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Warworld, Throne Arena...

Black Hood, Zach, and R'iva appear via a teleport inside a grand hall where a broken throne stood.

R'iva, noticing that Black Hood and Zachary were with her, praises, "oh thank H'ronmeer, I'm not alone again."

Constantine seeing the differences from last time,"The hell is Superboy?"

"Lisa's not here either," Terry comments out loud.

On the other side of the hall, two Durlans appeared alongside a humanoid in green armor. R'iva, taking a look at their most likely opponents, says, "I know those are Durlans, but I can't tell what species that woman is."

Black Hood activates his detective vision, "Considering she's not snow white but has similar biology to Kasador, I'm gonna assume she's Almaracian. Shall Magic Man and I take on the Durlans?"

"Almaracian's are dangerous telepaths. Yeah, I'll take her," R'iva agrees.

"If you say so, mate," Zach responds, as he conjures two mystical circles of energy around his hands and takes a stance of combat. "Let's go!"

The Durlan pair moves forward, as they both begin to shapeshift; one transformed into a squid-like monster with razor-sharp teeth in its jaws, while the other transformed into a bull-like creature with a hardened crest at his head. The transformed Durlans charged forward at surprisingly fast speeds, forcing the three youngsters to evade to the sides.

Meanwhile, the Almaracian had a long-pole halberd, and she rushed toward Zach who had evaded to the side. Fortunately, R'iva intercepted the warrior woman by tackling her. R'iva shapeshifting her arms and legs to wrap around the Almaracian in an attempt to suffocate and force her to pass out. But the Almaracian would not be taken down so easily, she got a visual contact of a portion of R'iva's limbs and unleashed her optic force beams.

"Aaaeeeh!" R'iva screams in pain as the beam hit her, forcing her to let go as she tended to her arm that had been hit.

The Almaracian warrior woman looked at R'iva, saying, "you're fortunate, young one. I don't kill children. So I'll only leave you and your friends beaten." She proceeds to spin her long-pole, activating it to reveal flames at the end and swipes at the Martian. R'iva, unsure if the flaming halberd was activated by psionic powers of the alien woman, split in half avoiding the fiery end of the weapon. The Martian slithered through the ground, passing the Almaracian warrior underneath and coming from behind.

"Will your friends show mercy to mine?" R'iva remained on alert.

"I hardly know those Durlan fools personally, but they aren't so keen on showing mercy. Now stand still," the woman responds, as she wings her weapon once more*

The Martian kept evading every strike from the Almaracian until she finally concentrated her eye-beams and fired knocking the warrior woman back. The woman grunted in pain, but was still in the game and got back up rushing back with her alien speed at the Martian Girl. R'iva maneuvers to the side, but then shapeshifting extra tendrils to grab the Almaracian while she was running forward. Anchoring her feet to the ground, R'iva then pulled one the warrior and kept swinging and swinging until finally throwing her to the wall. R'iva winced hearing the blunt crash of her throw, "Sorry!

Over with the boy's, the mage was firing mystic beams at the Durlans, while Black Hood uses special gauntlets that give a shocking punch to the Durlan he was fighting. The Durlan being fired upon by Zach, shapeshifted into a serpentine creature to easily evade each magical beam.

"Little snake," Zach muttered, as he concentrated his mana to his palm, places his hand on the ground. "Dnuorg nrut ot eci!"

Spreading from Zach's hand, the surface of the ground began to form into ice, making it difficult for the Durlan slither forcing it to change shape into a giant winged insect with razor blades flying up into the air.

"Eci nrut ot retaw dna tsalb pu!" Zach speaks his spell, extends his hand from down to upward towards the flying Durlan. "ezeerf!"

Water shoots up like a waterfall falling up and engulfing the Durlan, as soon as it did the water froze up trapping the Durlan in the block of ice. The Durlan falls from the air, and because Zach was merciful, he extended his hand toward the falling ice block and called out.

"Pots!" Magic light surrounds the frozen Durlan, and Zach carefully places him down. "Done."

