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NeroScottKennedy β Strange Potion Part 2
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Published: 2017-03-18 01:40:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 68844; Favourites: 593; Downloads: 509
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Second part now with dialogues, i hope you like it, help me to continue with this comic.ΒRelated content
Comments: 32
I'm guessing she's starting to feel her muscles build up
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2nd part was good, cant wait to see how strong she gets..
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I hope she gets a new growth sourt right in front of her friends : 3
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I hope that the potion doesn't pump her up too much more. Β I find it fun for the girl to have obvious muscle while resting. Β She can go hyper muscular when she flexes. Β That makes it more of a surprise.
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Don't worry she won't be so bigΒ
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Thanks for the second page, and I really like how you drew it. Also, I'm getting the sense that, throughout the page, the potion's effects are slowly but surely buffing her up, especially since the second and third panel shows her with defined pecs and arms, as well as a somewhat visible traps near her neck, and the last one (and the implied dialogue in the second for the former) shows that her back and her legs are getting defined and larger. Really, the effects and ensuing muscularity makes me wish that I would have some of that potion.
Also, thanks for adding some dialogue on her thoughts, since it makes it somewhat more interesting. Plus, I gotta say, I really like her personality. Even I would agree that a new and muscular figure should be shown off. It'll be interesting to see what happens next for her. I could imagine that she would grow more muscular to the point of outgrowing her clothes, getting clothes that show off her new physique and just generally showing off her muscles to her friends or impressing her crush, among other possibilities.
overall, outstanding job so far, and I can't wait to see more.
(By the way, what was the potion supposed to be a medicine for? Also, is it just me, or am I getting a tomboyish vibe with her, especially with her style? Just what is the best way to describe her?)
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Oh you are the first to notice about the dialogue, thank you, yeah i'll star to add more personality with dialogues, and i made one mistake doing the first part ,i did it so fast that the comic looks without context , sure i'll try to fix the problem during the story .
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I'm thinking in the part 3 right now
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Oh I'm sure she's in for some more surprises.
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I like it so far. Hoping she bulks up more in front of her friends.
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Same!Β Great stuff so far.Β
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