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newkidwithoutbraces — Harder and Harder
Published: 2012-07-24 18:48:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 6
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Description It's getting harder and harder to leave you.
Perhaps I should just not see you.
I'm feeling too much.
I'm getting too close.
It's getting harder and harder to leave you
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Comments: 3

Shyanne-Kai [2012-07-25 20:11:39 +0000 UTC]

This is exactly what I'm feeling at the moment. You've really got the right words here, and though it is simple, there is a lot of passion coming through. I also like the absence of the full-stop

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newkidwithoutbraces In reply to Shyanne-Kai [2012-07-26 06:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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jonskiigator [2012-07-24 22:29:29 +0000 UTC]

The absence of a full stop in the final line is very effective, sort of leaves the piece hanging and creates a questioning, trusting but also doubting, and hoping kind of atmosphere...

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