As that was going on, Terry battling his Durlan, kept sticking the Durlan that was in the shape of the bull, the shock-gloves electrocuting the shapeshifter. The Durlan growled in pain, so he then changed shape into a gorilla-like brute and using its massive arms to swat Black Hood away. Black Hood grunted as he fell back to the ground, but quickly got back up and leaping up to avoid the incoming Durlan smashing down with its fist. While lunging back in the air, Terry aimed a remote claw back at the Durlan and fired. The claw was fired and latched onto the Durlan, while the second claw attached then took aim and fired off to a high vantage point. Activating, the remote claw pulled the Durlan up slamming into the pillar.

Terry smirks, "got ya."

The Durlan groaned and then pulled itself out, turning around and looked furious. Roaring, the Durlan brute rushed back at Terry, but Terry flung two electro-batarangs that immediately shocked the Durlan, stopping it in its tracks. Electrocuted with high voltage, the Durlan changed back to its original form and fell face flat.

Terry looked and saw that his two friends had also dealt with their own gladiators

Warworld, Arid Plains Arena...

Kairos, Lisa, Martin, and Donnie have teleported into plain grassland with hills all around.

"Hey, where's Terry?" Lisa asks, looking around not seeing her first partner.

"Perhaps Mongul has decided to mix up our teams," Martin gives the explanation.

"Stick together. We don't know who we're facing yet," Kairos commands.

Donnie looks to Kairos, "Really? I thought the plan was to split up so they can pick us off!"

Teleporting in the distance, four Tamaraneans and a Dryad appear. The Tamaraneans and the Dryad at first appeared to be confused at the other species being close up to one another, but after listening to something through their collars, it was made clear the two species would fight together against the four heroes.

"Tamaraneans and Dryad. They-," Martin, unaware that two of his peers were already well knowledgeable about alien species, was interrupted.

"One is Starfire, the other is big and strong," Lisa simply puts.

Martin looked at Lisa, "Somewhat apt."

Kairos assessing the situation, quickly gives the layout, "Martin, with your power ring limited in power, then you're going to need to conserve energy, so stay on the ground. The Tamaranians will be using their flight ability and numbers, so Lisa and I shall take the sky. Lisa, your suit can absorb solar radiation?"

Lisa answers, "I have several generations built in, but I guess I can."

"Tamaraneans are solar batteries, but not at the high degree as Kryptonians. You may be able to drain their energy," Kairos urgently suggested.

"And what about me, "fearless leader"?" Donnie asks with sarcasm at high.

Kairos looked at Donnie with annoyance, "can you fly?"

Donnie quickly replies, "Dude, you know I can't fly- ."

"Then handle the Dryad with Martin!" Kairos interrupts with his voice raised up.

Donnie spooked by Kairos, paused a moment until finally, "well, I'm still faster than you."

"The Sol System Heroes versus the Tamaran Natives and Vorg the Dryad Knight. Let the fight begin!"

The Dryad slammed his fist into the ground and roared, while the Tamaraneans screamed their war cry and flew up.

Kairos looks at his opponents, and with his peripheral vision sees his teammates prepared. The Kryptoamazon draws out the sword he purchased with his points, and shield up on guard, Kairos then roars, "Attack!" With that, Karios makes the first strike, jetting into the air to intercept the Tamaraneans.

Two Tamaraneans were rushed by Kairo ramming into them with his shield as a battering ram. With his sword, Kairos lunges it into the shoulder of a Tamarenean, The warrior screamed in pain, as Kairos then uses freeze breath to cover the Tamarenan's face in ice forcing him to fall to the ground unconscious.

The Dryad stomped his way over with his massive sword at the ready. Martin uses single shot blasts at the Dryad, but the Dryad shrugged off every blast as he then proceeded to sprint toward the Blue Lantern. The youngest Blue Lantern would've flown up into the air to avoid the charging rocky humanoid, but Shockwave comes speeding through swiping Martin out of harm's way. Stopping at a good distance, Donnie drops Martin off and says, "Now YOU stay here. Rock people are too dangerous."

