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Published: 2018-12-31 09:53:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 189693; Favourites: 938; Downloads: 256
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I spend about a week on this one, but I think it was worth it. This is probably the most extensive project I've ever done, since it involved so many different characters, poses and angles. With all the MHA GTS stuff I've drawn recently (and all the stuff out there), I thought it would be funny to show how Mt. Lady would react to other heroes stealing her gimmick.ΒI would also like to thank , who not only proof-read it, but also suggested some story changes, as well as the structure. I was originally going to split this into two pages like I did with the Wasp comic, but this worked a lot better. What do you think?
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(Note: I haven't watched My Hero Academia yet, but I do know a little bit about the characters represented here.)
This is a really cute comic with a great premise! Let's see, where to begin...
I'll start with the two issues I see and get them out of the way. The first one is pretty minor: in the sixth panel, Mei's right arm appears to be positioned in a very awkward, unnatural way. I can see what position you were going for, but the end result looks almost like her arm is broken. This is a bit of a nitpick, though, and the only reason I bring it up is because all of the other poses in the comic are well executed and look natural with just the right amount of exaggeration.
The second issue, which is a little more significant, is the dialogue bubbles. They're all identical, which makes it difficult at first to decipher who's saying what, specifically in panels 3 and 4. Otherwise, the bubbles and the dialogue are perfectly fine.
Now with those out of the way, the characters are drawn very well and, from what I can tell, stay true to the art style from which the characters originated. The backgrounds and foregrounds are simple enough not to be distracting yet with enough going on that the setting is clear. The comic as a whole is clean, orderly, and well put together. Technique gets 4.5/5 stars.
Originality is an immediate 5 stars for the story. It's hard to find giantess images that give something new, but you did a very good job steering into the characters of Mt. Lady and Mei and using them to make a convincing and fun plot!
Similarly, vision gets 5/5 stars for similar reasons. The main characters of this comic and their personalities stand out and make the comic cute and fun!
The impact gets yet another 5 stars, though this one is trickier to explain. For one, I got a warm, fuzzy feeling from panel 4. The pose, the interaction, the facial expression, the context -- everything in that panel just works so well together! Additionally, the scale literally increases as the comic progresses. It starts with normal-sized people, then demonstrates some building-sized giantesses, and reaches a planet-sized giantess while adhering to the story.
All in all, this is a very well made comic page that is certainly worth a read! You did a great job!
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I very much appreciate. How would you suggest improving the speech buble issue? Mabye you could be a bit more specific about how to fix the arm issue.
Also, the show is definitely worth watching.
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Sure thing!
The bubble issue could be solved by differing either the speech bubbles or the speech font in some way. Color is a good option as long as the text is still easily readable. A good example of the use of color is Herretik's Little Punk Control comic:
He uses a different font color for each character, and makes it even more clear by corresponding the font color to the respective character's hair color. Of course, this could apply to outfit color, eye color, or anything that would help tie the colors together -- it's entirely up to you.
There are plenty of other ways to distinguish dialogue between characters when speech bubble tails aren't present. Like with anything else in drawing, imagination is the only limit. ^_^
As for the arm issue, I believe you were going for a hand-on-chin thinking pose for Mei. Here's a decent pose reference I found online:
previews.123rf.com/images/remaβ¦
The main difference between the pose in the linked image and Mei's pose in your comic is the elbow position. Lowering the elbow so that the forearm raises into more of an upright position will make the pose as a whole work a lot better.Β Β
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I see. I thought that the text boxes were easily to distingious based on their content (like the use of the phrase ''baby'' in one of them). Maybe I can make them different colors, like making Mt. Lady's purple and Mei's pink (or maybe adding Mt.Lady's horns to the sides to stylize it a little).
Thanks for the reference material. It was suprisingly difficult to find reference material for that pose, so I just used my imagination.
Your feedback has been very constructive. I wish I got more comments like this.
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Not planning to make a direct sequel.
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Just not interested right now.
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Oh well, you were overrated anyway, Mr. Lady. X)
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I see. Thanks.
Good work on those MrEnter videos by the way. Interesting to see someone who works with him enjoying my work so much.
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You have to make sacrifices to stay on topΒ Β
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On top of the world, that is.
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Is there a better place?
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For her, I don't know. For everyone in Japan, definitely.
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I don't know, they are protected from the cold, from threats from space, from invading countries, Japan looks like a great place to be in right now!
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You can just copy this idea and make similar with rita farr
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What characters would I replace the others with? Also, Rita is not the only size-changing woman in the DC universe, so it wouldn't work as well.
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It was a script, not a critique.
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A critique actually comments on and evaluates a work of art. Just look at the critique I allowed here in case you want an example. You can't use the critique function to post random stuff.
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Funny comic with a good premise and great art 
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We need more giantess tsuyu giantess tsuyu is life like Bob Ross and Stan lee
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This is absolutely amazing. I really love the story here of Mt Lady reclaiming her title as the biggest heroine, giving payback to her fellow heroines for stealing her gimmick. I love seeing all the MHA girls as giantesses and using their quirks while at a larger size, so I absolutely love this, especially seeing Mt Lady becoming an even bigger giantess!
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Thanks for the feedback.
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I think Mt. Lady won't have to worry about losing her license since the UA is most likely destroyed. Is there a limit, though?
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She has probably reached it by now. Also, UA isn't the one handling the licenses (I don't think she even went to that school), that's probably the job of the government.Β
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Well, the Japanese government would have been mostly destroyed since her butt's covering most of Japan.
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Makes me wonder a few things. Including if you will ever do a piece based on the latest Wasp (Nadia Pym/Van Dyne)
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That would be fun, hope to see it one day.
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I have only one word for this: AGAIN.
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In which way?
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What would happen if she's given a second dose of the gun's power?
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Probably nothing good.
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