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Published: 2008-09-15 22:22:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 16
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Okay, this is something I'm working on... I'm postin' it here to hopefully get critiques so when I do the bezier version of it I can change stuff and make it better.The assistant is supposed to be bringing the Prof his briefcase, but she trips and knocks him over and it ends up like this
I'm sure the size of Turtwig is wrong LOL but just ignore that.Please tell me everything that looks bad and wrong D: And don't just say "all of it" even though that's true!!
Dawn (assistant girl) and Rowan (Professor) are characters from PokΓ©mon's DS games. In the cartoons Dawn is a coordinator and not Rowan's assistant -_-;
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Hmmm...her head looks a little big, and on both of them I can only make out one leg (so they look a tad disabled >_<
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Oh thanks. I had noticed the leg thing before but forgotten. I was going to draw another of Rowan's legs sticking out (having only one of them bent) but I wasn't sure how to make Dawn look like she had more than one leg. Maybe just draw a little of another behind?
And thanks about pointing out her head being big XD That's gonna be a pain to fix but I can try ^^ I think I can manage to leave most of the hair where it is and redraw the head. Her giant hat is not helping her head size either XD But just from her face, her head looks even bigger than Rowan's which isn't right at all XD
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Thanks a ton!!
If you can see anything wrong/off/awkward/etc about this pic btw, let me know so the final one can be better ^^
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okay ^_^ but i dout there will be anything wrong/off/awkward/etc about it 83
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Huuum^^ Nice design again, the scene is cool^^
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Thank you
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