Martin, realizing this was a payback to their last fight, gave a dry response, "Ha. So what are ya going to do?"

"Imma punch him, REALLY hard," Donnie replies.

Martin quickly assumes a technique that was well known to be used by individuals who mastered speed, "Infinite Mass Punch?"

"Like I can do that, yet. Just super sonic really," Donnie finishes and runs further a distance, stopping and readying himself like a sprinter at a track's starting line. And then, Shockwave sprints at the Dryad, striking him and causing a large shock-wave. But little to no avail, the Dryad's durability was superior enough to tank the punch with only a couple of loose 'pebbles' from his face crumbled off. Donnie, then felt sharp drawback pain of his attack, grasping his fist and screams, "Ow!"

The Dryad chuckles, as he raises his sword and to cut down Donnie in half, but Martin yanks Donnie away just in time from being cut down.

"Are you alright?" Martin asks.

Shockwave rubbing his hand, as the Speed Force's healing acceleration was taking effect on his hand, "Yeah, I'll heal. Man, that guy's solid!"

Martin thinks for a second, "Perhaps this will help." Makes a construct around Shockwave's hand.

"And this will help… how?" Shockwave asks, still not catching on.

Martin, not impatient with Donnie's ignorance like Kairos, politely responded, "For a Speedster, you are wasting time."

Shockwave looks at the construct in his hand, and finally realizes, "Right!" Repeats the Super Sonic Punch and this time knocks the Dryad away. And dozens of pieces of the stoney Dryad broke off from the impact.

The Tamaraneans in the air were blasting at Kairos and Lisa. Kairos blocking the blasts aimed at him with the shield, being made up of an alien alloy hard enough to withstand the blasts only at a limited level of power. Kairos closed the distance in quick time using his speed, so he was now close up to a Tamaranean ramming the orange skinned humanoid with the shield.

"Stay with me, Lisa!" Kairos shouted his command to Lisa.

Lisa, struggling to keep up, stopped midair and remained a distance to use her long distance weaponry instead, "You're going too fast!"

While Kairos was overpowering the Tamaranian with his superior strength, the other three aimed their efforts to Lisa. They rushed towards her, and Lisa now had three solar-powered alien warriors to deal with. Lisa blocked an incoming strike with her left arm and fired a pulse blaster from her right hand, but the third grabbed her from behind in a rear neck choke.

The Tamaranian sympathetically said, "I'm sorry, little one, but Warworld doesn't play nice." The alien warrior proceeds in putting pressure on Lisa's throat.

Lisa tries escaping, but the other two Tamaraneans begin raining hell on her from the front. The red-headed girl would surely have been knocked unconscious or worse if she didn't get out. Thankfully, a savior arrived;

A Tamaranian that was in front of her got hit by a flying shield to the head, stunning him until he was hit once again by a swift swinging kick from Kairos attacking behind. The other Tamaranean turned to face Kairos and swung a punch at the young Kryptoamazon, but Kairos used his smaller size to his advantage in evading and ducking. Kairos unleashes a powerful force of air using his super breath, pushing the Tamaranian back to the ground and eventually getting frozen in a block of ice. Kairos drew his short sword and faced the Tamaranean holding Lisa from behind.

The Tamaranean glares at Kairos, grasping Lisa, "stand down or this one parish. Believe me, I don't want to."

Now that Lisa was not being hit, she had the opportunity to trigger her suit to start siphoning the solar energy in the Tamaranian. The Tamaranian began to feel his strength dropping unable to hold the ginger in her power suit. Thus allowing Lisa to break free from the rear naked hold, turning around to face the Tamaranian and then bonking him in the head forcing him to collapse down to the ground below.

Donnie and Martin make their way over to the two, Lisa asks, "You done?"

Martin looks to a panting Donnie, and answers Lisa with a nod, "We're good."

In that moment, they are teleported out in a gleaming light.

Warworld, Intensive Cell...

