could also say "I felt more energy coursing through me". Hope I helped Β )
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Oh thanks, i'll fix that issues
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Hopefully she'll give up on trying to cover her sexy body.
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And once again, the clothes have been defeated!
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Clothes revolution!!! XD
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