Donnie falls down in exhaustion, "I had enough. I'm calling it quits."

Kazador who was doing sit-ups, responds, "then you either die or get thrown to the comfort batches. I myself am not into dudes, but I met some bastiches who wouldn't mind taking you, streaker."

Kairos stares at Kazador, not amused with his humor of endangering his teammate, "back off."

Kazador snorts, stopping his sit-ups, stands back up on his two feet seeing Kairos staring back at him, "or what, tough guy?"

R'iva looked at Kazador, sincerity in her eyes, not wanting anymore conflict, says, "please, stop."

Kazador looks at R'iva, and feeling moved, shrugs and sits back, "You freshies gotta get used to this."

"How can you act so chill about this?" Lisa asks Kazador.

"All these years in this damn place, it kind of gets numbing. Plus, I also have a little fun out of it," Kazador nonchalantly answered.

Drones teleported in with lunch and refreshments, and after setting them down the drones were teleported out. Everyone gathered up around the platter to replenish their strength and keep their stomachs full. Kairos, requiring sit-rip, looks to Terry, "I'm assuming your group fought more difficult opponents this round, Terry."

Terry, first looking at what seemed like a flaming egg, responds to Kairos with a simple, "Yeah."

"Then we have to assume the next round's difficulty will be greater," Kairos stated, as he rubbed his chin in thought. Then looking at everyone, "We need to come up with proper strategy and tactics."

"But they changed our group at random. They might do the same next round," Zach pointed out, as he drank a cup of water.

"Then let's be prepared for any possible rosters," Kairos responds, as he then begins mapping out names on the dirt of the floor. "We need to map out each of our strengths and weaknesses."

Donnie looked at Kairos with irritation, "Hold up. Who made you boss?"

Kairos looked at Donnie with a stern look, "someone needs to take lead and control."

"So you assert that someone is you. We are all equals here," Martin declares, allowing his dish, a floating spaghetti monster to float away, only to be caught by Kazador with his bare hands and devours it.

"In times of crisis, the Roman Senate voted one of their consuls to a dictator, granting emergency power, and allowing the temporary dictator to make all the necessary decisions and take actions until the crisis was dealt with. My comrades, who is going to be the Caesar?" Kairos asks after the brief explanation.

"Are you forgetting what happened to Rome?" Martin asks rhetorically, referring to the tyrannical dictatorships and expansionist legacy.

"Becoming the most enduring empire in human history that had also developed the foundation building blocks of Earth's civilization even to this day?" Kairos responded back.

Donnie still not keen on following a hardass like Kairos, gives his suggestions for leadership, "what about Terry or Lisa? They're smart."

Lisa, flattered at Donnie's nomination to her, states, "dad is showing me how to manage the company."

"B-but, we're not in an office or anything like that…," R'iva meekly points out.

Terry decides to weigh in his nomination and says, "dad's been teaching me to be smart in combat. Worked lots of times with Tim, Dick, and Damian."

"You have always been a team player. Not in a lead role," Kairos explains.

"Hey, I still got smart tactics," Terry defensively replied.

Kairos shrugs, "I'm not denying that."

"So between a business girl, an in closet-furry or a warrior prince. I'll go with the warrior prince," Zach gives his vote, and R'iva nods adding, "Kairos."

"Well, what about Martin?" Donnie points to his best friend. "He rolls with the biggest space cops in the universe!"

"Rolling is not leading," Kairos quickly debunks. Looks at Terry and Lisa, "Have anything to weigh in."

"Hmph... Yeah, I guess you'd be the best choice," Terry admitted, while Lisa answers, "Take it away, oh fearless leader."

Kairos smirks inwardly, as he gives a simple nod and says, "back on track, we need to sort out each of our roles; Zach, you're our mystic, so we have to assume there will be other mystical creatures to face, so you take charge on that.

Zach quickly replies, "We're in a giant alien warship the size of a planet floating in space. If I get to see a leprechaun, Then I'll be jolly."

"I like unicorns," R'iva happily says.

"Pfft! People who like unicorns have never met one. They are jerks!" Zach quickly states. Then adding an experience, "One called me big nose."

Donnie shrugs, "Well you do have a decently big nose."

Kairos looks at the rest of his comrades, "R'iva, you're our telepath. Like your dad, you're going to keep us all connected for efficient and secure communication. Martin, you have more knowledge of the alien species, so keep us updated. And stay close to Donnie, conserve your power ring energy."

Lisa, seeing she was being left out so far, assumes what Kairos would suggest for her, says, "If you make me the I.T. girl I'm going to kick you."

Kairos was unmoved by Lisa's threat and replied, "You wouldn't hurt me. Terry, you're my second in command."

Terry nods, content with his position finishes saying, "Well, now that that's through, we need plans for a formation."

Kazador interrupts, "And you mind keeping it down? I'm trying to get some sleep here."

Everyone looks toward Kazador, who is now laying down on the dirt floor.

"Again?" R'iva asks.

Kazador tosses and turns on the dirt ground and replies, "All my points are void. I can't get any entertainment. Hell, they took away my rubber ball."

Kairos looking over at Kazado thinks for a moment, and then decides, "Kazador, why don't you help in our escape?"

Kazador sighs, having had this same talk with other slaves, responds, "Listen, freshies, I've been in Warworld for more than five years. I've done my part in trying to escape, and I'm still here. Don't expect to be bail out of here in less than 48 hours."

The young heroes become weary at this sudden realization, while Martin is the first to speak up, "You mustn't lose hope, brother."

"You take too much hope to raise you up, but when it bursts it is a hard ass fall," Kazador states, sitting back up leaning his back against the wall. "I still want to get out of this place, but you all have gotta bide time."

Kairos reflecting Kazador's suggestions then brings up a proposition, "That's it. You've been here longer, but with us here to give you a hand, we can get out."

"I've made dozens of escape attempts yeah. I could make it out. But's these damn collars," Kazador points at the collar of his neck. "It may not kill me, but still hurt like a mother-fragger."

Hearing Kazador's last statement, Lisa came up with an idea, but she needed to confirm, "So you really cannot die? Like a Czaranian?"

"I've been able to heal the wounds given to me. Stomach gut, heart exploded, impaled from the buttocks up... it hurt like hell...," Kazador cringed at the experiences of fatal injuries he received.

"That's it!" Lisa shouts in excitement, Terry also catching on, quickly says, "Me and Lisa cannot tamper with our collars because we could get killed, but you, you cannot die, and we can see how the collars work and then free ourselves."

Everyone began to nod and anticipate the solution to their escape, while Kazador stared in dumbfound at their suggestion and quickly interjects, "... You want me to be zugini pig? Frag no!"

"Kazador, we can get the collars off," Kairos tries to reason.

"Yeah, but that zhut fragging hurts like bastich!" Kazador growls.

At that moment, R'iva had silently approached Kazador's side, and placed her hand on his arm, causing Kazador to look at back at her. The Almara-Czaranian looks at the Martian girl, whose eyes looked sincere, scared, and begging. R'iva quietly asks, "Please... You'll see your mom again..."

Kazador stuttered and fidgeted, as R'iva kept looking to him and mentioned the only other person who truly loved him in a home where he was unwanted by pompous fools. The young gladiator finally sighs, giving in, "Fine..."

"Alright! Well, be out of here and back home!" Donnie celebrates. Kairos quickly shushing Donnie, "We still need to be ready for any fights to come."

Lisa approaches Kazador, while Kazador walks up to the halfway point going as far that his energized chain would allow him to move. Kazador sits back down on the ground, as he looked anxious and irritated, knowing what he was in for. Lisa walks to the back of Kazador, inspecting the collar;

"Maybe open it through here."

Ejecting a screwdriver mechanism from her suit's finger she pokes a gaping of the collar, and with that Kazador is immediately electrocuted.

"Graah!" Kazador growls in pain body tensed up until collapsing back into the floor dormant.

R'iva, Lisa, Donnie, Zach and Martin lean over Kazador who seemed to be unconscious, or rather;

"Is he dead?" Zach asks.

"Hmm... give me a stick to poke him with," Donnie demands to everyone.

Kazador sturs and groans with a mutter, "I'm not dead..."

R'iva kneels down to Kazador, placing her hands on Kazador's face caressing them, "You're very brave for this. You can do this."

Kazador a bit intruded by R'iva touching him, jerked his face back instinctively, "Yeah, whatever."

Martin senses hope to raise up through each of his teammates, which sparks hope in him too and finally realizing, "Guys, our hope can maintain power in my ring."

Kazador deadpanned response, "Hope isn't making this collar hurt less."

"Well, if you want I can use my light to sooth the pain," Martin suggests.

"Fine, but don't touch me. I hate people being around me," Kazador says.

Kairos sits back down on the ground and began to draw out marks on the ground each indicating each of his fellow young superhero friends. The Kryptoamazon was preparing positions and lineups for any of the further battles to come. For Kairos knew if the last fight was more difficult than the first than surely their next fight would be treacherous. Terry walks up to Kairos, looking at the formation drafts Kairos has prepared.

"Need a hand?" Terry asks.

"Input from you guys would be helpful," Kairos nods to Terry's offer to help, all while Kazador screaming in pain from his collar being tampered with.

"Graaagh! You said you would sooth the pain!" Kazador roars at Martin.

"Sister Lisa started before I could do anything," Martin meekly says. "I apologize fo-"

"Just give me some fragging hope, bastich! This zhut hurts!"



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Comments: 290

NextGenerator In reply to ??? [2018-02-12 13:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Which action movies would those be?

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-12 21:29:53 +0000 UTC]

John wick, where he spared an asassin girl, megaton being spared in the animated transformers movie, 

darrdevil sparing king pin 

Basciallly most action movies in general

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-12 21:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Consider the setting? Look at where the protagonists are. They're being forced to fight for the entertainment of corrupt individuals in the universe. They're fighting other captured enslaved people that are being forced to be gladiators. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-12 22:47:14 +0000 UTC]

True though but it's often a trope in action movies where the protagonist or antagonist spares a certain someone only for them to regret it in the end.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-12 23:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Can you explain that trope here? A gladiator tries to kill another gladiator but loses and is actually spared. Does the spared gladiator have any grudge to kill a fellow enslaved fighter for showing mercy? 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-12 23:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Nope, but in some action movies it did, watch John wick you'll see what I mean when I said sparing someone will bite them in the end.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-12 23:25:08 +0000 UTC]

I've seen it, and it's a completely different circumstance to here. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-12 23:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it is different. It's just that any thing is possible I mean it is possible for the guy who hold a grudge on his/her sparer in a gladiator arena for not finishing him or her off making it humiliating in the persons perspective.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-12 23:32:25 +0000 UTC]

There are bigger problems for the young heroes to worry about then some gladiator who's upset for being a sore loser. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-12 23:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's true I'll proceed to read part 2 once I'm finished preparing for the quiz.

 
I wont deny your fan fictions are giving me ideas on what to do when I come up with a story.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 02:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Glad they're an inspiration to you. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 02:29:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm just thinking of an idea on how Achlys will encounter a lycan I want to make it a slow development 

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 03:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Don't have to make it too slow development. These chapters I have so far are only flashbacks. I'll be posting skits of the Next Gen heroes, and even origins of heroes to show up. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 03:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I see.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Yup. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 03:22:02 +0000 UTC]

By the way what are you gonna do in Valentine’s day

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 03:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Valentine's Day is just an over glorified day in the year for businesses to capitalize on people's 'love' and for whiny single people to feel sorry for themselves. So essentially, it's just another Wednesday to me. I may have a substitute assignment for that day, I may use the day to finish a book on the history of the Texas Revolution. But for sure, I'll be joining a community group with members at my church. 

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 03:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Dang you’re tough, every Valentine’s Day I get super sad, wrathful and envious of people with a partner because in my school my classmates always talk about their partners, it got to the point where every time I’m dismissed I leave as soon as possible

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 03:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Let me share with you some words about love and happiness.

Matthew 5:3 "Blessed are the poor in spirit: for theirs is the kingdom of heaven."

1 Corinthians 13:4-5: “Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs."

"If you wish to be loved, then love." - Lucius Seneca

"Very little is needed to make a happy life; it is all within yourself, in your way of thinking." - Marcus Aurelius

Ask yourself, is it truly love you seek, or just the physical enjoyment of being with someone? You yourself say you're envy, so have you forgotten the ugliness of envy? Put your faith and trust in the Lord God, and meditate with your emotions. You have control of your soul and choices, and you have the choice to be sorry for yourself or seek true love. Find love through companionship of others. Perseverance is a community effort. Find other fellow believers and may they help bear your burden and you do the same, and cherish their fellowship. God wants you live as Christ, but have you seen Christ complain about not having a girlfriend?

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 04:32:09 +0000 UTC]

I admit, you are right that I shouldn't be envy, and wrathful in Valentine's Day and that I should learn to control emotions, whenever I see people older than me from middle age to old age I see that they're single and lonely and died without someone with them I was like "is that my faith?" I admit I was terrified

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 05:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Faith is belief. You mean fate. What is wrong with not having a girlfriend? There are plenty of people who remain chaste and celibacy and remain happy with their lives.

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 05:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Every person is different bro, just because one guy is ok with being single or not won’t mean the rest will, but yeah I’ll take your word for it, emotional control and having faith.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 05:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Your gallery of favorites certainly speaks otherwise of who you put your faith in.

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 05:14:34 +0000 UTC]

My gallery of faves, yeah I admit I fave galleries involving love, humour to put faith in myself

Though I’m flattered that you visit my page at least sometimes

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 05:22:36 +0000 UTC]

That's not I am referring. I see you fave provocative pictures, same-sex relations, and other inappropriate images that a Man of God should stray away from.

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 05:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh that, yeah I fave those to feel better about myself. But yeah eventually since I put faith in my religion that would also mean having to remove them soon.

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 13:20:30 +0000 UTC]

You feel better by looking at provocative images? That deters you hermano.

"but I say to you that everyone who looks at a woman with lust for her has already committed adultery with her in his heart." - 5:28

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 13:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Damn I've been sinning a lot, I faved the photos because I wanted to show that I didn't care about women being closed minded and so fixated on their fantasy world that bad Boys would make better boyfriends

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NextGenerator In reply to Mordecaiser123 [2018-02-13 14:22:12 +0000 UTC]

While in doing so you live in your own fantasy world by just watching these images?

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Mordecaiser123 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 20:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I guessso

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Xenomaster [2018-02-04 17:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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NextGenerator In reply to Xenomaster [2018-02-04 17:29:17 +0000 UTC]

You okay with the slight editing on characters were specialized with? Or any pointers?

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Xenomaster In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-04 17:38:10 +0000 UTC]

As far as I can tell, it's ok. Heh, nuggets

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DanielJHowe [2018-02-04 10:37:10 +0000 UTC]

I like the progression, keep it up man.

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NextGenerator In reply to DanielJHowe [2018-02-04 17:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man.

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DanielJHowe In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-04 21:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see what follows in upcoming chapters!

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NextGenerator In reply to DanielJHowe [2018-02-04 23:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Shouldn't be too long for the next chapter to be posted.

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DanielJHowe In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-05 10:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Very good!

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darkvslight346 [2018-02-04 05:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Good work man, It was really interesting to see how desperate the parents are getting and how the next gen characters are starting to adapt.

I do have a few problems about the grammar though, you forgot to  capitalize a few quotes like this for example  "oh thank H'ronmeer, I'm not alone again." Other than that I enjoyed reading it and I'm waiting to see how their plan to get out works

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-04 06:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Had to show the perspective of the parents and their loved ones.
A case of character development too. Martin was too protective of his friend, R'iva is terrified, and Kairos is trying to take charge.

Yeah, my mistake there. Thanks for the pointer, hermano.

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darkvslight346 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-05 04:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it does delve in more into their characters, one thing I also enjoyed was that we get to see the contrast with Kasador in this chapter and the   Christmas special.  It's going to be interesting to see how he changes.

No problem man. I've made that mistake in the past. A recommendation i've gotten was once I finish a chapter is to wait for one  to two days and then go and correct the grammatical errors. Mainly because once you finish a chapter your mind is so eager to send it out it over looks some minor errors. As in I started writing a new story, I read the first chapter three times once I finished writing it, but I read it again two days ago and found some errors i overlooked.

Oh btw in the last chapter you brought up a few weapons, what I could make out was Crescent rose from RWBY, the second was either the Buster sword or Gut's dragon slayer, the third was a key blade, the only one I couldn't figure out was the last one, what was it?

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-06 03:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Yup. I'll be sure to show Kazador's process of change and improvement. 

I'll take that into practice. 

Oh, the last one was just a generic completely impractical blade that I couldn't really describe. cdn.mos.cms.futurecdn.net/3ecb…
But besides that, you're the second person to notice the teases I put there. 

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darkvslight346 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-07 03:41:32 +0000 UTC]

I did a reverse image search of it and it turns out that it's a sword called "chaos's Revenge' from final fantasy, I'm honestly not surprised their weapons look cool but are way too impractical to be of any use. 

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-08 04:32:00 +0000 UTC]

I will admit, I have a pet peeve for these classical bladed, blunt, longpole weapons being designed being impractical, no matter how 'cool' they look. 

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darkvslight346 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-09 03:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Honestly one of my favorite  fictional sword is the Master sword, not only does it look cool it's also looks practical enough to be used as a sword. 

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-10 04:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the Master Sword is actually practical. With a few modifications, like the thickness of the guard being thinner. But yeah, it is pretty practical. 

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darkvslight346 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-11 00:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Excalibur from fate/stay was another good one. It looks good and works well.

Oh btw I've got a design for Orion so it's easier to see what he looks like typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Arthur… This was one of the original concepts for Saber before they decided to gender swap her.

Just imagine that but replace the hair with black hair similar to that of Gohan's in his mystic form and with Orange eyes. We've established a few times that Orion looks very similar to King Arthur and since he is related to saber this design made the most sense.

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-12 02:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, I am familiar with that version of Saber.

In the RP, The godly Gilgamesh is different from servant Gilgamesh having higher power being from the Skylands where the mythological gods dwell, but he still has the same personality and beliefs as the Gilgamesh that showed up in Fate series. Gilgamesh is conspiring with the master of the Seven Deadly Sins

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darkvslight346 In reply to NextGenerator [2018-02-13 03:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Personally if I could make one change I'd want Orion to be more buff, something inbetween Goku and Vegeta, but Orion tends to wear bigger clothes so he looks skinnier than he is. He wants People to think he's a pushover because it's way more fun to their their reactions when they realize  "Oh shit he's actually really strong."

Oh Nice, he knows the real reason B.Orion came back so he wants to kill him because of it. So does that mean Hyperman-Kairos will be coming in soon or will that be when B.Orion get's his memory back. 

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NextGenerator In reply to darkvslight346 [2018-02-14 03:44:10 +0000 UTC]

You know, Superman actually uses a disguised method similar to that. Or at least it's emphasized in All-Star Superman. Superman as Clark Kent wears baggy sports jacket and pants, hunching forward, and tucks his neck in to give off a chubby face. Showing that Clark Kent is in mediocre shape. 

Gilgamesh was only given what the master of the sins has planned, and by getting a glimpse of the future, Gilgamesh only knows now that Kairos will go rogue as Pride. 
Hyperman-Kairos will appear after B.Orion's memory comes back. 

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